Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 18, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-52566The serum vitamin D levels alleviate the influence of dietary inflammation on frailty: a cross-sectional analysis in the U.S. older adultsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wang Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please go over the reviewers comments and address all the points they raised. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 12 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this paper, the authors conducted a cross-sectional analysis of older adults in the United States to explore the mediating role of vitamin D in the relationship between dietary inflammation and frailty. The findings have major implications for public health and nutrition in the aging population. lt is an interesting work, and the following issues need to be addressed before the article is published: revisions.1. The introduction seems to be long and could be further shortened so that readers can grasp the core content of the study more quickly. For example, the third and fourth paragraphs could be integrated into one paragraph. The Discussion section should refer to the latest literature in the past 3-5 years to explore in more detail how serum vitamin D levels mediate the relationship between DII and frailty and how these findings relate to existing theories of immune and inflammatory responses. revisions.3. In lines 154-155, "Ratio of family income to poverty (RIP)" should be changed to "Ratio of family income to poverty (PIR)". Please see the full text. revisions.4. Please add a flow chart of the study participants to this article. revisions.5. What is the basis for the adjustment of confounders included in this article? In addition, it is recommended that baseline data such as BMI, diabetes, and hypertension should be included. revisions.6.In the future, further prospective studies are needed to determine the exact relationship between DII and frailty. Reviewer #2: The manuscript titled "The serum vitamin D levels alleviate the influence of dietary inflammation on frailty: a cross-sectional analysis in the U.S. older adults" presents an important and relevant contribution to the field of nutrition and aging. The study explores the mediating effect of vitamin D levels in the relationship between dietary inflammation and frailty, which is a timely and significant topic given the growing interest in strategies to mitigate frailty in aging populations. However, before this promising study can be accepted for publication, several revisions are required. These modifications will help enhance the clarity, rigor, and overall quality of the manuscript. Below are specific suggestions for revision. In several instances throughout the manuscript, the authors use the term effect, such as in the objective stated in the abstract: "The current study aimed to explore the mediating effect of vitamin D levels in the link between DI and frailty." However, since this is a cross-sectional study, causality cannot be determined. Therefore, it would be more appropriate to replace effect with relationship or association to better reflect the study design and its limitations. Methods I suggest that the authors provide a more detailed explanation of the parameters used for frailty classification. Clarifying the specific criteria or thresholds applied in the frailty index would improve the transparency and reproducibility of the study. I suggest that the authors specify which sampling weight was used to ensure the representativeness of the data, given that the study is based on a complex sampling design. Including this information would enhance the clarity and validity of the statistical approach. In the Statistical Analysis section, I suggest including additional covariates that are relevant confounders in the relationship between vitamin D, frailty, and dietary inflammation. Specifically, I recommend incorporating an adiposity parameter, such as weight or preferably BMI, as well as a dietary intake parameter, such as total caloric intake. These variables would strengthen the analysis by accounting for important factors that may influence the observed associations. Table 1 (Participant Characteristics) is missing important parameters that would allow for a better understanding of the sample. I suggest including weight, height, BMI, and dietary intake variables, such as total calorie intake, protein, carbohydrates, total fats, and fat subtypes. These additions would provide a more detailed characterization of the study population and improve the overall interpretation of the findings. ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . 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PONE-D-24-52566R1The serum vitamin D levels alleviate the influence of dietary inflammation on frailty: a cross-sectional analysis in the U.S. older adultsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 21 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Everson Nunes, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Dear Authors, Thank you for all your work on improving the manuscript and assessing the reviewers' comments and questions. I am please to accept the manuscript once one very minor thing pointed by one of the reviewers is fixed. Please check reviewer 3 comments for that. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Dear authors - "Ratio of family income to poverty (RIP)" should be changed to "Ratio of family income to poverty (PIR)". In some places, still "RIP" is used for ratio of family income to poverty. Check throughout the manuscript. ********** 7. 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The serum vitamin D levels alleviate the influence of dietary inflammation on frailty: a cross-sectional analysis in the U.S. older adults PONE-D-24-52566R2 Dear Dr. Wang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Everson Nunes, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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