Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 14, 2024 |
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** Reviewer #1: 1. The point prediction method mentioned in the paper has enhanced detection in both high- and low-density regions, but adaptability in complex scenarios is still a concern. Is the introduction of more training data or the use of data augmentation techniques considered to improve the robustness of the model? For example, training the model with different lighting conditions, weather changes, or different viewpoints may make it perform more robustly in real-world applications. 2. How to further improve the detection accuracy in dense crowd scenes is an important research direction. The multi-scale feature fusion module mentioned in the paper is already a good attempt, but is it possible to explore other detection methods or optimize the existing framework? For example, it is possible to consider combining other deep learning models (e.g., the Transformer architecture) to enhance the feature extraction capability, or to introduce self-supervised learning methods to further improve the performance of the model. 3. The model mentioned in the paper directly predicts header points during inference, which may affect real-time performance. Is it possible to optimize the computational efficiency of the model for real-time monitoring while maintaining accuracy? 4. It is mentioned in the paper that the method can be applied to the counting of other objects, such as vehicles and animals, in the future. Are there any plans to conduct relevant experiments to verify the effectiveness of the method in counting different objects? In addition, is it considered to combine the method with behavioral analysis to provide a more comprehensive monitoring solution? Reviewer #2: This paper presents a novel approach to crowd counting using contrastive learning and point-based detection. While the work shows promise and addresses important challenges in crowd counting, several major issues need to be addressed. Strengths: - The paper addresses important real-world challenges in crowd counting - dealing with complex backgrounds and multi-scale targets. - The authors provide comprehensive experiments across several datasets to validate the proposed method's effectiveness. - The experimental results show the approach's state-of-the-art performance. Suggestions: - The current experiments and analysis do not sufficiently demonstrate the contribution of contrastive learning. Please provide more thorough validation and ablation studies. - The paper organization needs significant improvement. Important technical details are scattered and sometimes unclear. - Since the paper focuses on a real-world problem, the computational complexity analysis and comparison should be considered. - Please provide more detailed explanations and annotations for the figures (e.g., figure 1, 3, 6) - Current literature reviews missed some recent works on local-global feature fusion and point/feature matching in visual learning, including [Transflow: Transformer as flow learner, 2023][Fusioncount: Efficient crowd counting via multiscale feature fusion, 2022][Lightglue: Local feature matching at light speed, 2023][Superthermal: Matching thermal as visible through thermal feature exploration, 2021], etc. ********** what does this mean? ). 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Dear Dr. Cao, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Your manuscript presents a well-structured analysis, but a few areas require minor revisions for improved clarity and consistency. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 20 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Towards Real-world Monitoring Scenarios: An Improved Point Prediction Method for Crowd Counting Based on Contrastive Learning PONE-D-24-51986R2 Dear Dr. Cao, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ayesha Maqbool, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
| Formally Accepted |
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