Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 16, 2024 |
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-->PONE-D-24-40673-->-->Attachment Beyond the Screen: The Influences of Demographic Factors and Parasocial Relationships on Social Media Use in Qatar-->-->PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Jin, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.-->--> -->-->Please take particular care to address the reviewers comments related to the rationale for your study and its contextualization in the wider literature.-->--> Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 16 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: Here are my thoughts on the manuscript for the authors' consideration: Abstract Since the study emphasizes the use of a “non-WEIRD” population, it may be beneficial to clarify this distinction within the Abstract's “Background” section. Briefly contextualizing why the non-WEIRD focus is essential would enhance the study’s framing. It’s crucial, however, to avoid overstating the lack of research on problematic social media use and parasocial relationships (PSRs) in non-WEIRD populations, as this area has been explored. Specificity would improve accuracy, such as mentioning “non-WEIRD populations in the Middle East.” It’s important to avoid exaggerated claims; studies exist on social media use and PSRs in contexts like Iran: https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s12671-023-02271-9 https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s40519-024-01658-4 Additionally, in the “Methods”, the phrase “participant followed Instagram influencers” requires more precision: what types of influencers were included, and how many influencers did participants need to follow to qualify? This would help clarify inclusion criteria. In the Abstract's “Conclusions” section, the second and third sentences seem to extend beyond the study’s findings. Staying closely aligned with the study's results here would strengthen the rigor. Similarly, the first sentence in this section could be clarified to align with the study's goal of understanding social media usage time. Introduction You mentioned a few studies conducted on non-WEIRD populations in the Introduction (e.g., Iran). Since the “Current Study” section later underscores the scarcity of non-WEIRD research, it may be more coherent to focus on WEIRD literature until that section. Here, you can acknowledge non-WEIRD studies and note any research gaps. Further arguments could clarify why analyzing WEIRD and non-WEIRD populations separately is conceptually meaningful. This may include discussing why findings from WEIRD samples may not directly generalize to non-WEIRD populations for phenomena like PSRs. In the “Methodology,” be clear on what constitutes “participants who followed Instagram influencers.” For example, specify if following at least one influencer (e.g., a fitness or food influencer) on Instagram was required. Also, it’s worth noting that your measure assesses time spent on social media, which differs from problematic or addictive social media use. The literature should reflect this distinction by discussing excessive social media time and its negative outcomes rather than problematic use. For PSR measurement, since the study uses a tool assessing PSR with a single media figure (e.g., “I feel 000 is fascinating on his/her SNS”), it’s assessing PSR with a favorite influencer rather than a general set of influencers. Discussion In the Discussion and throughout the manuscript, clarity is needed. For instance, rather than saying, “The finding that a higher PSR degree is associated with higher daily social media usage time…,” specify “higher PSR with a favorite Instagram influencer.” Given the generic nature of data regarding the PSR with a favorite influencer (e.g., gender, popularity, and expertise of the influencer, which may affect outcomes), a more cautious interpretation in the discussion and conclusions is warranted. I hope these suggestions are helpful. Reviewer #2: 1. In section 1.1.Excessive social media use and its outcomes:It would be better to include statistics on Non-WEIRD countries if it is possible. 2. Is there any research that has conducted on your research variables in Non-WEIRD countries that can support your findings? If there is, you can use it in the discussion section. 3. The authors of this article are expected to explain that why the data collection took place in 2020 and the article was written about 4 years later. 4. It is suggested that additional editing be done on the paper to meet the criteria of standard English language. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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-->PONE-D-24-40673R1-->-->Attachment Beyond the Screen: The Influences of Demographic Factors and Parasocial Relationships on Social Media Use in Qatar-->-->PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Jin, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 05 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Kind regards, Andrea Fronzetti Colladon, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #2: Dear authors The paper is generally well written and structured and all comments have been addressed. Regards, Reviewer #3: Thank you for the opportunity to review the revised manuscript. This study presents a valuable contribution to the literature on social media behavior by focusing on a non-WEIRD population in Qatar; an underexplored yet important context. The manuscript is well-written, and the authors have clearly made substantial revisions in response to earlier feedback. That said, several areas still require clarification or refinement. Here is my detailed feedback: 1. The manuscript mentions use of a six-item PSR scale but does not present the items or explain how they were adapted for this cultural context. Given the centrality of this construct, please consider including the items in an appendix or table. 2. At various points (e.g., “PSRs cause increased social media use”), causal implications are made. Please rephrase to emphasize correlational interpretation throughout. This is particularly important given the cross-sectional nature of the data. 3. The dataset was collected in early 2020. Although the authors now mention this and explain their rationale for use, I recommend briefly reflecting on how Instagram use or influencer engagement in Qatar may have evolved since that time—particularly given the impact of COVID-19 on digital behavior. 4. The Discussion is well developed, however, some parts of it just repeat earlier findings without sufficient interpretation. I suggest revising the Discussion further to focus more on implications and conceptual takeaways rather than just repeating the results. 5. In the future research directions, some further limitations should be addressed. For instance, the inclusion of influencer characteristics (e.g., gender, genre, celebrity status) could be explored in future PSR studies. Also, the potential for longitudinal or qualitative research to deepen understanding of user-influencer dynamics should be highlighted here. 6. Line 116: “usa time” should be corrected to “usage time.” 7. Consider adding a brief explanation of why MCMC was preferred over frequentist approaches for readers unfamiliar with Bayesian methods. I hope the authors find my comments helpful in improving the work further. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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