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Original SubmissionJanuary 17, 2025
Decision Letter - Basavantraya Devanna, Editor

PONE-D-25-02422Editing metacaspase (StMC7) gene enhances late blight resistance in Russet Burbank potatoPLOS ONE

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Dear Authors,

Thank you very much for this interesting article "Editing metacaspase (StMC7) gene enhances late blight resistance in Russet Burbank potato". Before making further decision, I request you to please address the comments from both the reviewers.

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Dear Authors,

I have made my comments in the PDF version of the manuscript. The authors are requested to review all comments in the edited version and address them carefully. A graphical representation has been suggested to enhance the understanding of the resistance mechanism of the StMC7 mutant allele in potatoes against pathogens, provide a better reading experience for readers, and improve the quality of the manuscript.

Reviewer #2: Dear Authors,

This is very valuable findings on the editing of StMC7 involved in the PCD pathway which reduces the disease severity of Phytophthora and Alternaria pathogen in potato. The manuscript is well written and easily under stable. The following suggestions may be addressed for improvement in the manuscript. Best wishes

Major comments:

1. The detection of T0 plants positive for transformation with vector specifc/T-DNA specific primers are not mentioned in methodology. PCR screening of T0 lines for HPT or other primers can be included in Figure 3

2. Editing was confirmed using the RD and NGS technology. The wild type amplicon sequencing data was not mentioned in NGS. Further, NGS library details, primers, no. of reads, and read length can be updated in the manuscript. As the authors have detected the editing using restriction enzyme assay, SANGER sequencing could be performed for substantiation.

3. Interesting to note that the expression of the StMC7 was also highly reduced in edited lines. Might be instead of comparison between edited and non transformed wild type, it is suggested to compare between the infected and non-infected leaves of the wild type and edited lines. This reduction could be indirect effect of reduced PCD upon pathogen infection. This needs to be elaborated in the discussion.

Minor Comments

Line No-162: RBD design is done with experimental units separated into blocks, this would be CRD, verify

Line no-199: StMC7, check for italics and throughout the manuscript

Line no 248: P. infestans, check for italics and throughout the manuscript

Figure 6 legends is not complete.

Fig.5 and 6: Gene expression ratio could be changed to relative fold change

Fig.4: Please mention generation of seedlings in which tested, guess it is T0

Liter Units is mentioned as L or l in the manuscript, check for uniformity

Three guides are used and assay of editing is reported for one single guide. The details of editing for other two guide may be included

Conditions for disease screening can be updated as temperature requirement for both the pathogens for causing disease symptoms varies considerably

As resistance is mentioned in the title and the manuscript, disease resistance score (SES 1-9) could be updated in the manuscript (Methodology and Results).

DNA laddering is the characteristics of AL-PCD and it would be interesting to know the status of the DNA laddering in the infected edited leaves

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April 10, 2025

Dear Dr. Devanna and Reviewers,

We are pleased to receive the comments from our reviewers. We believe these feedbacks are very helpful in improving our manuscript and are grateful for the reviews. We have responded to all their comments in detail in the following pages. Reviewers’ comments are in black and our reply to the reviews is in maroon. We would like to thank the reviewers for their critical comments.

Reviewer #1:

Line 30 : Is Stmc7 a knockout mutant or knockdown (or silenced)?

- Agreed. We have modified into “Stmc7 knockdown mutants.”

Line 47: added “as well as”

- Agreed. We have added the phrase "as well as”

Line 69: HRC: What are other functions of this gene rather than involvement in plant resistance against pathogen?

- HRC regulates calcium uptake and release and maintain the calcium ion homeostasis. It may influence the expression of other genes involved in plant defense response. Further study is needed to understand other roles of the gene. The next sentence in line 70 explains the known function of HRC.

Line 92: There are a total of nine metacaspase genes in potato. Why was StMC7 chosen for characterization in this crop?

- We have mentioned the reason for selecting StMC7 in line 85 – 88. In addition, the research article we cited as 20 i.e. Dubey et al. (2019) also demonstrated that StMC7 is the most highly expressed metacaspase gene in most tissues during both biotic and abiotic stress conditions, which made StMC7 a prime candidate gene for silencing. Our previous study demonstrated reduced expression of StMC7 upon silencing StHRC. This was the main reason for selection of this metacaspase.

Line 95: Removed phrase ‘for the pathogen.’

- Corrected.

Line 102: What could be the reason for exploiting this susceptible genotype? Why not use another Indian elite potato cultivar that also shows susceptibility to late blight and early blight pathogens?

- Our research lab is based in North America and Russet Burbank is one of the most desired cultivars among farmers as it is suitable for both fresh and processing markets.

