Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 17, 2025 |
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Title: Effects of attachment designs on clear aligner tooth movement: a finite element analysis This manuscript, entitled “Effects of Attachment Designs on Clear Aligner Tooth Movement: A Finite Element Analysis”, aims to evaluate the biomechanical impact of various attachment shapes and configurations on maxillary molar movement using finite element modeling. By simulating mesialization, intrusion, extrusion, and rotation, the study provides valuable insights into how attachment geometry and placement influence displacement patterns, PDL strain, and bone stress. The findings suggest that flat attachments (e.g., rectangular and trapezoidal) enhance tooth movement efficiency but increase localized stress, while curved attachments distribute forces more evenly with less effective movement. Dual attachment configurations showed improved root control and bodily displacement. Overall, the manuscript is well-organized and methodologically sound. However, several areas would benefit from clarification or expansion. Clarity of Scope The introduction provides a strong biomechanical rationale for studying different attachment shapes and configurations. However, the clinical relevance of the selected movements could be better contextualized. Notably, molar distalization, one of the most commonly targeted movements in aligner therapy, is not included. The authors should clarify whether this was a modeling limitation or an intentional scope decision. Alternatively, the title and abstract could be revised to reflect the primary focus on mesialization and its biomechanical implications. Methods The finite element modeling approach is detailed and robust. However, the simulation of a single molar limits extrapolation to full-arch mechanics. The authors are encouraged to discuss the potential impact of this simplification on the generalizability of results to multi-tooth clinical settings. Results and Discussion • The results are clearly presented, but a more explicit clinical interpretation of PDL strain and bone stress thresholds would add practical value. • The discussion of buccal-lingual dual attachments would benefit from addressing the clinical challenges of lingual bonding and aligner retention. • The manuscript would be strengthened by referencing recent FEA studies (e.g., Gao et al. 2023; Hong et al. 2021), which offer relevant comparative insight. • The omission of distalization should be explicitly justified, considering its clinical relevance in aligner-based therapies. • The manuscript is well written. However, some long and technical sentences, particularly in the Results and Discussion sections, could benefit from slight editing to improve clarity and readability. Modeling Assumptions and Opportunities for Enhancement • The authors mention that a mesh convergence study was performed, but do not include numerical data or describe the specific procedure. A brief summary or convergence plot (e.g., stress vs. mesh size) would improve transparency and validate the numerical stability of the model. • The simulation applies simplified static loading. Could the authors explain why dynamic approaches (e.g., birth and death method) were not considered? These can provide more realistic insight into aligner deformation and force delivery. • Unlike other recent FEA studies, this manuscript does not include a baseline simulation without attachments. Including a no-attachment model would allow for a clearer evaluation of the true benefit of each attachment design. Was this omission due to a modeling constraint or an intentional choice? • The aligner thickness is fixed at 0.8 mm but not justified. Given the known impact of thickness on stiffness and force transmission, the rationale should be provided, and ideally, sensitivity to different thicknesses tested. Limitations Section While the discussion touches on some modeling constraints, the manuscript would benefit from a dedicated limitations paragraph, highlighting key assumptions (e.g., isotropic material properties, static load conditions, single-subject modeling, exclusion of time-dependent tissue response). Clarify Clinical Relevance The simulations are methodologically sound, but the clinical applicability of each scenario could be better emphasized. For instance, how often are dual attachments feasible in real clinical practice? Are there clinical data supporting the use of the attachment shapes tested here? Framing the biomechanical findings in a clinical context would increase the practical impact of the study. Moreover, the authors could better highlight how this study adds novel value beyond previous FEA studies on attachments. What specific insight does this work contribute to clinical treatment planning or future appliance design? Final Notes to the Authors This manuscript presents a detailed finite element analysis of different attachment geometries used in clear aligner therapy, with well-structured methodology and valuable biomechanical findings. However, several important aspects should be addressed to improve clarity, completeness, and clinical relevance. Clarifying modeling decisions, referencing recent comparative work, justifying design choices (e.g., thickness), and strengthening the clinical framing will significantly enhance the contribution of this study to the field. Reviewer #2: The objective of this study is to investigate the biomechanical effects of different attachment shapes and configurations on the movement, stress, and strain distribution of the maxillary first molar during clear aligner therapy by using FEM. This study holds scientific merit, and the authors deserve recognition for their diligent work. However, several key issues need to be addressed before the manuscript can be considered for publication. 1. Regarding the finite element simulation, the manuscript needs a clear statement defining the accuracy of the FE model. The reviewer thought that the FE model used in this study needs to be validated before use. Alternatively, please consider adding one paragraph to the “Discussion” section that describes the reliability of the FE model used in this study. 2. In clinical contexts, the human PDL is not a linear elastic material. The authors have modeled the PDL as linear elastic with Elastic Modulus of 0.69 MPa, which does not fully reflect real physiological conditions. Studies exist that model PDL as a bilinear elastic material, which more accurately represents the properties of human PDL. The authors are encouraged to expand on the simplifications made regarding PDL material properties and to compare their approach with other studies using bilinear elastic models, such as: � Effects of Attachment Design and Aligner Material on Mandibular Canine Distal Bodily Movement in Aligner Treatment. https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s40846-024-00904-5 � Determination of the elasticity parameters of the human periodontal ligament and the location of the center of resistance of single-rooted teeth a study of autopsy specimens and their conversion into finite element models https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/12297965/ The reviewer recommends that a paragraph be added in the Discussion to address the impact of PDL material assumptions on the results, or at the very least, to acknowledge this point as a limitation of the present study. 3. In the sentence: “The periodontal ligament (PDL) was reconstructed by isolating the tooth roots and extruding them outward by 0.2 mm, consistent with anatomical thicknesses reported in literature [11],” it is suggested to simply use “PDL” instead of repeating the full term “The periodontal ligament (PDL),” since the abbreviation has already been defined earlier in the manuscript. This will improve conciseness and readability. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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EFFECTS OF ATTACHMENT DESIGNS ON CLEAR ALIGNER TOOTH MOVEMENT: A FINITE ELEMENT ANALYSIS PONE-D-25-30810R1 Dear Dr. Mukdadi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, James J Cray Jr., Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: I would like to thank the authors for their careful and thorough responses to all the comments raised during the review process. The revisions made have strengthened the manuscript, improving its clarity and overall scientific quality. I believe the authors have successfully addressed all concerns, and the revised version represents a clear improvement over the original submission. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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