Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 21, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-15254Research on Learning Achievement Classification Based on Machine LearningPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ruishuang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: Revise your submission as per the reviewers' comments. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 30 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1.The study tackles an important and socially impactful problem—predicting student academic performance using machine learning, which has growing significance in the era of data-driven education. 2.The proposed Gaussian Distribution-based Data Augmentation (GDO) technique coupled with a Radial Basis Function Network (RBFN) is interesting. However, is GDO a novel method or an adaptation of existing Gaussian-based oversampling techniques like SMOTE variants? 3.The reported accuracy (94.12%) and F1 score (94.46%) are impressive. How does this compare with other baseline models without GDO? Were these improvements statistically significant? 4.It is suggested to add article entitled “Al-Ali et al. Analyzing Socio-Academic Factors and Predictive Modeling of Student Performance Using Machine Learning Techniques” to the literature review. 5.While the classification accuracy is emphasized, does the study address interpretability of the models? Which features were most influential in predicting academic achievement, and can these be translated into actionable insights for educators? 6.The paper mentions using variance homogeneity and p-values to evaluate the synthetic data quality. Could more advanced metrics like distribution overlap, Fréchet distance, or t-SNE visualizations be considered for assessing augmentation effectiveness? 7.Did the original dataset suffer from class imbalance (e.g., high vs. low-performing students)? How does GDO compare to traditional oversampling techniques like SMOTE, ADASYN, or GAN-based augmentations? 8.The paper acknowledges the limitation in generalization to small datasets or specific student populations. Has cross-validation across multiple cohorts or schools been considered? 9.Has there been any consideration of how this model could be deployed in practical educational settings? Could it be integrated into a learning management system (LMS) or used by teachers for early intervention? 10.It is also suggested to add articles entitled “Aziz & Elsonbaty. Comparative Study of Different Classification Methods and Winner Takes All Approach” and “Blegur et al. Peer-Assessment Academic Integrity Scale (PAAIS-24)” to the literature review. 11.Did the authors compare their approach with standard educational prediction benchmarks (e.g., logistic regression, XGBoost, or LSTM)? This would help validate the unique value of the GDO-RBFN approach. 12.The conclusion mentions that the RBFN performed best with “educational habit features.” What specifically do these include? Are they related to study frequency, attendance, time-on-task, or something else? 13.The future direction toward integrating more advanced deep learning and exploring feature engineering techniques is well-aligned with current research trends. Could the authors elaborate on which specific models or techniques they plan to explore (e.g., transformers, attention-based networks)? Reviewer #2: The paper is well written. The idea is interesting and the obtained result is valuable. This paper may be accepted if the following problems can be clarified. 1. What specific improvements the authors consider regarding the methodology? 2. Kindly enrich the literature review of this paper by citing additional references related to the topic addressed: Quantized Iterative Learning Control of Communication Constrained System with the Encoding and Decoding Mechanism, Transactions of the Institute of Measurement and Control; ADP-Based Prescribed-Time Control for Nonlinear Time-Varying Delay Systems With Uncertain Parameters, IEEE Transactions on Automation Science and Engineering; Saturated-threshold event-triggered adaptive global prescribed performance control for nonlinear Markov jumping systems and application to a chemical reactor model, Expert Systems with Applications; It could be the object of a brief consideration focused on the advances on the topic and make relation with this paper, which have to be discussed to indicate the contribution in the Introduction section, and in that way point out other contemporary approaches and possibilities. 3. Authors should argue their choice of the performance evaluation indicators. 4. Have the authors experimented with other sets of values? What are the sensitivities of these parameters on the results? 5. Explain the feasibility of the results from the implementation and computational point of view. 6. Authors should clearly define what quantities must be specified to begin the algorithm. Did the authors consider how many initial conditions affect the outcome? 7. The paper does not explicitly discuss the limitations of the proposed algorithm. Every algorithm has its shortcomings, and it would be helpful to include a section discussing potential drawbacks or scenarios where considered approach might not perform optimally. 8. Each reference has to be double verified, and also reference writing style needs to be uniform. It is essential to review all references, fill in any gaps with Volumes, Issues, and Pages, and revise any inaccurate information. 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Research on Learning Achievement Classification Based on Machine Learning PONE-D-25-15254R1 Dear Dr. Ruishuang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The Revisions are satisfactory in my opinion, and I would certainly recommend the Editors to Publish the Paper in their esteemed Journal. Reviewer #2: The topic appears interesting theoretically, and the applications are academic. There were some issues that have now been resolved. The results obtained are promising and accurate. The paper deserves to be published in this form. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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