Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 11, 2025 |
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Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This manuscript addresses a clinically relevant and timely topic, particularly given the increasing interest in the intersection between diabetes, sarcopenia, and obesity. The use of a large, representative dataset adds strength to the findings. However, some methodological and presentation aspects require revision to improve clarity and scientific rigor.Language and readability: 1- The manuscript is generally understandable; however, a careful language review by a native English speaker is recommended to improve fluency and ensure a smoother reading experience. 2- Figure 1 – Kaplan-Meier plot: In Figure 1, not all survival curves are clearly identified or labeled, which may lead to confusion in interpreting the results. I suggest simplifying the figure by displaying only the two curves that directly reflect the study’s primary analysis. This would enhance clarity and focus the reader’s attention on the most relevant comparison. 3 References: The references listed in the manuscript are inadequate and do not conform to the formatting standards required by PLOS ONE. A thorough revision of the reference section is recommended, ensuring consistency with Vancouver style, including proper citation of journal titles, publication years, volumes, issues, and page numbers. Reviewer #2: Summary This paper examined the effects of diabetes mellitus and sarcopenic obesity on mortality, using a sample of U.S. NHANES 2011-2012 to 2017-2018. This study found that individuals with high adiposity and low muscle mass and diabetes mellitus had a higher risk of mortality than those with high adiposity and low muscle mass but without diabetes mellitus. While these findings are novel, and highlight the role of diabetes mellitus on mortality, some areas of the methods require clarification. In particular, there is no detail on the sample (e.g. age range), and weighting of analyses, that are necessary to fully understand both the validity and representativeness of the findings. Please see comments below. Major Comments 1. No age range is mentioned in the methods; however, only individuals aged 8-59y are eligible to be administered DXA scans in NHANES cycles 2011-2012. It can be surmised that this is the maximum range, but there needs to be an explanation of the age range of eligible participants and what specific age cut-offs were used. Relatedly, trom Table 1 it appears that the average age of the sample is 37y (no DM) and 47y (with DM), making this a somewhat younger sample overall to assess sarcopenic obesity. The sample age range should be made explicit, as this has implications for both the generalizability of the findings, and reporting of other descriptives (e.g. BMI) in the study. A drop-down table showing how the analytic sample was derived from the initial sample would be appropriate for this work. 2. Considering that the majority of the initial sample were excluded due to missing data a sensitivity analysis might be warranted. It is unclear how the age group selection may have factored into this (as it could be the major factor for exclusions), and further highlights the need for a figure / participant flow chart to show how the analytic sample was derived. 3. There is no mention of weighting the data. This is a recommended practice for using NHANES data in order to make the sample representative of the U.S. population. While weighting is not possible for KM curves, it can be done for all other analyses. If weighting is not required for your specific study, please provide a rationale to explain why not. 4. In the methodology, there should be an explanation of “diabetes mellitus” and “hypertension” – which variables were used? For example, is it the self-report of doctor diagnosed? Use of medication? Or objective laboratory measures? In the case of lab measures, there should be a cut-off indicated. A better explanation of the operational definition of such variables are required for clarity. 5. What year was the mortality follow-up to? In the current text, it seems the NHANES data is from cycles 2011-2012 to 2017-2018, however what date is the mortality follow-up? Please report the average follow up in the text as well as the final date of follow-up. Were deaths in the first year were kept (to address possible missed underlying disease)? If not, please provide a rationale. 6. While cox proportional hazards models were used for the analyses, there needs to be an explanation on whether proportional hazards assumption was tested. 7. Information provided in the first paragraph of the results should be in the methods instead. More information is needed for line 152-154 regarding excluding missing variables. Please provide n missing values for each variable listed and any restrictions, such as the age range used. 8. Table 2 footnotes indicate propensity scores were used; however, this was not mentioned in the statistical analysis section of the methods. Please explain consistently in both the methods and footnotes of Table 2 whether the confounders were adjusted for, or propensity scores were used for matching, or something else. 9. In the discussion section (lines 228-233), there is mention of the “obesity paradox” which may not be appropriate for this study as it seems the cut-off for age was 59y, and the obesity paradox is more prevalent at 65y and above. Again, there needs to be more information on the age range of the sample for the current study. Minor Comments 1. The study participants are referred to as patients in this paper. I would recommend using the term “participants” as data comes from NHANES and referring to them as “patients” implies they are receiving medical treatment. 2. Line 36 – “including 194 (8.199%) with DM and 2172 (91.80%) without DM” I would consider having the same decimal place throughout the paper changing to “including 194 (8.20%) with DM and 2172 (91.80%) without DM” as 8.199 + 91.80 = 99.999. this should be changed in other sections too, line 156 for example. 3. Line 112-113 – “The demographic parameters measured included BMI, triceps skinfold, subscapular skinfold, ASMI, FMI, age, sex, hypertension and race.” Please revise this statement and as age and sex are part of the self-report questionnaires, and not “measured”. 4. Why were the confounders chosen? Was this based on previous literature or based on a formal assessment (i.e. statistical tests)? Please provide an explanation. 5. Line 135-136 – there is mention of adjusting for “comorbidities (e.g., hypertension)” please also list the other comorbidities. Only hypertension was mentioned in the methods. Was hypertension the only comorbidity that was adjusted for? 6. Was the variable “sex” explored as an interaction/effect modifier in the analyses? This would not be possible with the available sample, but it warrants mention as there may be sex-differences worth exploring in this relationship. 7. There is no mention of ethics in the methods. If ethics approval was not required from your institution due to the publicly available nature of this data, then please include a statement about this in the methods. 8. In the limitations, there is mention of the “retrospective design” of this study being a limitation, however baseline measures were assessed cross-sectionally and mortality assessed after baseline – so you might consider calling it a “secondary analysis of cross-sectional data with mortality follow-up” instead. On the other hand, one further limitation is the lack of “change” scores available for body composition (sarcopenia), although any misclassification is likely to have biased to the null. 9. Table 1 – please indicate what the p-values represent in the table footnotes (i.e., omnibus chi-squared analyses?) 10. Table 1 – the term “Gender” is used here, however in the text “sex” is used, please be consistent. 11. A minor point, but the Baumgartner equation for body fat is well established, but was developed in a sample of white adults (18-80 y), which raises a question about the validity within non-white subgroups of this analysis that warrants mention. Typographical 1. Line 35 – the word “patients” used twice in the sentence “A total of 2366 patients with HA-LM patients”. I would not recommend using the term “patient”, maybe “participants” instead. 2. Line 40 – there is an extra space 3. Line 41 – extra “:” used 4. Please make sure to include a space between the words and the in-text citation consistently throughout the manuscript. In some cases, the there is no space between the words and the in-text citations, and in other instances there are. For example, in line 55 “(DM)[1]” and “obesity[2,3]”, however later in line 62 there is “all-cause mortality [8-10]”. 5. When mentioning tables and figures, please make them bold. For example, line 156. 6. Table 1 – the h in “hypertension” should be capitalized. 7. Table 1 – include “DM: diabetes mellitus” in the footnote 8. I think table 1 can be re-categorized to include demographic characteristics first (sex, age, race, etc.) 9. Table 2 footnotes – some of the variables are capitalized such as “Age”, while others are not, such as “sex”, please make changes to be consistent. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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<p>Additive Effect of Diabetes Mellitus on the Prevalence and Prognosis of Sarcopenic Obesity: Implications for All-Cause Mortality PONE-D-25-05497R1 Dear Dr. Lin, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Simone Perna, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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