Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 23, 2025 |
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Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. Reviewer #1: The study is well-structured and follows a rigorous enough methodological/statistical framework, employing a randomized, double-blind, placebo-controlled design, which is the gold standard for clinical trials. The sample size of 138 participants (69 participants for each group) appears reasonable, as it is based on a power analysis that considers the expected effect size and accounts for potential dropout rates. The statistical methods used to analyze the primary outcome, particularly the mixed-effect model for repeated measures (MMRM), are appropriate for handling longitudinal data, allowing for assessing treatment effects over time while accounting for intra-subject variability. Additionally, the study takes care to minimize bias through a well-executed randomization and blinding procedure, ensuring that neither participants nor investigators are aware of group assignments. The inclusion and exclusion criteria are clearly defined, aiming to reduce confounding factors that could impact the study's validity. The use of multiple imputation for missing data further strengthens the analysis by addressing potential biases introduced by participant dropout or missing values. The selection of primary and secondary outcomes is generally well-justified. While the Cough Diary Score (CDS) is subjective, it is commonly used in clinical trials related to cough assessment. Moreover, including validated secondary outcome measures, such as the Leicester Cough Questionnaire (LCQ-K) and the Gastroesophageal Reflux Disease Questionnaire (GERDQ), adds robustness to the overall evaluation of treatment efficacy. The study also integrates an economic evaluation, which enhances its potential relevance from a healthcare policy perspective. Major comments Despite these strengths, the following four methodological aspects, with particular emphasis on the third one, require further attention before the paper can be accepted. Addressing these issues would further strengthen the study’s credibility and ensure that its findings are interpreted with appropriate statistical rigor. 1. The reliance on the Cough Diary Score (CDS), a patient-reported measure, raises concerns about potential bias, even with blinding. It would be beneficial to include more objective measures of cough severity, such as cough frequency monitoring via acoustic analysis. 2. The study does not use 24-hour esophageal pH monitoring or multichannel intraluminal impedance, which are considered more objective measures for diagnosing GERD and its role in chronic cough. This could lead to misclassification bias, as some participants may not have true reflux-induced chronic cough. Justifying this methodological choice and discussing its implications in greater detail would strengthen the study. 3. While the study evaluates multiple secondary outcomes, it is not explicitly stated whether statistical corrections for multiple comparisons (e.g., Bonferroni or false discovery rate adjustments) are applied. Given the number of secondary analyses, failing to account for multiple testing could increase the likelihood of false-positive findings. 4. The sample size calculation is based on an effect size of 0.75, but it is unclear whether this estimate is conservatively justified. If the true effect size is smaller, the study may be underpowered to detect meaningful differences. Providing a sensitivity analysis or justifying the robustness of this assumption would help address this concern. Reviewer #2: In addressing the prevalent extraesophageal symptom of gastroesophageal reflux disease (GERD), chronic cough (GERC), this manuscript makes a significant contribution to a better application. A total of 138 participants improves the findings' external validity and generalizability across various patient populations and clinical settings. In short, they designed a randomized, double-blind, placebo-controlled, parallel, multi-center, investigator-initiated clinical trial to evaluate the effectiveness, safety, and economics of the combined herbal medicine of Ojeok-san (OJS) and Saengmaek-san (SMS) in treating GERC in five hospitals in Korea. Then, using a number of validated tools, including the cough diary score, cough VAS, and an excessive number of questions, they demonstrated the effectiveness. Furthermore, the study was approved by the IRBs and MFDS of several respectable institutions, guaranteeing ethical rigor. Additionally, the registration (KCT0008908) enhances dependability and transparency. However, there are a few limitations to this study that might be considered to enhance the manuscript for publication: 1- NO LINE NUMBERS/ NO conclusion, so please add a paragraph at the end of discussion to summarize what are the outcomes from this study for clarity. 2- The study makes use of traditional herbal formulations (Ojeok-san and Saengmaek-san), and repeatability may be impacted by the variations in herbal composition. 3- Despite seeking to evaluate safety and efficacy, the study doesn't seem to look at the mechanisms underlying GERC or the methods that OJS+SMS work. 4- Given that GERC can be chronic and variable, a 4- to 6-week course of treatment and an 8-week total follow-up may not be enough to evaluate long-term efficacy, safety, and recurrence of symptoms. 5- Because the study was only carried out in Korea, its applicability to Western populations or other healthcare environments may be limited by cultural, dietary, and medical variations. 6- There is no reference to the use of objective diagnostic tools for GERD/GERC, such as pH monitoring and impedance testing, which could impair the accuracy of determining the severity of the illness and its response to treatment. ********** what does this mean? ). 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Efficacy, safety, and economic evaluation of Ojeok-san plus Saengmaek-san for gastroesophageal reflux-induced chronic cough: protocol for a randomized, double-blind, placebo-controlled, parallel, multicenter, investigator-initiated clinical trial PONE-D-24-59964R1 Dear Dr. Lyu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Emmanuel O Adewuyi, BPharm, MPH, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. Reviewer #1: The authors effectively revised the paper in response to the feedback received, addressing my concerns with clarity and incorporating suggested improvements to enhance the overall quality of the manuscript. Reviewer #2: Dear authors, I have carefully reviewed the revised version and am pleased to see that the authors have addressed all of my previous comments satisfactorily. I appreciate your response! ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-24-59964R1 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lyu, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Emmanuel O Adewuyi Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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