Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 8, 2025 |
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The article introduces a hybrid approach that combines genetic algorithms with fuzzy neural networks to assess bank risk in international trade operations. This proposal is ambitious and very timely, as it starts with recognizing that conventional methods face difficulties in dealing with the complexity and uncertainty that characterize global transactions. It is particularly positive that, right in the introduction, the paper presents clear justifications for the adoption of techniques such as fuzzy logic, which help avoid local minimum and calibrate network parameters. This methodological combination has the potential to appeal to both researchers interested in more robust solutions and banking professionals looking to reduce losses in the financing and settlement of international operations. Despite this relevant contribution, there are aspects that could be further developed to consolidate the academic soundness of the article. The review of FNNs (section 2.2) extensively describes the structures and technical variants, including classic models such as ANFIS, compensatory networks, and combinations with optimization algorithms. However, this exposition reveals some limitations when analyzed in the light of the study's objective—the assessment of bank credit risk. Although section 2.1 details traditional scoring and risk modeling methodologies, no transparent bridge is established with the proposal based on FNNs. The application to the financial field is only mentioned generically, without any concrete examples or specific metrics such as the probability of default or loss given default being presented. The methodological sections (3.1-3.3) present the principles of GA and FNNs but remain generic. It would be essential to specify more precisely the optimized network parameters, the optimization's specific objectives (e.g., error minimization or accuracy maximization), and how the optimization contributes to performance improvement within the particular context of bank risk analysis. Some passages of the review also end abruptly and with a lack of internal cohesion, jeopardizing the exposition's flow and clarity. The work would also benefit from a broader framework on the state of the art in hybrid systems, going beyond mentioning FNNs and GA. Including a comparison with other metaheuristic techniques, such as PSO or DE, would help better contextualize the choice of genetic algorithm. Although point 4.2 mentions the application of PSO and SA, this reference comes late, without justifying the importance of their comparison in the previous sections. A more explicit link between the theoretical foundation and the study's applied field would reinforce the approach's relevance. About the description of the model, it would be helpful to detail how the fuzzy rules were defined, how many were used, and with what criteria. On the GA side, the absence of specifications on initial population values, mutation rate, crossover, or stopping criteria raises questions about the reproducibility of the method. The inclusion of these elements would not only allow replication by other researchers but would also strengthen the comparison with competing approaches. From an evaluation point of view, the almost exclusive reliance on accuracy or recognition rate limits the interpretation of the results. Given the multiclass nature of the problem, it would be advisable to present a confusion matrix and metrics such as F1-score, sensitivity, and specificity, which would make it possible to better gauge the behavior of the model—in particular, whether it tends to underestimate the highest risk class. The article is also unclear on what criteria were used to split the data into training, validation, and testing sets and does not state whether cross-validation was employed to enhance statistical reliability. The article fails to explain whether the model remains stable during periods of high volatility or if it requires frequent re-training. The graphical presentation of results needs substantial improvement in addition to these concerns. The figures presented in Figures 4 to 9 lack descriptive axis labels, which are necessary to explain the values shown in the plots. The presentation of results using standardized statistical methods would greatly improve both the scientific credibility and the interpretability of the empirical findings. The discussion section describes the methodological aspects of the study rather well, but it is too descriptive. The lack of information about how the datasets performed differently or how the data structure affects the model's ability to predict makes this section less useful for analysis. Some elements that appear for the first time in the conclusion, such as the influence of variables on performance and the need to broaden the indicators, would have been more appropriate in the discussion. This would enable the conclusion to concentrate more on the main findings of the study, the acknowledged limitations, and the directions for future research. Reviewer #2: Overall, the manuscript is technically sound, and the data support the conclusions, but with a few considerations: 1. Scientific Methods: The manuscript applies Genetic Algorithm (GA) and Fuzzy Neural Networks (FNN) for risk assessment in international trade settlements. Both methods are appropriate for handling the non-linearity, uncertainty, and optimization tasks involved. The method description is reasonably detailed. However, I think there needs to be a clearer explanation of the pros and cons of each method to compare with the application of the GA-FNN method. 2. Experimental Design: Three well-known datasets (Bank Marketing Dataset, Lending Club, and German Credit Risk) were used. The authors performed comparative experiments against baseline models (RAROC, LR, BPNN, SVM, FNN) and alternative optimizations (SA, PSO). This structure is good and strengthens the credibility of the claims. 3. Controls and Comparisons: Proper comparisons with traditional methods and alternative optimization methods are included. However, some baseline models (RAROC, LR) could have been described more thoroughly in terms of parameter tuning. 4. Data Quality: Public datasets from Kaggle and credible sources are used. Data cleaning and preprocessing are mentioned, but some details (exact feature engineering steps, handling missing values) are not fully elaborated. 5. Statistical Rigor: The performance is evaluated mainly by accuracy in a multi-class risk classification (high, medium, low). While this is acceptable, additional metrics such as confusion matrices, F1-score, or AUC would strengthen the statistical validation. 6. Support for Conclusions: The results consistently show GA-FNN outperforming baseline methods by ~2%-5% across datasets. The claims made in the conclusions (higher recognition rate, GA being more effective than SA/PSO) are supported by the empirical data (see Figures 5–8 and Table 1). 7. Potential Weaknesses: - Limited discussion of limitations (e.g., scalability, generalization to unseen trade environments). - No discussion on computational complexity or resource consumption. - Minor concern about overfitting, as all models seem to perform quite highly across datasets without cross-validation results being shown. Reviewer #3: I appreciate the title selected for investigation, but there should be some improvements under abstracts and methodology section basically. On the abstract, one will expect the following items clearly presented 1. Statement of the problem in one or two lines 2. Title of the srudy 3. Objectives 4. Methods 5. Basic findings based on the objectives and major findings On the other hand, the methodology section should show clearly the study area, target population, sample size or number of observations, if there, the type of the model, if applicable, ethical considerations...should be clearly presented ********** what does this mean? ). 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Design of an evolutionary model for international trade settlement based on genetic algorithm and fuzzy neural network PONE-D-25-18703R1 Dear Dr. Tu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ardashir Mohammadzadeh, Phd Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: I am pleased that the authors have now fully addressed the comments made in my last review, and the resulting paper is better structured and cleaner for the reader. I would still encourage the authors to revise one specific aspect in Section 4.1 (Experiment Setup). The authors have fulfilled my previous request by adding particular details about the dataset split. The manuscript shows that the data was divided into training (70%), validation (15%), and test (15%) sets, but the rationale for this choice is not explained. It also remains unclear whether the split was random or stratified by class and whether a fixed random seed was used. I recommend clarifying the splitting strategy and indicating the seed, if applicable. Reviewer #3: As one of the first evaluators, and including the other two reviewers' comments, the authors reflect on the questions raised from all and for the comments, they revised kindly, for me its good enough to publishing in this journal ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Zewdu Eskezia Gelaye(Research Assistant Professor of Accounting and Finance) ********** |
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