Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 2, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-17636-->-->How did the Urban and Rural Resident Basic Medical Insurance integration Affect Medical Costs? ——Evidence from China-->-->PLOS ONE?> Dear Dr. Su, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 02 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: 1. Abstract part needs revision, the result and conclusion part can be extended to provide better information to the readers. 2. The author’s mentioned the following statement, “However, Chinese scholars are divided on the specific path of integration.” Any specific reason; please make it clear for readers. Reference missing. 3. Authors mentioned, “Nationwide implementation marks a practical choice to pursue the integration path by starting with the integration of medical insurance for urban and rural residents”. The readers would have difficulty to extract what the authors try to say here. 4. Authors mentioned the statement “existing studies ignore the hospital level” Any specific reason; please make it clear for readers. Reference missing. 5. Hypothesis of the present study missing. 6. Research question and Aim of the study: the objective is not well phrased. They are not clear on what they are aiming to address. Clarity missing. 7. The present study “organized and integrated data from 2013, 2015, and 2018”. It seems outdated data and predictions/implementation may not reach the objectives. 8. DID abbreviation must be mentioned in Introduction section and authors mentioned in methodology session. 9. The authors used the following statement “There has also been a significant increase in the level of hospitals visited”. Any specific reason; please make it clear for readers. 10. Table 1. Result indicated age is statistically significant. Any specific reason; please make it clear for readers. The interpretation of Tables is not clear. 11. The authors did not mention anywhere details of “statistical methods were used in data and other analysis…” information throughout the manuscript. May it is a very important section for the study in terms of reader understands. 12. The fixed-effects model will calculate only within the data variation, what about between data? 13. Over all manuscript; flow, lack of interpretation and data analysis at tables including citation. For example: Ref: 40: “Rubin D B. Estimating causal effects of treatments in randomized and nonrandomized studies. Journal of educational Psychology.1974, 66(5): 688. And also Ref: 42-44” 14. Though the idea is noble and the framed objectives are interesting, the overall manuscript is mismatching with the discussed or mentioned methods and findings. Reviewer #2: First and foremost, I would like to commend the authors for addressing such a significant topic. The paper effectively delineates of China's healthcare insurance systems, as well as the associated challenges of escalating medical costs and disparities in access. This contextual background provides a robust foundation for understanding the need for policy reform. The paper is well-written and supported by sound methodology and findings. However, I have a few suggestions that could further enhance the quality and reliability of the paper. Introduction section: 1. Abstract: The size of the abstract is lengthy therefore required to reduce it. 2. Problem Statement: The introduction would benefit from a more explicit problem statement that clearly defines the specific research gap addressed by the study. Articulating the research problem more precisely would enhance clarity and provide clearer direction. 3. Information Flow: Consider relocating detailed statistics and comparisons to the results or discussion sections. Streamlining the introduction to focus on key issues and research gaps will improve readability and coherence. 4. Transition and Focus: Improve the transition between the discussion of insurance systems and the rationale for integration. A clearer connection between the historical context and the study’s focus on URRBMI integration will enhance the logical flow. Methodological section 1. Control Variables: Justify the selection of specific control variables more thoroughly. Clarifying how these variables align with theoretical frameworks or previous literature will strengthen the rationale for their inclusion. 2. Bias and Data Handling: While excluding provincial-level data is mentioned, a more concise explanation of how city-level data mitigates potential biases could enhance understanding of the study's robustness. 3. Model Specification: Ensure that the equations provided in the model specification are accompanied by clear explanations of each term to make the methodology more accessible, especially for readers less familiar with econometric techniques. 4. Endogeneity Test: Further detail the matching process and any potential biases in matching to add depth 5. Discuss Potential Limitations: Address potential limitations more explicitly, such as the impact of unobserved variables or the generalizability of the results to other regions or populations. Results section 1. Clarify Statistical Significance: - Ensure that statistical significance levels and effect sizes are clearly reported in all tables. 2. Enhance transitions between sections for better readability. For example, connecting descriptive statistics directly to impact analysis and then to the moral hazard discussion could create a more cohesive narrative. 3. Incorporate Visual Aids: Include charts or graphs in addition to tables to visualize trends and changes more effectively. A line graph showing changes in inpatient visits over time could illustrate trends more dynamically. 4. Sources of Increased Medical Costs: Provide more specific examples or scenarios of demand release versus moral hazard to make the discussion more tangible. 5. Impact of URRBMI Integration: Specify the magnitude of increases in hospitalization and medical costs and how they compare to baseline values. Overall, the paper is well-structured, with a clear focus on evaluating the impact of URRBMI integration. Addressing the suggestions above can enhance clarity and depth, making your findings even more impactful. ********** what does this mean? ). 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