Line 149: Italicize the name of the restriction endonuclease.

- Corrected.

Line 160: Room temperature varies depending on location and geographical conditions. Thus, please provide an approximate incubation temperature for A. solani.

- Agreed. Room temperature of 21 - 23 degree Celsius was added in line 165 for A. solani.

Line 213 (Figure 1 legend) and Line 220 (Figure 4 legend): Italicize the name of the restriction endonuclease.

- Corrected at Line 219, 229.

Line 243 ( Figure 5 legend): Check and correct the formatting style of the paragraph.

- Corrected.

Line 248 (Figure 5 legend): Italicize the scientific name.

- Corrected.

Line 255 (Figure 6 legend): Check and correct the formatting style of the paragraph.

- Corrected.

Line 274: The metacaspase 7 (StMC7) gene was either silenced or knocked out, as mentioned in the heading of the results section, "StMC7 Knockout Based on CRISPR-Cas9". The authors need to confirm whether the StMC7 gene was knocked down, knocked out, or both in the RB potato. Based on this confirmation, they should make the necessary changes across the main text, tables, and figures of the manuscript. To knock down or silence a gene means reducing its expression. To knock out a gene means completely suppressing its expression.

- Agreed. Changed knockout to knockdown or silencing at different parts of manuscript.

o Line 94: Changed ‘knockout’ to ‘silencing’.

o Line 183: Changed ‘knockout’ to ‘knockdown’.

o Line 207: Changed ‘knockout’ to ‘silencing’.

Line 295: Why can't the authors construct a model, incorporating the previous one along with the findings obtained in this study? Generating a graphical representation showing how the StMC7 mutant allele contributes to resistance in potatoes against pathogens would be a better way to enhance readers' understanding and improve the quality of the manuscript.

- Agreed. We have added Figure 7 in the manuscript with the following legend in line 322-334: “Figure 7. Proposed model of apoptotic-like programmed cell death (AL-PCD) in plants. Upon Ca2+ entry associated with pathogen attack, Ca2+ sensors decode the calcium signal for downstream activation. StHRC (histidine-rich calcium-binding protein) binds with Ca2+ and moves into the nucleus, increasing the calcium concentration in nucleus which activates endonucleases and causes DNA fragmentation. Ca2+ also enters the mitochondria through VDAC (voltage-dependent anion channel), which produces ROS in mitochondria. Ca2+ activates metacaspases StMC7 in cytosol. The StMC7 then cleaves PROPEP1, releasing PEP1, which signals nearby cells to initiate damage response and leads to condensed vacuole and other organelles. The major characteristics of AL-PCD are shown in bold letters: Plasma membrane breakdown, condensed organelles such as vacuole, mitochondria, condensed chromosome, membrane blebbing. Abbreviations: CaMs: calmodulins, CDPKs: Calcium-dependent protein kinases, CBLs: calcineurin B-like proteins.”

Line 322: What is the RR metabolite? Please briefly describe it for better clarity.

- Agreed. RR metabolites are resistance related metabolites, biosynthesized following pathogen invasion, and reduce pathogen advancement through host cell wall thickening and their antifungal and/or antioxidant properties. For examples: phenylpropanoids (hydroxycinnamic acid amides, flavonoids, monolignols, aldehydes etc.) Added the following in line 343 – 344 “several resistance related (RR) metabolites important for reducing pathogen advancement through host cell wall accumulation and antifungal properties [48].”

Reviewer #2:

1. The detection of T0 plants positive for transformation with vector specific/T-DNA specific primers are not mentioned in methodology. PCR screening of T0 lines for HPT or other primers can be included in Figure 3

- Agreed. We have added the following in methodology section at line 146 – 149, “Initial screening of transgenic seedlings was conducted through a PCR with Cas9 primers (Cas9-F and Cas9-R) (Table 1) using Phusion Green Hot Start II High-Fidelity PCD Master Mix (ThermoFisher Scientific, MA, USA) and run on 1% agarose gel, revealing a positive 957-bp band for Cas9 positive seedlings.”.

We have added figure 4A, showing the results from PCR screening of Cas9 and added the following to the Figure 4 legend (line 226 - 228) “(A) Confirmation of Cas9 presence in all eight regenerated potato seedlings through a 957 bp band. L: 1 kb plus ladder, +: Positive Control (pDIRECT21A plasmid), 1-8: Stmc7 transgenic samples, RB: wild type”.

- We have also added the following in results (line 213 – 214) “PCR and gel analysis of all regenerated eight seedlings exhibited the presence of Cas9 (Fig 4A).”

