Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 17, 2024 |
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Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Well done to conceive of this study and the for writing up the study. You have stated that the goal of the study is not clear as to "examine" barriers to telehealth adoption at a particular regional setting in Iran, but it would be important to summarise what is already known about some of the barriers to adoption of telehealth worldwide and in Iran itself, and then localise it to the hospital setting. Just because some barriers are identified at the provider level does not mean that addressing them will increase adoption of telehealth by the providers or patients. The views of patients or who will use telehealth would also be important, and is missing in the manuscript. The results of the study are not generalisable and cannot be applied to other situations or indeed it is doubtful if the results can be used in the wider context of Iran for that matter. In the methods section, you have not indicated any theory on the basis of which you drafted the questionnaire. For example, "Technology Acceptance Model" (TAM) is widely used for investigating adoption of technology and identification of barriers, and the questionnaires and instruments have been validated. Why such models were not considered in this case needs to be explained in the Methods section. In the methods section, you have only provided item-level content validity score, although you have seven subscales. You need to provide scale level content validity index as well. What the Cronbach's alpha measured in this context is not clear, as Cronbach's alpha is used for a scale but as you have not mentioned development of a scale as such, you may want to explain the scale development process in details. In the Methods section, you wrote you sent an electronic questionnaire to the doctors who would have to access and answer them. How did you make sure that the doctor completed the questionnaire, not the doctor's son or daughter or the doctor's assistant or a student or someone other than the doctor completed the questionnaire? How did you guard against that possibility? In the Results section you have written 70% of the target audience responded to the questionnaire. What happened to the remaining 30% or 70 doctors. Why did they not participate? This information is important for understanding the significance of the results. Secondly, you have mentioned that there were 7 factors and 63 questions with different number of questions per factor. Now, you have reported factor level correlations, but these correlations were driven by item level correlations. it is important to report the factor structure first, before factor level reporting. It seems that you may have conducted confirmatory factor analyses but you have not specified which items did which factor load on, and therefore this factor level correlations are uninterpretable. If you conduct a formal structural equation model with a confirmatory factor analysis of the items, then it might be possible to interpret the results of the findings of your study. Reviewer #2: Corrections, Comments, and Suggestions Below is an assessment of different sections of the manuscript: 1. Introduction Strengths: � Provides a clear background on the importance of telemedicine. � Discusses the challenges specific to Iran. Suggested Corrections & Improvements: � The transition to the research objective could be clearer. The last paragraph should explicitly state how the study addresses the gap in research. � The importance of the study should be framed in a way that highlights how it contributes to policy recommendations or future implementation strategies. 2. Methods Strengths: � Clearly describes the study design, setting, and population. � Provides details on questionnaire development, validation, and reliability testing. Suggested Corrections & Improvements: � The ethical approval section should explicitly mention whether written informed consent was obtained from participants. � The statistical analysis section could benefit from a more detailed explanation of why specific tests (Pearson’s & Spearman’s correlation) were used and how they align with the study objectives. 3. Results Strengths: � Well-structured, with clear presentation of findings. � Use of correlation analysis adds depth to understanding relationships among barriers. Suggested Corrections & Improvements: � Consider adding a figure or chart to visually represent the correlations between barriers for better clarity. � The demographic table (Table 1) should be formatted to ensure all categories are properly aligned for readability. � Some percentages in Table 1 seem inconsistent or misplaced (e.g., "11-20 years of experience" percentage appears incorrect). 4. Discussion Strengths: � Compares findings with prior studies from different countries. � Provides practical recommendations for addressing barriers. Suggested Corrections & Improvements: � Some points are repetitive (e.g., legal and financial barriers are discussed twice in slightly different ways). Consolidation would improve clarity. � While discussing financial barriers, the role of insurance companies in telemedicine adoption could be further elaborated. � The study implications should be expanded to include how policymakers and hospital administrators can implement change based on these findings. 5. Study Strengths and Limitations Strengths: � Recognizes methodological rigor and policy implications. Suggested Corrections & Improvements: � The limitations should discuss potential bias (e.g., self-reporting bias due to the questionnaire-based nature of data collection). � A future recommendation for qualitative interviews with physicians could add depth to understanding the barriers. 6. Conclusion Strengths: � Summarizes key findings effectively. � Suggests actionable solutions for overcoming telemedicine barriers. Suggested Corrections & Improvements: The last sentence could call for further research on solutions rather than just stating that future studies should focus on removing obstacles. Consider mentioning specific policy changes that could enhance telemedicine adoption in Iran. Overall Assessment Strengths: � Well-organized and methodologically sound. � Identifies multiple dimensions of telemedicine barriers. � Provides actionable recommendations. Areas for Improvement: � Improve clarity in transitions (especially in the Introduction and Conclusion). � Consolidate redundant discussion points. � Add visual elements (charts or tables) to enhance readability. � Address minor formatting and statistical explanation gaps in the Methods and Results sections. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Arindam Basu Reviewer #2: Yes: Mekides Molla Reda ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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Dear Dr. Alipour, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 29 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Marsa Gholamzadeh, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #3: Firstly, on a positive note, I must say the language used is quite adequate and easy to read. I can see that you have addressed all the comments made by reviewers, mostly in a well-structured manner. Nevertheless, I must make some comments: - Firstly, referencing should happen at the end of phrases, not in the middle of the text. This is easily corrected. - Secondly, the Editor comments on the availability of the appendix data, your answer was: ”All the required data is within the article. There is no need for the referenced appendix.”. In all honesty, I do not think this is a good enough answer; if there was an appendix, it should be made available. In my opinion, knowing that a questionnaire was used, it should be available to readers. - Thirdly, I don’t think “adoption” should be used as a keyword for your work. I noticed the other Reviewers did not comment on it, but I suggest you evaluate the need for this word. - Fourth: in my opinion, the paragraph “Data was collected using electronic self-administered questionnaire. After (…) a reminder message was sent to participants twice, with an interval of one week between each reminder”, should be in the “Data col-lection” part, not in ethics - Lastly, I think your English is very good and the paper is well structured; however, some segments are long and appear repetitive. I believe you could summarize those segments better and you work could be more concise. Some examples are:, o “In other to establish the foundations for the widespread adoption of telehealth in Iran, it is first necessary to (…), have resulted in the utilization of telehealth capabilities being largely confined tom a narrow range of locations and contexts [24].” >> could be more succinct. o “Despite the ongoing advancement of telecommunication technologies, evolv-ing reimbursement mechanisms and an increasing societal (…) and removal of inherent obstacles”. o “The Hormozgan province has a hot and humid climate (…). Consequently, this study aims to examine the barriers to the widespread adoption of telehealth in the teaching hospitals of HUMS” >> could be more succinct. I hope the authors take the commentaries above as constructive observations that aim at help-ing them with the changes that might be made for the paper to be published. Reviewer #4: Additional comments: 1. The authors didnot explicitly list teh weaknesses of the designs, the barriers would have been assessed better with a mixed methods design- the qualitative methods would have given indepth responses to the barriers. 2. There is no mention on Non- response bias, there were over 200 participants and only 160 responded to the survey, did the authors assess why the others didnot respond. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes: Dr. Agnes Bwanika Naggirinya ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Barriers to widespread adoption of telehealth from physicians’ perspective: A survey in southern Iran PONE-D-24-58379R2 Dear Dr. Alipour, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Marsa Gholamzadeh, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thank you for your attention to detail in responding to comments. All comments have been well answered and the bugs have been fixed. Reviewers' comments: |
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