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PONE-D-24-55873Nicotine alters cellular activity and mRNA expression of patterns in vitro of murine astrocytesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cray Jr., Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The conclusions need to be more precise and be in line with the here shown data. There are some issues regarding statistical significance. The introduction needs to be expanded, and the context to smoking and nicotine abuse needs to be clear. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 14 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Comments: The manuscript addresses an important topic. The study tests the effect of nicotine on murine astrocytes, focusing on cellular activity and mRNA expression. The results indicate that Nicotine impacts astrocyte activity and inflammatory signaling, suggesting its potential involvement in neuroinflammation. For better clarity the following revision is recommended: 1. The abstract as well as introduction should be modified to describe Tobacco/Nicotine consumption as a major global health concern/risk in general (in adults and in pregnancy), as nicotine teratological effect in astrocytic embryonic development was not specifically assessed in this paper. C8D1A cell line was used (Postnatal d8 astrocytic cerebellum). 2. The introduction section should be expanded to include: a. Nicotine absorption, concentration in blood and brain, half-life (2 hours) etc. This would help understand the relevancy of selected doses and culture feeding regimen used in the study. b. Summary of research exploring the effect of Nicotine on astrocytes should be expanded, include studies demonstrating the expression of nicotinic acetylcholine receptors (nAChRs) in astrocytes, and its downstream effects on astrocytic signaling pathways, morphological and functional changes etc. Some recommended refs: a. Aryal et al, Glia. 2021 Apr 14;69(8):2037–2053. doi: 10.1002/glia.24011 b. Stellwagen et al 2019, Curr Opin Neurobiol 57: 179–185. doi.org/10.1016/j.conb.2019.02.010. c. Hernández-Morales et al, 201, Neuroscience 2014 3. Material and Methods: a. Please include media change regimen (e.g. daily? Every other day? Etc) – might affect results interpretation (Acute exposure vs. chronic). b. Include Nicotine source and Cat number. 4. Results: a. MTS assay: The assay relies on cellular metabolic activity, which may not always directly correlate with cell number, if feasible please correlate with number of counted cells (e.g. neuclocounter/Hemcytometer, Brdu, ICF Dapi count), if not applicable, address this issue in discussion section. b. Figure 1. Where applicable please add statistical significance asterisks (e.g. in comparison with non-treated-NT arm (0ng/ml) at same time point). The Y axis should be modifies to represent Cell Viability (measured by OD). c. The reduction in cell activity/cell number or metabolic activity in un-treated arm after 24 & 48 hours compared to 12&18hr should be explained. d. Figure 2. – Where applicable statically significance (asterisks) compared to NT should be added, Y-axis (apoptosis – measured by RFU – add abbreviation (Relative Fluorescence Units). e. The peak in mRNA expression (in both A1/A2 markers graphs) occurs after 48 hr (higher fold change – pls note difference in scaling), should be discussed/explained. Discussion section: 1. The effect of Nicotine was assessed only in one murine cell line (derived from Cerebellum), The potential difference in Nicotine effect between human and mouse astrocytes, as well as astrocytes heterogenous sub-populations (region/functionality/morphological) should be discussed. 2. Discuss the extrapolation between study dosing and feeding regimen and potential in-vivo consumption 3. Propose directions/strategies to overcome the resolution of A1/A2 marker expression and its cross-talk with other CNS cell population, such as including additional markers, multi-omics, in-vivo analysis. Reviewer #2: The manuscript addresses a significant public health concern by investigating the effects of nicotine on murine astrocytes, focusing on cellular activity and mRNA expression. The study is well-designed, employing appropriate methodologies to assess astrocyte responses to nicotine exposure. However, certain areas require further refinement to enhance clarity, rigor, and relevance to the broader scientific and public health community. Specific Comments on Sections 1. Introduction o The introduction discusses the effects of nicotine during pregnancy, but it is unclear how this background connects to the study’s objectives. The authors should clarify: � Why is the focus on nicotine exposure during pregnancy relevant to astrocyte activity in this experimental model? � How does the current study design address the broader implications for pregnancy-related outcomes, if at all? � If the focus is more general (e.g., nicotine's effects on the central nervous system), consider rephrasing or narrowing the discussion for better alignment with the study's aim. o May need reference for “Discuss how findings from murine cells can be cautiously extrapolated to human physiology and potential limitations of this approach”. 