Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 14, 2024 |
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We notice that your supplementary tables are included in the manuscript file. Please remove them and upload them with the file type 'Supporting Information'. Please ensure that each Supporting Information file has a legend listed in the manuscript after the references list. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The manuscript is technically robust, with a well-designed study using high-quality NHANES data and rigorous methods, including DNA methylation analysis as a marker of epigenetic aging. Appropriate controls, replication, and adjustments for confounders enhance the validity of the findings. The study addresses a critical gap by linking epigenetic markers to racial and ethnic disparities, with a timely focus on the "weathering hypothesis" as a plausible mechanism. Statistical analyses are rigorously applied, with clear methods for handling missing data and robust regression models. Data availability is transparent, meeting PLOS ONE’s policies, and the manuscript is well-written, logically structured, and supported by effective tables and figures. Reviewer #2: "White respondents had higher epigenetic aging than Black respondents (the reference group) for six out of seven measures trained on chronological age" and "White respondents had lower epigenetic aging than Black respondents for three out of four measures trained on physiological age" your article has excellent data and statistics, however it lacks of practical organization to deliver your findings in a pertinent clinical setting. Please elaborate both sentences above and explain the clinical implications of these findings in the first part of your Discussion session. Please explain this epigenetic findings, taking into account the variance quantitative genetic equation Vp = Vg + Vepi + Ve p=phenotype g=genotype epi= epigenetics e=environment Reviewer #3: 1. How do the epigenetic age measurement tools mentioned in the study specifically reflect biological ageing? Are there other potential biomarkers that could complement these measures? 2. did the study consider other biological mechanisms that may influence racial and ethnic health disparities, such as genetic factors or environmental exposures? 3. is there sample selection bias due to sample selection for NHANES? How was the general applicability of the results ensured? 4. are there specific factors that have a more significant effect on epigenetic age after adjusting for socioeconomic factors? How do these factors affect health outcomes for different ethnic groups? ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Racial and ethnic differences in epigenetic aging: The National Health and Nutrition Examination Survey, 1999-2002 PONE-D-24-45761R1 Dear Dr. Needham, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Li Yang, M.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thanks for the authors' efforts to comprehensively improve your manuscript according to editor's and reviewers' comments. I am pleased to inform you that your paper can be accepted for publication now. Thanks for the chance to assess your work. Additionally, many thanks for all the reviewers' precious inputs. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thank you for your careful revisions. You've addressed all of the previous comments thoroughly, and the manuscript is now much clearer and more complete. The research is solid, the data support the conclusions well, and the statistical analysis has been carried out appropriately.The data availability is in line with journal requirements, and the overall writing is clear and easy to follow. I have no remaining concerns, and I believe the manuscript is ready for publication as it stands. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No ********** |
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PONE-D-24-45761R1 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Needham, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Li Yang Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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