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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The paper describes an interesting approach to answering a very common question: Is this skin "defect" a melanoma or not ? And it would be very relevant if the described tape analysis could make it easier for patients to have a correct diagnosis. Furthermore - the tape test could potentially be offered as a test you perform at home and just send the tape samples to a laboratory for analysis. However I have quite a few comments, particularly to the standardization of the analytical method. 1. Introduction In the introduction (Line 37-38) it is stated that over a million cases of skin cancer is diagnosed each year worldwide. The reference for this statement is ref 1, which is from 2013. But ref. 1 refers back to a paper from 2010 that summarizes numbers from 2006. Is is possible to find more recent information about the number diagnosed per year ? Ref. 3 - please check - it must be the wrong paper in the ref list. Ref 4 - is that correct ? Please check all references carefully 2.3 Metabolite extraction In section 2.3 it is described that the three tape samples are extracted for one hour with 1 mL 20% methanol. Then 200 µL from each extraction is pooled before addition of the internal standard. I know it is too late to change this but I would definitely have added the internal standards to the 1 mL extraction solvent to also compensate for losses during extraction. 2.4 LC-MS/MS/ analysis In general I find it very difficult to deduct how the quantification was performed. Generally in LC-MS/MS analyses calibrators, internal controls and samples are prepared in the same way, i.e. you pipette a certain amount of sample and add a certain amount of internal standard to everything. Then the calibration curve is obtained (automatically in the LC-MS/MS system) by plotting the concentration on the X-axis and the response factor (peak area of analyte divided by peak area of internal standard). In this paper internal standard (unknown amount of 0,25 µM) is added to combined extracts (se comment above too) of tape samples whereas the calibrators are prepared with the internal standard already added. The paper does not mention if calibrators are prepared and aliquoted to be used for different sample sets or if the calibrators are prepared every time samples are run. Or maybe the whole experiment was one single run ? Anyway if samples and calibrators were not prepared on the same day with the same solution of internal standard added in the same amount it could result in erroneous results. Furthermore - as I read the paper - no internal controls are used. I appreciate that internal controls cannot be prepared in the same way as the samples since you cannot have multiple skin collection sites with known amount of the amino acids. But it would be interesting to see if you could extract a known amount of amino acids that were pipetted directly on the tape (in a small amount of liquid) and then extracted in the same way as the patient samples. In Table S2 - please adjust the number of digits after the comma to more reasonable numbers. The precision of the method seems to be a measure of repeatability rather than intermediary precision since it is a measurement of the same calibration solutions three times, as I read it. The precisions obtained are therefore very low and not comparable with intermediary precisions found in the normal way where you have internal controls that are measured together with the calibrators and samples over at least 5 different days from five different sample preparation sets. The limit of quantification would normally be determined as a precision profile showing the lowest concentration that can be measured on internal controls near the LOQ with an intermediary precision below 20% in at least 5 sample sets. Here you do not have any internal controls - hence the calculation from the standard curve instead which may be acceptable. As regards the table showing the LOD and the LOQ - please explain the two numbers before and after the slashes ? Having said all this the exact concentration may not be very important since extract from the lesions are compared with extracts from the same patient in a healthy area. But you need to describe in more detail, so that we know you are not seeing a systematic difference between lesion type just because the samples were from individual runs with potentially different concentrations of the isotopically labelled internal standards (due to lack of stability). I hope my point makes sense … Results In Table 1 there is a column called Sampling size which shows the diameter defined by adhesive frame. I am not sure how to understand this since earlier in the paper it is stated that the tape is 20 mm in diameter. So why is the sampling size less than 20 mm ? Figures Since the LC-MS/MS analysis has not been published previously I think you should add a Figure showing a chromatogram for for instance a calibrator and a patient sample with low concentrations of the analytes. Reviewer #2: The study is designed and executed in methodologically and medically sound manner. Clustering of malignant and benign tissues in multivariate analysis is impressive. Discussion on biological reasons of different aminoacid signatures is also sound. In conclusion I would recommend this pilot study for publication. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Benjamin Benzon ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Dear Dr. Jankovskaja, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 03 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Kind regards, Krishnendu Sinha, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors have answered all my questions in a satisfying way and I my opinion the paper is ready for publication. Reviewer #3: The manuscript presents an interesting follow-up study investigating the metabolic alterations of tryptophan (Trp) and kynurenine (Kyn) in melanoma lesions using non-invasive tape sampling. The study builds upon the authors’ previous work and explores whether a higher Kyn abundance and lower Trp abundance can be detected on the surface of cutaneous melanoma lesions compared with adjacent non-lesional skin. While the study is methodologically novel and clinically relevant, several concerns need to be addressed: 1. The authors should clearly define the inclusion and exclusion criteria in the Methods section. Individuals with melanoma or similar skin lesions often have other coexisting dermatological conditions due to shared risk factors such as UV exposure, genetic predisposition, and immunosuppression. These conditions, including actinic keratosis, seborrheic keratosis, dysplastic nevi, and inflammatory skin diseases such as psoriasis or atopic dermatitis, may confound the metabolic profiles observed in the study. The authors should clarify whether such conditions were excluded or controlled for in the study design. 2. It is essential to specify the international classification system used to stratify samples into different groups. Did the study follow the AJCC (American Joint Committee on Cancer) melanoma staging system or the WHO classification of skin tumors? Providing this information would enhance the reproducibility and clinical relevance of the findings. 3. Did the authors observe significant differences in Kyn and Trp levels between: Malignant melanoma vs. benign pigmented lesions (e.g., dysplastic nevi, seborrheic keratosis)? Benign lesions vs. adjacent non-lesional skin? A stratified analysis addressing these comparisons would provide valuable insights into whether Kyn/Trp alterations are melanoma-specific or part of a broader metabolic dysregulation associated with skin lesions. 4. How does the tape sampling technique compare to traditional methods such as punch biopsies and fine-needle aspiration? The authors should discuss the advantages and limitations of tape sampling in terms of sensitivity, specificity, and reproducibility for detecting Trp-Kyn pathway alterations. 5. Given that skin microbiota and pH can influence tryptophan metabolism, it is important to discuss whether microbial degradation of Trp into Kyn (e.g., by skin-resident bacteria such as Cutibacterium acnes) or variations in skin pH might affect the measured ratios. Were any steps taken to mitigate these confounding effects? 6.Higher kynurenine levels have also been reported in psoriasis, an inflammatory skin disease characterized by increased IDO1 expression and Trp metabolism. The discussion should include a comparison of Kyn levels in melanoma versus inflammatory dermatoses such as psoriasis, atopic dermatitis, and lichen planus. This will help differentiate whether increased Kyn is specific to melanoma or part of a broader immunological response in skin disorders. 7. Do kynurenine levels positively correlate with melanoma progression, tumor thickness , ulceration, or metastasis? If such correlations exist, kynurenine could serve as a potential non-invasive biomarker for disease staging and prognosis. The authors should provide statistical analyses supporting or refuting such associations. 8. Several pigmented skin lesions clinically mimic melanoma, including: • Pigmented Basal Cell Carcinoma (BCC) • Pigmented Squamous Cell Carcinoma (SCC) • Atypical/Dysplastic Nevi • Seborrheic Keratosis • Blue Nevus • Lentigo Maligna (a melanoma in situ subtype) It would be valuable to discuss whether these lesions also exhibit increased kynurenine levels. If available, the authors should compare their findings with existing literature on Trp-Kyn metabolism in these lesions. 9.The study would benefit from a broader contextualization within existing literature. Prior studies using metabolomics approaches have examined Trp-Kyn alterations in melanoma. The authors should integrate findings from studies indexed in PubMed that have investigated Kynurenine as a biomarker for melanoma progression, The role of IDO1/TDO2 inhibitors in melanoma therapy, The impact of immunotherapy (e.g., checkpoint inhibitors) on Trp-Kyn metabolism. A comprehensive discussion comparing the current findings with previous reports would strengthen the manuscript's scientific impact. 10. Given the role of kynurenine in immune suppression via the Aryl Hydrocarbon Receptor (AhR) pathway, could non-invasive kynurenine measurements help in monitoring response to immunotherapy? If kynurenine is a driver of immune evasion, IDO1/TDO2 inhibitors could be potential therapeutic targets. The authors should explore the clinical implications of their findings in melanoma treatment. Overall, the study provides valuable insights into non-invasive metabolic profiling of melanoma. However, addressing the above concerns will improve the rigor, clinical applicability, and scientific impact of the findings. Providing additional data on stratified comparisons, controlling for confounding factors, and expanding the discussion on kynurenine’s role in melanoma progression and immune evasion would significantly enhance the manuscript. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Non-invasive tape sampling of tryptophan and kynurenine in relation to phenylalanine and tyrosine from melanoma and adjacent non-lesional skin: a pilot study PONE-D-24-54523R2 Dear Dr. Jankovskaja, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Krishnendu Sinha, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #3: The authors have addressed all the queries satisfactorily and made necessary changes in the manuscript. The manuscript in its present form can be considered for publication. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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