2. Materials and Methods o Cell Model: � Why were murine astrocytic cells chosen instead of human astrocytic cells? � Discuss how findings from murine cells can be cautiously extrapolated to human physiology and potential limitations of this approach. o Dosage Selection: � Clarify the rationale for the chosen nicotine dosages at each experimental step. � Provide references or scientific justification for selecting the initial concentrations (0, 10, 25, 50, 100, 250, 500 ng/mL) and explain why the later experiments only used 0, 25, 50, and 100 ng/mL. � How do these concentrations relate to physiologically relevant exposures in humans (e.g., plasma nicotine levels in smokers or vapers)? o Experimental Details: � Ensure that dosages and time points are explicitly mentioned for each assay. This will help readers replicate and interpret the study. 3. Results o The description of findings is generally clear, but some terminology, such as "diminishing returns were observed," requires more explicit explanation for readers who may not be familiar with the concept. o Provide a brief interpretation of how observed changes in apoptosis and proliferation reflect potential mechanisms of nicotine's impact on astrocytes. 4. Discussion o Expand on the potential therapeutic implications of the findings (if possible): � How might astrocyte modulation contribute to strategies for addressing nicotine addiction and neuroinflammatory disorders? � Could targeting astrocytes play a role in smoking cessation interventions or reduce the neurological impact of nicotine exposure? o Broaden the discussion to include potential applications of the study's findings beyond pregnancy, such as the relevance of astrocyte responses to nicotine in adolescent brain development or chronic nicotine users if possible. Reviewer #3: In this work, the author used different functional assays to test nicotine effects on C8D1A cell viability, proliferation, and apoptosis at different time points. They also demonstrated the nicotine effects on gene expression of pro/anti-inflammatory markers. However, there lacks evidence to support the conclusion that nicotine alters astrocyte activity and inflammatory signaling. In the meanwhile, the statistical analysis in this research is not clear. The concerning are listed below: Major • Figure 1, your result suggests that excessive nicotine may lead to diminishing effects (no additional effects) based on the MTS assay. Have your considered testing higher dose to further explore this trend? Usually, 0.1-10µM (16-1620 ng/mL) dose of nicotine mimic as regular smoking or high environmental exposure. • Figure 2, what is the reason for high apoptosis level in control group (0 ng/mL of nicotine) at 12, 18, and 48 hours? And there is no apoptosis measured in the same condition at 24 hours. • In figure 2 legend, "Note similar relationship for nicotine concentration to that observed for MTS assay," please clarify or provide more information for this conclusion. In figure 1 MTS assay, the cell viability increased by nicotine treatment at lower dose at the 48-hour treatment group. However, the figure 2 shows that the apoptosis level significantly increased by nicotine treatment at lower dose at the 48-hour treatment group. • In your caspase assay, there is a significant increase in apoptosis with the 10 ng/mL nicotine treatment at 12 hours. To strengthen your findings, consider including gene expression data corresponding to the 10 ng/mL treatment at 12 hours for Figures 3 and 4. • For figure 3 and 4, clarity whether the significant differences are between different groups (e.g., dose comparisons) or between the control group and each treatment group. Minor: • Please specify the statistical methods used for analysis in the figure legends and in the research method. And specify whether the error bars represent standard error of the mean or standard deviation. • For figure 1 and 2, include significance markers (e.g., stars) to indicate statistically significant changes. • Define the p-value thresholds for the significance levels. • Figure 3 and 4, please clarify the experiment number and independent repeat number for the representative blots as shown in the figures. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear Authors, Thank you for your thoughtful revisions. You've addressed the comments well, and the manuscript has improved significantly. I’m pleased to see it moving forward toward publication. Wishing you continued success with your work. Reviewer #2: Thank you for your thorough revisions. I have re-reviewed the manuscript and confirm that all previously raised concerns have been addressed appropriately. The manuscript is clear, scientifically sound, and ready for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: Yes: Michal Izrael Reviewer #2: Yes: Li Feng ********** |
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