2. Editing was confirmed using the RD and NGS technology. The wild type amplicon sequencing data was not mentioned in NGS.

-The mutation analysis conducted based on NGS data for the mutants were compared to the wild type NGS data, shown in Figure 4(C).

Further, NGS library details, primers, no. of reads, and read length can be updated in the manuscript.

- NGS library detail and primers were added in line 153-155 “A barcoding library was prepared using tags NGS-tag-F + StMC7-gRNA-1-F and NGS-tag-R + StMC7-gRNA-1-R. The library was purified and..”. Corresponding to the above sentence, StMC7 amplicon primers in Table 1, which was composed of NGS-tag + StMC7-gRNA-1, was removed and replaced with NGS-tag primers.

As the authors have detected the editing using restriction enzyme assay, SANGER sequencing could be performed for substantiation.

- We initially sent samples for Sanger sequencing. However, we regularly got multiple peaks in edited lines, possibly due to heterozygous mutation, and hence we went for NGS sequencing for a concrete proof of mutation.

3. Interesting to note that the expression of the StMC7 was also highly reduced in edited lines. Might be instead of comparison between edited and non-transformed wild type, it is suggested to compare between the infected and non-infected leaves of the wild type and edited lines. This reduction could be indirect effect of reduced PCD upon pathogen infection. This needs to be elaborated in the discussion.

- We have indeed conducted comparison between infected and non-infected leaves for wild type and edited lines for gene expression study. The relative gene expression for all the groups RB-P (wild type-pathogen inoculated), Stmc7-M (mutant non-infected) and Stmc7-P (mutant-pathogen inoculated) are calculated compared to the wild type non-infected leaves as control.

Minor Comments

Line No-162: RBD design is done with experimental units separated into blocks, this would be CRD, verify.

- The treatments within the blocks were randomized, thus what we have done is RCBD.

Line no-199: StMC7, check for italics and throughout the manuscript

- Corrected.

Line no 248: P. infestans, check for italics and throughout the manuscript

- Corrected.

Figure 6 legends is not complete.

- We intended to exclude our pathogen biomass and gene expression data for Alternaria solani due to high Standard Error of Mean (SEM) in our experiment and hence removed the associated legend but submitted the image with gene expression by mistake. We have uploaded the correct figure, excluding figure C and D.

Fig.5 and 6: Gene expression ratio could be changed to relative fold change

- Agreed. We have changed from gene expression ratio to Relative gene expression. We have also added fold change (FC) value at line 245 - 246 and line 249.

Fig.4: Please mention generation of seedlings in which tested, guess it is T0

- Agreed. Added T0 in figure 4 title.

Liter Units is mentioned as L or l in the manuscript, check for uniformity

- Corrected

Three guides are used and assay of editing is reported for one single guide. The details of editing for other two guide may be included.

- We found editing in only one target and no editing for other two guide RNAs. Hence, we have reported editing in only one gRNA. We have mentioned that we didn’t observe mutations for gRNA 2 and 3 in line 215.

Conditions for disease screening can be updated as temperature requirement for both the pathogens for causing disease symptoms varies considerably.

- Agreed. We have added the following phrase “and kept in greenhouse at 21-23oC.” in line 172. Though the optimum condition for late blight is lower than that of early blight, we were bound by greenhouse temperature condition. The plants were covered in plastic bags to maintain >90% humidity, which is more important for disease progression.

As resistance is mentioned in the title and the manuscript, disease resistance score (SES 1-9) could be updated in the manuscript (Methodology and Results).

- Disease resistance was measured as average lesion diameter, which was used to calculate the area under disease progress curve (AUDPC). We believe this method is more accurate and non-biased. Hence, we believe the measures we used are appropriate to discuss resistance.

DNA laddering is the characteristics of AL-PCD and it would be interesting to know the status of the DNA laddering in the infected edited leaves.

- Agreed. However, we couldn’t conduct DNA laddering experiment because of time constraints. We have conducted DNA laddering experiment in our previous study involving silencing of HRC.

Decision Letter - Basavantraya Devanna, Editor

Editing metacaspase (StMC7) gene enhances late blight resistance in Russet Burbank potato

PONE-D-25-02422R1

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Reviewer #1: I have examined all the responses provided by the authors and their incorporation into the revised manuscript (ID: PONE-D-25-02422R1), titled "Editing metacaspase (StMC7) gene enhances late blight resistance in Russet Burbank potato". The authors have carefully addressed all concerns raised during the initial review. The revised manuscript shows substantial improvement in both clarity and overall quality. I am satisfied with the authors’ revisions and responses.

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