Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 10, 2024 |
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Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information.-->?> [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: In this article, the author presents a method to maximize the reproducibility of stable isotope diet chronologies using fish eye lenses. The content of this paper is comprehensive and the data is detailed and reliable. However, there is one question that needs to be addressed before publication. For this study, the researchers utilized adult Chinook Salmon (Oncorhynchus tshawytscha) to conduct the investigation and found that the lens diameter in relation to isotope patterns was nearly identical. However, has this result been validated in other fish species? I suggest that the authors provide data from an additional species of fish. Reviewer #2: Review of PONE-D-24-57172: “Enhancing reproducibility in stable isotope analysis (SIA) of fish eye lenses: A comparison between lamina number and diameter”. General comment: The manuscript presents a well-structured study comparing two methods for analysing fish eye lens using stable isotope analysis (SIA). The study is relevant and timely, given the increasing use of eye lenses for dietary and life-history reconstructions. The methodology is clear, and the results convincingly demonstrate that using lens diameter instead of lamina number improves reproducibility. Its findings have practical implications for standardising ecological research. However, some areas require some clarification, additional justification, or minor revisions. Minor comments: Line 20: The sentence "Fish eye lenses grow sequentially throughout their ontogeny, resulting in a structure of multiple layers, or laminae" is accurate but slightly awkward. Suggestion: Rephrase to "Fish eye lenses grow throughout their ontogeny, forming multiple sequential layers, or laminae," to improve readability. Line 22: The analogy "much like tree rings" is useful but lacks context for readers unfamiliar with SIA. Suggestion: Add a brief clarification, e.g., "much like tree rings, which record environmental conditions over time." Line 26: The phrasing "peeled lenses from each eye of the same adult Chinook Salmon" is unclear about the experimental design. Suggestion: Clarify as "Each researcher independently delaminated one lens from each of 10 adult Chinook Salmon." Line 33: "Analyzing the laminae based on lamina number resulted in significant variability between researchers" lacks specificity. Suggestion: Specify the nature of variability, e.g., "Analysis based on lamina number showed significant variability in isotope values and lamina counts between researchers." Line 40: The opening sentence is maybe a bit abrupt. Suggestion: Start with a broader context, e.g., "Understanding animal diets is fundamental to ecology, informing conservation and management strategies, yet capturing lifetime dietary shifts remains challenging." Lines 40-47: This first paragraph could use some references. Line 48: The claim about eye lenses as an "emerging archival tissue" is true and could be elaborated. Suggestion: Add "due to their metabolically inert laminae, which preserve stable isotope values reflective of diet over time." Line 65: “or isotope maps” instead of “or geographic map”. Line 68: The example of the Atlantic goliath grouper is relevant but long/wordy. Suggestion: "For example, SIA of eye lenses revealed habitat shifts in Atlantic goliath grouper (Epinephelus itajara), emphasizing the role of mangrove connectivity in conservation [11]." Line 81: Microscopes’ cameras do provide good resolution to measure eye lens diameters. However, are they always needed if there is no access to costly microscope cameras? The use of a digital calliper (that is not as expensive as a microscope’s camera) is also a valuable tool to measure eye lens diameters. Line 102: Fish origin is not mentioned. Add context if available. Line 105: What temperature were the Eppendorf tubes kept at? Line 106: The delamination process is a bit unclear regarding lens assignment. Suggestion: Revise to "Both researcher independently delaminated one lens (left or right) from each of the 10 fish, ensuring paired lenses from the same fish were analyzed separately." Line 107: Citation accuracy should be verified. Suggestion: Ensure [6] directly supports the delamination protocol or if another reference related to delamination could be added. Additional, reverse citing order i.e., [5], then [6]. Lines 107-108 and Lines 238-239: “A membrane of gelatinous material, often referred to as the outer cortex” has already been defined in the introduction. You can start this sentence by: “The outer cortex…” Line 112: how were the laminae dried? What temperature, for how long? Line 116: “meet the 0.6mg-6 mg” 6 mg seems a lot for stable isotope measurements. Is this correct? Line 121: Figure 3 and its description are well presented. This is a very valuable section. However, most of the caption description could be incorporated into the main text.Line 129: T-tests are suitable for comparing the means of two independent groups (the researchers). However, there is no statement about the fact that the data are normally distributed, and variances are equal, which is a prerequisite to use these tests. Line 174: “Figures 7a, 7b, 7C, and 7d” could be changed to (Figs 7a–d) for clarity. Line 186: no need to redefine SIA. Line 193: “and are used in combination with other endogenous records like otoliths to provide a comprehensive understanding of the species being studied” – any references here? Line 195: From there, the whole discussion section could use some references. For instance, citing the studies who are already using eye lens diameter. Line 210: As comment above, lens diameter is presented as a novel proposal, though prior studies used it. Suggestion: Adjust to "Lens diameter, already adopted in some studies [references], proved more reliable than lamina number." Line 237: Future Works - This section is brief and relevant. Any thoughts on developing a standardised method to measure the outer cortex? Line 252: in the methods, it reads that the stable isotope lab used was: “All samples were then submitted to the CAMAS Stable Isotope Laboratory at Idaho State University for δ¹³C and δ¹⁵N analysis” – which is it? Reviewer #3: Congratulations on your work. You have relevant research that contributes to the development of SRI and optimizes resources for work with fish. I think you have a great piece of writing, however, my main comment is that in many sections of your writing, you repeat concepts and omit the rationale for what you want to express by not citing many sections, primarily in the introduction, methodology, and discussion. While it is true that we can recognize many general patterns, there are statements that necessarily need to be substantiated. Furthermore, I believe the use of tables in your writing is excessive, and in many cases, they could be omitted and better summarized in the text, or simply not presented at all. Always consider presenting only what is essential and helps facilitate understanding of your writing. Finally, and respectfully, I would like to suggest that you may want to reconsider submitting this work as an article, as the content is limited in terms of the breadth of information and the sample size (species and individuals). I believe you should consult similar works to what you propose and base your proposal on them. I once again congratulate you on the excellent work you have produced. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Enhancing reproducibility in stable isotope analysis (SIA) of fish eye lenses: A comparison between lamina number and diameter PONE-D-24-57172R1 Dear Dr. Li, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Vitor Hugo Rodrigues Paiva, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: I believe the authors have addressed all the concerns, so I recommend that the article be accepted for publication. Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Thank you for the version you've included. I've noticed improvements in both its structure and content. I still believe you have a relevant topic worth sharing with the scientific community. I have no major comments on the work, and I believe it can be accepted. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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