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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. 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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Using data from 1,449 non-Hispanic White participants in the Health and Retirement Study, the study analyzed thirteen epigenetic clocks to assess associations between marital transitions, depressive symptoms, and mortality, adjusting for genetic and social factors. Interaction terms tested whether epigenetic clocks moderated these associations. The findings support the notion that epigenetic clocks capture effects of accumulated life experiences, which include those that reflect deterioration and resilience. The author proposes that the current study expands the literature on epigenetic clocks to include psychosocial adaptation or resilience. The topic is of interest, the paper is generally well written and the analyses seem appropriate. My main concerns are that the paper would benefit from a more rigorous connection to the existing literature as some sentences do not have supporting references to the literature and, even more saliently, the idea of psychological resilience in epigenetic clocks has been documented in the literature (see a couple cites below). Moreover, it would be appropriate to discuss the findings in light of prior research on the association between marriage and health, which shows marriage has health benefits for men. Second, it would be useful to compare and contrast this study’s findings to those of Zhang, who also examined epigenetic clocks in HRS. https://pmc.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/articles/PMC10828333/ https://www.nature.com/articles/s41398-021-01735-7 Specific Text comments: #1 PAGE 3 Check grammatical structure of this sentence. For instance, using data from the 52 National Longitudinal Study of Adolescent to Adult Health (Add Health), (16) showed that 53 educational attainment, income, health behaviors, and stress exposure robustly predict variation 54 in epigenetic age acceleration across multiple clocks. #2 PAGE 4 “Although aging is often portrayed as a period of vulnerability,” This does not read quite right. Given aging is an action, it’s not a life stage. Perhaps the author means that older age is a period of vulnerability or that aging heightens biological vulnerability to dysfunction. #3 RESULTS SECTION The results section needs to report estimates in text, using a reporting style such as AMA or APA. #4 PAGE 25 “ Age may not be as neutral a concept as it initially appears.” Please revise or better support the comment. Aging is often considered a negative effect and associated with negative stereotypes in US contexts. #5 PAGE 25 The two passages pasted below raise two issues. First, the conceptualization of the clocks is positioned as both biological (second passage) and ‘more than biological’ (first passage). The position ought to be consistent throughout the paper and whichever position is used it ought to be well reasoned and supported by the extant literature. Second, the author presents a useful description of the clocks and their constructure in the methods but in the first passage appears to dismiss that there are differences in the clocks and that half showed significant associations and half did not. These points ought not to be dismissed but rather discussed. Moreover, specifically how the findings support the assertion that the clocks reflect social and psychological effects needs to be better articulated. Although significant associations were observed for fewer than half of the 459 epigenetic clocks analyzed, the findings suggest that epigenetic aging reflects more than simple 460 biological deterioration. Rather, epigenetic clocks may serve as integrated markers of biological, 461 social, and psychological aging, capturing cumulative life experiences that could include 462 adaptive responses to adversity. VERSUS PAGE 28 In this light, the epigenetic moderation effects found in this study further 482 validate the idea that resilience is biologically embedded, with accumulated life experiences 483 strengthening the body's capacity to withstand future adversities. #7 Higher resolution images would be useful. Reviewer #2: This methodologically sophisticated and well-written manuscript uses HRS data to examine the extent to which multiple epigenetic clock measures moderate the association between marital statuses/transitions and health outcomes: depressive symptoms and mortality. The study draws on resilience theories, and the results are presented clearly and concisely. Despite these strengths, I have a number of concerns regarding the paper’s conceptual framing and method. 1. The concept of resilience is highly debated and critiqued. First, there are multiple perspectives on its meaning. Is it the capacity to withstand adversity with NO negative health effects? Or, is resilience the experience of health symptoms following a stressful event but then a bouncing back shortly thereafter? I encourage you to say more about how you are hypothesizing resilience effects. Second, the very concept is debated because of its emphasis on individual-level strengths without comparable attention to the structural factors that enable one to ‘bounce back’ or ‘withstand’. These structures include economic resources, white privilege, socially/economically advantaged network members who have the wherewithal to provide support, and more. These are important concerns, especially when studying marriage. Marriage is also a highly stratified institution. Persons with better health and economic resources are more likely to ever marry, and to remain married. Financial problems destabilize marriages and increase the risk of divorce. Likewise, low SES is a risk factor for premature mortality, and thus widowhood – given that spouses share a social location. Cumulative dis/advantage or weathering frameworks may be an appropriate alternative or addition to resilience theories for motivating your work. 2. The Background can say more about why marriage and marital transitions, specifically, should bear on health. The background should say more about social selection and social causation as processes that account for the marriage-health association. The background can also theorize more fully whether and how BEING married or unmarried (enduring states) vs. BECOMING married or unmarried (transitions) should have distinct effects on health. 