Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 17, 2025 |
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Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses??> Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. Reviewer #1: Reviewer’s report Study Title: The PREDEP-SERT study protocol: a 6-month follow-up cohort study of predictors of effectiveness and tolerability of sertraline for depression using Therapeutic Drug Monitoring This study aims to prospectively assess the association between blood concentrations of sertraline and its metabolite with the severity of depressive symptoms after six months of treatment. Additionally, it seeks to examine the relationship between sertraline concentrations and key clinical outcomes of effectiveness and side effects. This is an important study with the potential to inform optimal sertraline dosing in real-world clinical practice. The inclusion of a study population representative of routine clinical settings enhances the relevance and applicability of the findings. Below are a few suggestions to further strengthen the manuscript. Comment 1: The primary objective of the study is to examine the association between blood levels of sertraline (and its metabolite) and the severity of depressive symptoms. For the retrospective cohort, it would be helpful to clarify how the severity of depression will be measured using existing medical records. Are there depression assessment tools that are routinely administered and documented in patient charts, and which you expect to retrieve for this purpose? Comment 2: The variables to be assessed in the prospective cohort are clearly outlined. However, it would be helpful to specify which variables are available (or expected to be available) in the retrospective cohort. Comment 3: The analysis plan is rather very brief and would benefit from further elaboration. Specifically: - What statistical analyses are planned for the retrospective cohort, given the nature and possible limitations of the data available in the medical records? - More detail on the logistic regression models would be helpful. Which specific associations are you aiming to explore, and what variables will be included in the models? - One of the secondary objectives is to assess the association between blood sertraline concentrations and other clinical variables related to effectiveness and side effects. What is the analysis plan for this objective? Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review this important and timely research study. The study presents a comprehensive exploration of bio-psycho social model in the management of patients with depression and offers valuable insight into personalized sertraline treatment approaches, particularly through genetic profiling. This is a relevant and forward-looking topic that could meaningfully contribute to both clinical practice and future research. Minor Comments 1. Terminology Clarification – "Tolerability" vs. "Drug Safety" In both the abstract (line 36) and the methods section (line 120), the authors appear to use "tolerability" and "drug safety" interchangeably. However, these terms have distinct meanings in pharmacological research and should be clearly differentiated. • Drug safety refers to the broader evaluation of all potential adverse effects, including serious adverse events and long-term risks, and entails a comprehensive risk–benefit analysis. • Drug tolerability, on the other hand, centers on the subjective experience of the patient, especially non-serious side effects that affect adherence or comfort. I recommend that the authors revise these sections to reflect the appropriate term depending on the specific outcome they are measuring, or explicitly state whether both aspects are being evaluated. 2. Feasibility of Assessments Across Age Spectrum The methods describe multiple assessment tools administered in a single session. Given that the study includes participants across a broad age range including older children and the elderly. it would be helpful to clarify how the burden of lengthy assessments (potentially exceeding two hours) will be managed. Specifically: • Will assessments be broken into phases or sessions for specific age groups? • How will participant fatigue or cognitive capacity in extreme age groups be accounted for? Clarifying the administration logistics would strengthen the feasibility of the methodology. 3. Ethical Considerations – Informed Consent and Assent The manuscript states that informed consent will be obtained from adult participants and the parents/guardians of minors. However, it is important to also address assent, particularly for participants aged 12 and older. Under Spanish regulations (Law 41/2002), while parental consent is required for minors, children aged 12 and above should also provide their assent. The authors should clarify whether and how assent will be obtained in accordance with these ethical requirements. 4. Data Sharing Policy The data management plan is well written, but the data sharing statement could be improved. While the authors indicate that data will be available upon request, it is advisable to align with current data sharing policies, which encourage more transparent and accessible data availability. A clear statement on how and when data will be shared (e.g., via a repository or data use agreement) would enhance reproducibility and adherence to journal policies. seamless Comments • The discussion is clearly written and thoughtfully addresses the limitations of the study. • The distinction between retrospective and prospective cohorts is appropriately acknowledged, and the plan to analyze them separately is sound given the potential for missing variables in retrospective data. Conclusion This is a well-conceived study that contributes meaningfully to the literature on depression management and personalized medicine. With clarification on terminology, ethical procedures, and data sharing, the manuscript will be greatly strengthened. I commend the authors for undertaking this valuable work. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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The PREDEP-SERT study protocol: a 6-month follow-up cohort study of predictors of effectiveness, tolerability and safety of sertraline for depression using Therapeutic Drug Monitoring PONE-D-25-25340R1 Dear Dr. Molero, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Dickens Akena, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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