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Dear Dr. Diao, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== This manuscript proposes an interesting framework to identify Priority Habitat Corridors for giant pandas in the newly established Giant Panda National Park, using integrated modeling with biophysical, biotic, and anthropogenic criteria. By providing a standardized methodology to prioritize conservation actions, this work offers some valuable support for future management of giant pandas and other wildlife species, helping improve the allocation of limited resources to the most critical areas for maximum conservation impact. While this study will be of interest to bear ecologists and panda conservation managers, there are some issues with this manuscript that preclude its publication in its current state. Consequently, major changes are required before the manuscript can be further considered. Both reviewers provide insightful comments and suggestions that will help guide the revision process to improve this manuscript. The modeling framework is not particularly innovative and needs further detail and justification. There needs to be stronger integration of results with known genetic distribution of giant pandas and more discussion on landscape changes since earlier corridor predictions. Both reviewers also provide several additional references for the authors to consider incorporating into their manuscript, especially with regard to recent developments in corridor modeling. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 20 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Please ensure that each Supporting Information file has a legend listed in the manuscript after the references list. Additional Editor Comments: This manuscript proposes an interesting framework to identify Priority Habitat Corridors for giant pandas in the newly established Giant Panda National Park, using integrated modeling with biophysical, biotic, and anthropogenic criteria. By providing a standardized methodology to prioritize conservation actions, this work offers some valuable support for future management of giant pandas and other wildlife species, helping to allocate limited resources to the most critical areas for maximum conservation impact. While this study will be of interest to bear ecologists and panda conservation managers, there are some issues with this manuscript that preclude its publication in its current state. Consequently, major changes are required before the manuscript can be further considered. Both Reviewers provide insightful comments and suggestions that will help guide the revision process to improve this manuscript. The modeling framework is not particularly innovative and needs further detail and justification. There needs to be stronger integration of results with known genetic distribution of giant pandas and more discussion on landscape changes since earlier corridor predictions. Both reviewers also provide several additional references for the authors to consider incorporating into their manuscript, especially with regard to recent developments in corridor modeling. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: I thought this was an interesting paper and it was well written. I think it is a pertinent topic. I have no major concerns. I have some minor suggestions for improvement below. In general I think there could be a stronger integration of Results/Implications of this study with what we know about genetic distribution of the species (in the Discussion section specifically). The citation below would be great to explore in detail, and I think it appears in your Reference list but is not cited in the paper (Unless I missed it?) Wang, Meng, Guiming Wang, Guangping Huang, Andy Kouba, Ronald R. Swaisgood, Wenliang Zhou, Yibo Hu, Yonggang Nie, and Fuwen Wei. "Habitat connectivity drives panda recovery." Current Biology 34, no. 17 (2024): 3894-3904. I think it might be interesting to touch on more about how things have changed in the landscape since earlier corridor predictions. I wonder about comparing to this paper below from around 2 decades ago (although this is Qionglai only) Xu, Weihua, Zhiyun Ouyang, Andrés Viña, Hua Zheng, Jianguo Liu, and Yi Xiao. "Designing a conservation plan for protecting the habitat for giant pandas in the Qionglai mountain range, China." Diversity and Distributions 12, no. 5 (2006): 610-619. I also think it might be interesting to talk more about what your recommendations mean in light of what has actually been done (or more importantly not done) with respect to actual corridor construction or restoration to date. Maybe this paper can be a good citation to consider. Kang, Dongwei. "A review of the habitat restoration of giant pandas from 2012 to 2021: Research topics and advances." Science of the Total Environment 852 (2022): 158207. Another reference to consider if helpful for adding context to the Discussion: Hu, Lu, Bin Feng, Jindong Zhang, Xin Dong, Junfeng Tang, Caiquan Zhou, Dunwu Qi, and Wenke Bai. "Impacts of land-use change on the habitat suitability and connectivity of giant panda." Global Ecology and Conservation (2024): e03019. Other Line 368- capitalize China Line 375-376- This sentence was hard to understand and should be reworded or fleshed out in more detail Line 399- "giant pandas are distributed in lower elevations" Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review this work. I appreciate its motivation, and there seem to be some intriguing potential findings. While I think there is a worthy publication in this work, I do not believe this manuscript is yet where it needs to be - to be published. I have provided some major and minor comments that I hope you can take and help transition this into a more complete and finalized product. Major: There is no new framework provided here. Much fundamental corridor literature has not been cited, including multiple decision science-based corridor frameworks. This includes from the 1980s with ordinal rankings to the following: Bond ML, Bradley CM, Kiffner C, Morrison TA, Lee DE. A multi-method approach to delineate and validate migratory corridors. Landscape Ecol. 2017;32:1705–21. Osipova L, Okello MM, Njumbi SJ, Ngene S, Western D, Hayward MW, et al. Validating movement corridors for African elephants predicted from resistance-based landscape connectivity models. Landscape Ecol. 2019;34:865–78. Barnett K, Belote RT. Modeling an aspirational connected network of protected areas across North America. Ecol Appl. 2021;31:e02387. Dinerstein E, Joshi AR, Vynne C, Lee ATL, Pharand-Deschênes F, França M, et al. A “Global Safety Net” to reverse biodiversity loss and stabilize Earth’s climate. Sci Adv. 2020;6:eabb2824. Cameron DR, Schloss CA, Theobald DM, Morrison SA. A framework to select strategies for conserving and restoring habitat connectivity in complex landscapes. Conserv Sci Pract. 2022;4:e12698. Brennan A, Naidoo R, Greenstreet L, Mehrabi Z, Ramankutty N, Kremen C. Functional connectivity of the world’s protected areas. Science. 2022;376:1101–4. aruemon Tantipisanuh, Somporn Phakpian, Pornpimon Tangtorwongsakul, Supagit Vinitpornsawan, Dusit Ngoprasert, Identifying wildlife corridors to restore population connectivity: An integration approach involving multiple data sources, Global Ecology and Conservation, Volume 53, 2024, https://doi.org/10.1016/j.gecco.2024.e03015. Generally, this manuscript lacks methodological detail and justification for the chosen methods. Many models were considered for the final ensemble without any justification… such as diversity or representation of modeling methods. There is a circular nature to using covariates in habitat suitability, which are then incorporated to some extent into the elimination process. The modeling processes were not described even in the supplement. Minor: There were many minor errors in writing and grammar, mostly with tense, article placement, and singular/plural. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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