Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 22, 2024 |
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If any of the included studies are unpublished, include a link (URL) to the primary source or detailed information about how the content can be accessed. A table of all data extracted from the primary research sources for the systematic review and/or meta-analysis. The table must include the following information for each study: Name of data extractors and date of data extraction Confirmation that the study was eligible to be included in the review. All data extracted from each study for the reported systematic review and/or meta-analysis that would be needed to replicate your analyses. If data or supporting information were obtained from another source (e.g. correspondence with the author of the original research article), please provide the source of data and dates on which the data/information were obtained by your research group. If applicable for your analysis, a table showing the completed risk of bias and quality/certainty assessments for each study or outcome. Please ensure this is provided for each domain or parameter assessed. For example, if you used the Cochrane risk-of-bias tool for randomized trials, provide answers to each of the signalling questions for each study. If you used GRADE to assess certainty of evidence, provide judgements about each of the quality of evidence factor. This should be provided for each outcome. An explanation of how missing data were handled. This information can be included in the main text, supplementary information, or relevant data repository. Please note that providing these underlying data is a requirement for publication in this journal, and if these data are not provided your manuscript might be rejected. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** Reviewer #1: Improve the clarity, coherence, and presentation of the manuscript by doing these recommendations: 1) Authors need to paraphrase sentences in two paragraphs since they have similarities with other articles. Similarity rates: 20%. 2) Authors need to check and recheck the data citation name and congruence. 3) Authors need to check and recheck the congruence of citations and references according to the PlosOne template. 4) Authors need English language editing service as well as punctuation service. 5) Authors need to make some paragraphs in discussion more concise. 6) Authors need to highlight the contributions of the paper in DD prevalence research area besides for intervention recommendation. Reviewer #2: The paper is a systematic review that focuses on diarrheal disease in children under the age of five in Africa from January 2013 to December 2023 using PRISMA guidelines. However, a lot must be done to make this ready for publication. • The result section of the abstract needs to be rewritten for clarity. Improve sentence structure for readability. • "Using a systematic search of PubMed, Scopus, Web of Science, and Google Scholar for studies from 2013–2023, following PRISMA guidelines" Is ambiguous. Kindly rewrite this part for clarity. • There is no consistency in the font size usage and alignment of the paper. Some of the words are merged, such as Sudan,64.2%(95%CI:59.71-68.68) (16), Uganda,62.4%(95%CI:57.55-67.25) (14) and Ethiopia ,41.75%(95%CI:40.53-42.97)(34)(Figure 2) in Prevalence of Diarrheal disease among under-five children in Africa. • The degree of freedom in Cochran's Q statistics for heterogeneity is missing for Central Africa. • The dataset is dominated by studies from East Africa, with comparatively fewer studies from Central, Northern, and Southern Africa. This regional imbalance may skew the findings. Discussing how this affects generalizability would strengthen the conclusions. • The inclusion criterion limiting studies to those published in English may have excluded relevant research from French-speaking or Arabic-speaking African countries. This should be acknowledged. • The heterogeneity (I² = 99.3%) is relatively high, which raises concern about the comparability of studies included in the review. Consider explaining how the high heterogeneity might impact the pooled prevalence estimates and associated risk factors. • The plots are too compressed, especially the Sensitivity analysis and Funnel plots. Kindly revise all the plots to make them publication-worthy. The funnel plots suggested publication bias, which needs to be addressed. • The Egger test was done with the number of studies to be 70, as indicated in the table, but your method alluded to only 69 studies. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Pelumi Oladipo ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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Dear Dr. Worede, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 14 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Hope Onohuean, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: 1. Please also indicate in the Methods section that you performed a meta-regression to quantify additional publication bias and conducted a sensitivity analysis to assess the robustness of your findings. 2. In the Results section for subgroup analysis, after presenting the prevalence of each subgroup, clearly state whether there is a significant or non-significant difference among them. Based on the p-value provided, it appears there is a significant difference. Offer a concise interpretation of these differences. For example: “Subgroup analysis by region revealed the highest prevalence in [Region A], followed by [Region B], [Region C], and [Region D]. There was a significant difference among these regions (p-value = …), indicating that each region exhibits distinct [example: characteristics/outcomes].” 3. Please provide the DOI or URL for all references, along with the PubMed ID if available. 4. The year for Danquah’s reference [67] is missing. Kindly re-check all references to ensure accuracy of their publication years. 5. On pages 14, 16, 17, 19, and 20, replace “Kefalew et al.” with “Alemayehu.” 6. On page 9, Nwokoro is cited as reference [57]; on page 10, Nwokoro is cited as reference [63]; and on page 11, Nwokoro is cited as reference [82]. Please verify that the reference numbering is consistent throughout the manuscript. 7. For references 69/61, confirm whether the author’s name is “Tampah-Naah” or “Naah.” Please ensure consistency in author names on pages 23–34 and 30–37. 8. On page 11, use a consistent font to report the meta-regression results. 9. If feasible, consider including the PRISMA 2012 or PRISMA 2020 checklist as an additional file. 10. Good luck! Reviewer #2: Our initial recommendations have mainly been resolved, but I found other minor issues that need to be addressed. “Searches were conducted in databases including PubMed, Scopus, Web of Science, and Google Scholar to identified research ….” should be changed to “identify” in the method section. “exclusive breastfeeding (AOR = 3.06, 95%CI: 2.12-4.43)” There is still no consistency in writing the figures as seen in ventilated improved pit latrines (AOR = 0.85, 95% CI: 0.77-0.95). Please keep to a consistent format of writing the “95% CI”. “Regarding the study setting, 56 articles were done community-based…” should either be “56 articles were community-based” or “56 articles were done in community-based. The reference at 53 and 54 are the same. Is there any reason why they are separated? “The pooled prevalence of diarrheal disease among under-five children in Africa was found 23.590%” should be corrected. In your discussion, you said, “Furthermore, a meta-analysis of five and six studies revealed that households with more than two under-five children and those with larger family sizes had a higher likelihood of developing DD compared to households with fewer children and smaller family sizes”. Why the choice of five and six studies? Can you add the reference to the studies used in that sentence? ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org |
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Prevalence of Diarrheal Diseases and Associated Factors Among Under Five Children in Africa: A Meta-analysis PONE-D-24-52714R2 Dear Dr. Worede, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Hope Onohuean, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thank you for addressing all comments. Additional comment: after et al whether to use punctuation or not should be consistent. Some used (.), some do not use (.) punctuation. But I think the publisher will handle this. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No ********** |
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