Peer Review History
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PONE-D-24-39301-->-->Do metacognitions contribute to pathological health anxiety? A systematic review and meta-analysis.-->-->PLOS ONE?> Dear Dr. Pohl, Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 16 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Review Do metacognition contribute to pathological health anxiety? A systematic review and meta-analysis This article addresses the role of positive and negative metacognitions in health anxiety and their relationship with pathological safety-seeking and avoidant behaviors. Extending previous findings from other anxiety-related disorders, such as generalized anxiety disorder (GAD), this systematic review seeks to bridge a critical gap in understanding metacognitive contributions to health-related anxiety. The meta-analysis of the results of 23 studies showed positive correlations between Negative (NMC) and Positive Metacognition (PMC) on one hand and health anxiety, as well as with safe seeking behaviors. No included study assessed avoidant behavior. While the methodology appears rigorous, with clear and well-detailed inclusion criteria for the selected studies, several parts of the paper lack clarity, particularly in the introduction. Additionally, inconsistencies in formatting and figures detract from the readability of the article. Introduction The introduction is thematically relevant but requires substantial clarification. • The primary research question is unclear, and some terms central to the study, such as "health anxiety", "safety-seeking behaviors", and "avoidant behaviors" would benefit from explicit definitions to ensure accessibility to a broader readership such as the one of PLoS ONE. • Although the authors cite the metacognitive and cognitive-behavioral models, these frameworks are not adequately described, making it challenging for readers unfamiliar with these concepts to contextualize the study's objectives. • The relationship between health anxiety, safety-seeking behaviors, and avoidance behaviors is not sufficiently detailed, leaving the reader without a clear understanding of how these constructs are conceptualized or interrelated. Methods The methodology is robust, and the explanation of study selection and bias assessment is clear. However, some areas might require additional detail: • How many studies reported regression coefficients and how were they transformed into correlation coefficients? • The section on data preparation mentions subgroups, what do they refer to? • Figure 2 should include titles for panels A and B to improve interpretability. • For analogue samples, it might be helpful to report the average levels and variability in health anxiety Results The results section provides useful information but requires clarification in several places: • In the study selection paragraph, it is unclear whether the cited sample sizes (n) are among the 23 included studies. While Figure 1 and Table 1 are clear and helpful, ensuring that the text aligns with these visuals would improve consistency. • The introduction suggests a causal relationship and sequentiality between PMC and NMC, was the correlation between the two evaluated? • A subgroup analysis based on gender (female/male) could provide additional insights, given the potential for gender differences in health anxiety and related behaviors. Discussion The discussion draws meaningful parallels with findings from related pathologies, such as GAD and obsessive-compulsive disorder (OCD), but lacks specificity regarding health anxiety. • What are the specificities of health anxiety compared to the other cited pathologies? Exploring such differences could highlight the unique contributions of metacognitive processes in this context. • Were the subfacets of health anxiety questionnaires analyzed in the present study? • The authors cite Wells' metacognitive model in the introduction, how do the findings relate to this model? A more explicit connection would improve the theoretical grounding of the results. • Even though no study assessed avoidance behavior, maybe the authors could explicit the theoretical and empirical links with health anxiety and metacognition? Minor comments and typos • Formats of citations are inconsistent, some are author-date and others are numbers. • Figures are separated from their captions In conclusion, while this article tackles an interesting and important topic, the authors should clarify their research questions, better define their objects of study, and provide a more cohesive discussion of how these constructs relate. Greater detail about the relation of the present findings with the previous ones and existing theories of health anxiety would strengthen the contribution of this review to the field. minor issues, typos.. The formatting of references is inconsistent. Please correct it. In several places, punctuation is incorrect, complexifying the reading Reviewer #2: Summary: In this systematic review and meta-analysis, the authors set out to assess associations between positive and negative metacognitions on the one hand, and health anxiety and related behaviors (safety seeking and avoidance) on the other. The study was preregistered. N = 23 studies were included in the final meta-analysis, with only few addressing safety-seeking and none assessing avoidance behavior. Results point towards medium-strong associations between metacognitions (both positive and negative) and health anxiety. With this work, the authors provide a good and solid overview over the topic and are addressing a (surprising) lack in the literature. Their argumentation is consistently sound, and they reveal existing research gaps and point towards important future directions, both in the clinical and the research sphere. A big strength of this work is its sound and transparent methodology, including the consistency with which the preregistration was followed. The paper is also very well written and was a true pleasure to read. Therefore, I find the article basically ready for publication, although I would suggest fixing some super minor formulation/typo issues. - p. 3, l. 63: replace use of “Exemplarily” - p. 3, l. 74-76: replace (repeated) use of “next to” - p. 16, l. 369-ff: the following sentence is perhaps a bit clunky and could be clarified: “These results underline the impact of NMC concerning the uncontrollability of thoughts, especially relevant for several different mental disorders (2) as well as for anxiety and depression across a variety of physical illnesses (57).” --> what is "especially relevant", and what is meant by "across physical illnesses" (i.e., is this part meant to refer to instances where depression and anxiety co-occur with physical illness?) - p. 17, l. 410: missing comma before “others”? - p. 18, l. 424: rewrite “as adaptations of anyone inventory”? - p. 18, l. 425-ff: something seems off in the following sentence (remove "as" or add something?): “However, as the calculation implies an equal weighting of all categories, which is perhaps not as meaningful as a qualitative description of the categories with increasingly high or low ROB.” - Supplementary/appendix: remove comment in S3 file and consider mentioning all supplements in the main text (as of now, no reference to S8 or S9, so their relevance is unclear) - Study selection: I was slightly confused by the information provided here as the number 23 refers to published studies, but then unpublished studies are mentioned, and it becomes also clear that not all data could be retrieved from the n = 14 studies with missing data. So, are these selections that happen before the final number of 23 for analyses is established or do these numbers concern articles included in the 23 works selected for meta-analysis? When age averages are later reported it also becomes clear that not all studies are included here, so it might be best to provide an N of both studies and participants for calculated averages. Overall, congratulations to the authors for a great piece of work! ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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