Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 28, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-55910High-Accuracy Spinal Alignment Monitoring Using Head Angle and Visual Distance in Computer UsersPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hashimoto, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 02 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study evaluates the reliability and validity of 3D motion analysis compared to traditional radiographic measurements for spinal alignment assessment, aiming to establish a radiation-free alternative for clinical practice. Twenty-one subjects underwent 3D analysis, while 32 underwent radiographic validation. Results showed strong correlations for cervical spine (R>0.8) but weaker for thoracic/lumbar regions. While the methodology appears sound, there are significant limitations in sample size and validation approach that need addressing. I have the following comments: 1. The most pressing concern is the insufficient sample size and lack of power analysis. The current sample sizes (n=21 and n=32) are not adequately justified, potentially leading to Type II errors. Please conduct a formal power analysis to determine appropriate sample sizes based on the primary outcome measures. Either justify the current numbers using appropriate statistical reasoning or consider increasing the study population to achieve adequate statistical power. Additionally, please clarify why different sample sizes were used for the two measurement methods and how this might affect the study's conclusions. 2. The Materials and Methods section requires substantial expansion regarding measurement methodology and analysis protocols. Please provide: (a) detailed description of the 3D motion analysis system setup, including camera positions, calibration procedures, and marker placement protocols; (b) specific measurement conditions and standardization procedures; (c) complete radiographic imaging protocols including positioning and measurement techniques; (d) reliability testing procedures including inter- and intra-rater reliability assessments; and (e) data quality control measures. This information is essential for ensuring study reproducibility and validity assessment. 3. The statistical analysis requires substantial revision. Please implement appropriate corrections for multiple comparisons (e.g., Bonferroni or False Discovery Rate corrections) given the multiple parameters being analyzed. Add cross-validation procedures and include effect sizes with 95% confidence intervals for all primary outcomes. Additionally, provide intraclass correlation coefficients (ICC) for reliability measures and Bland-Altman plots for agreement analysis between the two measurement methods. The correlation analysis should be supplemented with measures of absolute agreement and systematic bias assessment. 4. The data analysis methodology needs more detailed documentation. Please provide: (a) detailed description of all analysis scripts, including software versions and specific parameters used; (b) step-by-step data processing workflows; (c) criteria for data inclusion/exclusion; and (d) handling of missing or aberrant data points. Consider providing these analysis scripts as supplementary materials or in a public repository to enhance reproducibility. Additionally, please clarify the rationale for the chosen analysis methods and any assumptions made during the analysis process. 5. I suggest this manuscript requires significant improvement in language usage and structural consistency. Specific issues include: (a) inconsistent use of technical terminology throughout the paper; (b) unclear transitions between sections; (c) variable tense usage, particularly in the methods and results sections; and (d) complex sentence structures that obscure key findings. I strongly recommend engaging a professional English editing service to enhance the manuscript's readability and ensure clear communication of the research findings. Pay particular attention to standardizing terminology, maintaining consistent tense usage throughout each section, and improving overall flow and clarity. These revisions are essential for improving the manuscript's scientific rigor and clarity. Please address each point thoroughly in your revision. Reviewer #2: This study evaluates the reliability and validity of 3D motion analysis compared to traditional radiographic measurements for spinal alignment assessment, aiming to establish a radiation-free alternative for clinical practice. Twenty-one subjects underwent 3D analysis, while 32 underwent radiographic validation. Results showed strong correlations for cervical spine (R>0.8) but weaker for thoracic/lumbar regions. While the methodology appears sound, there are significant limitations in sample size and validation approach that need addressing. I have the following comments: (1) The primary concern lies in the absence of a clear clinical relevance discussion. While the study demonstrates correlations between 3D motion analysis and radiographic measurements, it fails to establish the practical implications for clinical decision-making. The authors should elaborate on how the differences between measurement methods might impact clinical care, provide specific threshold values for clinically significant differences, and discuss the potential benefits and limitations of implementing 3D motion analysis in routine clinical practice. This discussion should include cost-effectiveness considerations and practical implementation challenges. (2)A significant methodological issue is the lack of demographic and clinical characteristics analysis. The current manuscript does not adequately address how factors such as age, gender, body mass index, or pre-existing spinal conditions might influence measurement accuracy. I suggest that you should provide detailed participant characteristics, conduct subgroup analyses where appropriate, and discuss how these factors might affect the generalizability of their findings. Additionally, inclusion and exclusion criteria should be more clearly defined and justified. (3)The third critical point concerns the absence of measurement error analysis and reliability testing over time. While single-time-point correlations are presented, the study lacks information about test-retest reliability, minimal detectable change, and standard error of measurement for both techniques. I suggest that you should conduct and report comprehensive reliability analyses, including intra-rater and inter-rater reliability for both measurement methods, and provide data on the temporal stability of measurements. This information is crucial for determining the clinical utility of the 3D motion analysis system. (4)The results presentation requires substantial improvement in terms of data visualization and organization. The current figures and tables do not effectively communicate the relationship between measurement methods or the distribution of differences. I suggest that you should include scatter plots with identity lines for method comparisons, Bland-Altman plots showing limits of agreement, and clear visual representations of measurement variations across different spinal regions. (5) Finally, the discussion section needs major revision to address study limitations and future research directions more comprehensively. The current discussion does not adequately contextualize the findings within the existing literature or address potential sources of systematic bias. I suggest that you should provide a more balanced interpretation of their results, including detailed comparison with similar studies, thorough analysis of methodological limitations, and specific recommendations for future research to address current gaps. (6) Additionally, I suggest that you should discuss the potential impact of technological advances and how their findings might influence future development of spine assessment tools. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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High-Accuracy Spinal Alignment Monitoring Using the Head Angle and Visual Distance in Computer Users PONE-D-24-55910R1 Dear Dr. Hashimoto, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Kentaro Yamada, M.D., Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Reviewers' comments: Reviewer #1: The authors have revised their manuscript well according to the reviewers' comments.Thank you for the efforts. Reviewer #2: The authors have revised their manuscript well based on the reviewers' suggestions. Thank you for your effort. |
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PONE-D-24-55910R1 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hashimoto, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Kentaro Yamada Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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