3. I would suggest some rethinking of the marital categories. Combine ‘partnered’ (which I presume to be cohabiting) with married, given that the two categories tend to show similar health outcomes for older adults. (The same is not true for younger people). Break out remarried people from continuously married people. Likewise, I don’t understand the coarse use of the ‘transition’ measure – which does not distinguish between entrances to new unions (important, given that many divorced and widowed older people do repartner) and exits. Rather than the marital status and transition measures, why not develop meaningful categories like continuously married during study period, married and then divorced in study period, etc. See work by Shinae Choi that used these more fine-grained categories effectively, although you may need somewhat coarser categories than she used b/c your analytic sample is such a small share of the overall HRS sample. For example, Choi, S. L., & Carr, D. (2023). Older adults’ relationship trajectories and estate planning. Journal of Family and Economic Issues, 44(2), 356-372. 4. The framing says little about the importance of transition timing. For divorced people, for instance, do you know if they divorced at age 25 and then remained unmarried through old age? Or whether it was a more recent gray divorce? The same for widowed. Thinking through what marital statuses and transitions mean, and the timing thereof, may help to refine the hypotheses about their direct impacts, and the extent to which these impacts are moderated by epigenetic aging. 5. You lose a lot of cases through item-specific missing data. Why not do an imputation on the independent variable side? Or, if some of the measures are obtained only from the self-administered LBQ, use the two 50% LBQ subsamples from consecutive waves, and then pool the samples? The dropping of cases is a serious problem because you’re left with such a biased and positively selected sample. For instance, you have barely 1% who are never married, whereas in the overall sample it’s closer to 5%. If you are losing the sickest and most socially disconnected persons due to item-specific missing data, then it’s hard to interpret and contextualize your results. 6. I appreciate the gender contrast, but do not see significance tests to evaluate whether the coefficients are different in the male vs. female models. 7. In the Descriptive Statistics tables, denote statistically significant gender differences. 8. I worry that you are overcontrolling and thus are wiping out the effects of potentially meaningful variables. For instance, number of kids is highly correlated with marital status (never married tend to have <1, continuously married have more kids than those whose marriages were truncated by dissolution). Number of kids close by is correlated with total number of kids, etc. I would suggest doing a careful paring down of variables, deleting those that are the most highly confounded with your focal variables. See also Kohler, U., Class, F., & Sawert, T. (2024). Control variable selection in applied quantitative sociology: a critical review. European Sociological Review, 40(1), 173-186. 9.I have not used epigenetic clocks in my own work, so cede to the other reviewers here. At the very least, it would be instructive for readers to learn why particular measures responded differently (e.g., GrimAge and DunedeinPACE mattered for CESD). For social determinants of health (SDOH) researchers who have not used these measures, it could be helpful to understand their broader meaning and applications. Best of luck in refining this promising project. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). 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For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Using data from 1,449 non-Hispanic White participants in the Health and Retirement Study, the study analyzed thirteen epigenetic clocks to assess associations between marital transitions, depressive symptoms, and mortality, adjusting for genetic and social factors. Interaction terms tested whether epigenetic clocks moderated these associations. The findings support the notion that epigenetic clocks capture effects of accumulated life experiences, which include those that reflect deterioration and resilience. The author proposes that the current study expands the literature on epigenetic clocks to include psychosocial adaptation or resilience. The topic is of interest, the paper is well written and the analyses are well done. The author provided an excellent response to the concerns I raised in my initial review. This paper would make a valuable contribution to the existing literature. I thank the author for a thorough and thoughtful response to my prior concerns. Reviewer #2: The authors are to be commended for their thorough and responsive revision. The study is now better situated within relevant literatures, concepts have been clarified, and results presented clearly and concisely. I have no further suggestions for revision. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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