Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 3, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-38368Total Hip Arthroplasty Improves and Normalizes but Does Not Completely Restore Hip KineticsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kwong, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 28 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please state what role the funders took in the study. If the funders had no role, please state: ""The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript."" If this statement is not correct you must amend it as needed. Please include this amended Role of Funder statement in your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Reserach question sounds interesting. I have some comments. 1. Please add "Sample size calculation in Method part". 2. To calculate primary outcomes, confounding factors in dermographic data such as age, sex, BMI might effect the hip power and other kinametics. Multivariable regression with adjusting the confounders should be performed. Reviewer #2: This study analyzed data from Bertaux et al. (2022) regarding comparison for pre-post THA focusing on the gait kinetic. My main concern is the contribution of this study while using the secondary analysis. Title - please change your title related to your study - include pre-post operative THA, unilateral OA and gait kinetics Abstract - background: include the problem statement in this part - method: include how you reconstruct into 3D in one sentence - careful with conclusion of walking pattern gradually normalize while you're only study for gait kinetic Introduction - please add more information about walking speed (Line 84). joint moment and power (Line 85), as this is critical to your study Method - please include 1 figure showing your work on gait kinetic using Visual3D with markers related - please divide into 4 segments of stance phase (initial contact, loading response, mid stance and terminal stance) while describing your data. this will be your main contribution of this study because all data already been given by Bertaux et al. (2022). Result - figure: include the legend within the figure (ease reader to comprehend) - the subtopic is mixed, example in sagittal hip moment included frontal and hip power. similar to another subtopic. - please aligned with your objective, easier to comprehend and demonstrated that you achieved it or not. Discussion - as suggested in result section, discussed based on your objective/hypothesis, easier for readers to comprehend. - include limitation on the last paragraph in this section Conclusion - you may conclude from your main finding, and recommendation for the future References - if possible, include more recent publications (5 years prior) ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-24-38368R1Gait Kinetics Before and After Total Hip Arthroplasty in People with Unilateral Hip OsteoarthritisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kwong, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 10 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Yaodong Gu Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: No ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: Review comments 1. Although hip arthroplasty (THA) in the treatment of hip osteoarthritis (OA) is introduced, the current research background and existing literature are not reviewed in detail. For example, how do you specifically define the difference between "full recovery" and "partial recovery"? Specific research findings on the different stages of postoperative recovery (e.g., 6 months) are less mentioned, which could be further fleshed out. It is recommended to add background information on the recovery process at different time points after hip replacement, especially at 6 months, as well as a comparison with a healthy population, to help readers better understand the complexity of postoperative patient recovery. 2. Although many studies have explored changes in gait dynamics, there are still deficiencies in gait pattern recognition and gait differences among different sports groups (such as high-low mileage runners) in the current literature. Some new methods have been proposed to realize the recognition of human gait patterns, which not only provide a new perspective for sports science, but also provide inspiration for clinical gait analysis. for example, A new method proposed for realizing human gait pattern recognition: A new method proposed for realizing human gait pattern recognition: Inspirations for the application of sports and clinical gait analysis (https://doi.org/10.1016/j.gaitpost.2023.10.019). In addition, another study used machine learning to explain differences in gait patterns between high-mileage and low-mileage runners, Explaining the differences of gait patterns between high and low mileage runners with machine. Explaining the differences of gait patterns between high and low mileage runners with machine Learning (https://doi.org/10.1038/s41598-022-07054-1). However, most of the existing literature focuses on athlete groups or specific gait pattern recognition techniques, and there has been no systematic discussion on the changes of gait dynamics in patients with hip replacement (THA) before and after surgery, especially the specific differences in different gait substages." 3. Although the study divided gait into four sub-stages for analysis, the specific physiological significance of these stages and the segmentation criteria were not elaborated in the method section. Please clarify the physiological significance of each sub-stage of gait and the reasons for choosing these stages, to help readers understand the importance of each stage for gait recovery. 4. Although the changes in the gait of patients after hip replacement were discussed, some factors (such as muscle strength and pain) that did not fully recover were not discussed in depth. It is recommended to further explore the role of muscle strength, pain and other physiological factors during postoperative recovery to explain why these factors may lead to incomplete recovery of gait and hip dynamics. Reviewer #4: This study suffers from several critical issues that affect its scientific validity and credibility. First, despite the use of a publicly available dataset, the source, characterization, and quality control details of the dataset were severely lacking, and the completeness and accuracy of the data were not verified. Second, the sample selection and exclusion criteria were unclear, with insufficient explanation of the rationale for sample sizes exceeding the required values, and the lack of transparent exclusion criteria may have led to selection bias. For data processing, although Visual3D was used for the analysis, details of parameter settings and validation were not provided, the choice of low-pass filter (50 Hz) may not be applicable to all gait characteristics, and the accuracy of the gait event detection method was not validated or analyzed for sensitivity. In the statistical analysis, the authors did not perform a valid correction for multiple comparisons, the assumed conditions and applicability of the SPM1D model were not adequately validated, and the multivariate regression analysis lacked detailed description and ignored covariate interaction effects. Finally, the interpretation of the study results is too superficial, lacks mechanistic analysis, and has limited scientific contribution. In view of the above issues, this study is not eligible for publication in its current form, and the authors are advised to resubmit it with significant revisions in terms of data transparency, methodological rigor, and interpretation of results. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Gait Kinetics Before and After Total Hip Arthroplasty in People with Unilateral Hip Osteoarthritis PONE-D-24-38368R2 Dear Dr. Kwong, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: We thank the authors for submitting this work on the effects of total hip arthroplasty (THA) on hip joint dynamics. Based on publicly available data, the article systematically analyzes the differences in hip joint moments and power throughout the standing phase before and after surgery and with healthy controls by statistical parameter mapping (SPM) method, which fills the gap in the existing literature on the description of the dynamic recovery process after THA. The study design is rigorous, the analysis method is reasonable, and the results have important clinical guidance, especially in terms of recommendations for the direction of postoperative rehabilitation training. Overall, this paper is informative and well-organized, and the conclusions have practical application value. I recommend accepting this manuscript for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** |
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