Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 28, 2025 |
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If your research concerns only data provided within your submission, please write "All data are in the manuscript and/or supporting information files" as your Data Availability Statement. 4. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Your title is strong but could be clearer and more precise. Suggested revision: "Bayesian Mediation Analysis Using Patient-Reported Outcomes from AI Chatbots to Infer Causal Pathways in Clinical Trials." The abstraction is well-structured and technically sound, but slight refinements could improve clarity and conciseness. For example, rewording "linking treatment effects to outcomes via mediators such as adverse events and covariates" to "linking treatment effects to outcomes through mediators like adverse events and patient-specific covariates" enhances flow. Additionally, specifying whether "synthetic patient-chatbot dialogues were generated to validate the Bayesian mediation framework" were used solely for validation or also for model training/testing would improve precision. Lastly, simplifying "underscoring the model's potential to enhance the granularity and accuracy of clinical trial data analysis" to "underscoring its potential to improve clinical trial data accuracy and depth" makes the sentence more concise while retaining meaning. Include a theoretical framework in your study. The materials and methods are clear and well-structured, but minor corrections can improve accuracy and readability. Would you like to expand on the potential sources of variability in b beyond sample size and model specification, such as differences in patient characteristics or chatbot interaction nuances? References are scanty; rework. Reviewer #2: It is a great pleasure to have reviewed this paper, "Bayesian Mediation Analysis Using Patient Reported Outcome Collected from AI Chat to Estimate Causal Pathways in Clinical Trials". The study has numerous merits, but for the optic of this review, I will comment on some grey areas that, after implementing the correction, will further strengthen the quality of the paper. Abstract The authors fail to address the study gap. The gap in the study lies in the lack of detailed analysis of the variables that may have influenced the result of absence. Results were absent in the abstract, and the conclusion was not well crafted. Additionally, the conclusion fails to summarize the key findings and implications of the study effectively. Introduction The authors should identify the research objectives and discuss the objective variables in the introduction session. This will provide readers with a clear understanding of the purpose of the study and the specific factors that will be analyzed. By clearly outlining the research objectives and variables, the authors can set the stage for the rest of the paper and guide readers through the methodology and results logically and coherently. Additionally, clearly defining the objectives and variables can help ensure the study stays focused and addresses the key questions or hypotheses being investigated. The authors fail to raise any research questions addressed in the study, leaving readers wondering about the significance of their findings. Without straightforward research questions, it is difficult to understand the purpose of the study and how the results contribute to existing knowledge in the field. In future research, it is essential for authors to clearly define their research questions to guide the study and provide context for their findings. Materials and methods Authors should provide more information on how the study was replicated, including details on the sample size, data collection methods, and statistical analyses used. This level of transparency is essential for both peer review and future replication attempts, as it allows other researchers to assess the validity and reliability of the findings accurately. Additionally, authors should clearly outline any limitations or potential biases in their study design and any steps taken to mitigate these challenges. By providing a detailed account of the replication process, authors can contribute to advancing scientific knowledge and ensure that their research is rigorously examined and verified. Discussion The authors fail to support discussion sessions with other studies, limiting their findings' credibility. Without additional research to back up their claims, it isn't easy to fully trust the conclusions drawn in the study. For this research to be impactful and influential in the field, the author must incorporate more thorough comparisons and analysis with other relevant studies. Only then can the study be considered comprehensive and reliable. Limitations and suggestions for further studies The authors should disclose the study limitations and suggestions further studies to provide a more comprehensive understanding. By acknowledging the constraints of their research, such as sample size or data collection methods, the authors can help readers interpret the results more accurately. Additionally, offering ideas for future research directions can inspire other scholars to explore new aspects of the subject and build upon the existing findings. Overall, transparent communication regarding study limitations and recommendations for future studies is essential for advancing knowledge in the field. References More recent authors need to be cited and referred to accurately represent the current state of knowledge on the topic. It is essential to acknowledge the contributions of newer voices in the field and to give credit where credit is due. By including references to contemporary authors, researchers can demonstrate that they are up-to-date with the latest research and theories in their study area. This adds credibility to their work and helps advance the conversation and understanding of the topic. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Bayesian Mediation Analysis Using Patient-Reported Outcomes from AI Chatbots to Infer Causal Pathways in Clinical Trials PONE-D-25-04459R1 Dear Dr. Shihao, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Musa Adekunle Ayanwale Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The authors have thoroughly addressed all the initial concerns raised by the reviewers. Thank you for your careful revisions. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The author needs to write a literature review for this study, incorporating relevant and up-to-date scholarly sources. Minor grammatical adjustments for better readability. The references are too limited; please add more relevant sources. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Olajumoke Olayemi Salami Reviewer #2: Yes: Oluwaseyi Aina Gbolade Opesemowo **********
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