Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 15, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-46379-->-->Do soil health indicators predict carbon and nitrogen functional stability under drought and heat?-->-->PLOS ONE?> Dear Dr. Lazicki, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 13 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The manuscript titled "Do soil health indicators predict carbon and nitrogen functional stability under drought and heat?" delves into a critical and contemporary issue: the intricate relationship between soil health indicators and the functional stability of soil carbon (C) and nitrogen (N) cycling in the face of climate-induced stress. Unraveling how soil health modulates resistance and resilience to drought and heat is paramount for sustainable soil management and effective climate change adaptation. This study offers profound insights into the differential impacts of various management practices—forest, conventional, and organic—on soil functional stability. The strategic selection of three distinct land-use types serves as an ideal framework for comparing soil health and functional stability across diverse agricultural approaches. The sampling methodology, which encompasses the collection of undisturbed soil cores and bulk samples, is meticulously crafted to encapsulate both spatial and functional variability. The experimental setup, encompassing both drought and combined drought-heat stress scenarios, is pertinent to projected climate change models. The 28-day stress and recovery period is adequately designed to capture significant alterations in soil functions. Utilizing a multifunctional approach to evaluate carbon and nitrogen cycling provides a robust assessment of soil functional stability. Employing 16S and ITS sequencing for analyzing microbial community diversity and composition offers a rigorous methodology to elucidate the role of microbial communities in maintaining soil function. The comprehensive inclusion of both bacterial and fungal communities aligns with contemporary understanding in soil microbiology. The findings that microbial community composition exhibits significant variation among different sites, while diversity metrics remain relatively consistent, suggest that specific taxa or community structure may play a more crucial role than overall diversity in determining functional stability. Identifying key soil properties such as pH levels, chemical fertility, and porosity that differentiate these sites is essential for elucidating the underlying mechanisms governing soil functional stability. The results indicate that resistance (RS) and resilience (RL) exhibit variability depending on the type of stressor and land use practices, underscoring the intricate nature of soil functional stability. Notably, the findings reveal that the addition of heat to drought conditions significantly diminishes RS and RL, a critical insight for regions subjected to multiple climate stressors. Furthermore, the observation that organic management practices generally promote higher RL compared to conventional and forested sites implies that such practices may play a pivotal role in enhancing soil functional stability. The application of principal components analysis (PCA) and stepwise multiple regression to identify predictors of RS and RL is statistically robust. The discovery that soil health indicators, such as total organic carbon and microbial biomass, are correlated with nitrogen cycle resilience under drought stress, is crucial for the development of comprehensive soil health assessment frameworks. The absence of a consistent relationship between microbial diversity and functional stability implies that other factors, including community composition and soil properties, may exert a more substantial influence. The study concludes that conventional soil health indicators, as traditionally defined within agricultural contexts, may not comprehensively capture the functional stability of natural ecosystems. The organic management system appears to effectively balance the advantages of high soil organic matter and microbial activity with sufficient chemical fertility, thereby enhancing functional stability. This conclusion is robustly supported by empirical data and offers practical guidance for sustainable soil management practices. In Section 2.4.3, the equations for calculating RS and RL are clearly presented; however, incorporating additional explanatory text would enhance readers' comprehension of the rationale underpinning these calculations. Several sections include redundant information. For instance, the analysis of microbial community diversity and its correlation with functional stability is addressed repeatedly across multiple sections. To enhance clarity and conciseness, this information should be consolidated. Some sentences are complex and could be simplified for clarity. For example, in Section 3.3, the sentence "This suggests that in the unfertilized, acidic FOR soil, soil chemistry posed a stronger control on community RL to DRT than factors traditionally considered in a soil health assessment" This sentence could be divided into two sentences for improved readability. The manuscript is scientifically rigorous and offers valuable insights into the relationship between soil health indicators and functional stability under climate stress. The experimental design is robust, and the results are thoroughly supported by comprehensive data. While the manuscript is well-written, there are minor grammatical and stylistic enhancements that could further improve clarity. This study makes a significant contribution to the fields of soil science and sustainable agriculture. Reviewer #2: This study provides valuable insights into the complex relationships between soil health indicators and functional resilience under climate stress. By linking carbon and nitrogen cycling responses to different management practices, it highlights key factors influencing soil resistance and resilience. The findings offer a strong scientific basis for improving soil management strategies under climate change. However few points are to be properly addressed for the clarity of the readers (appended below): 1. The introduction mentions microbiota but could briefly specify key microbial groups (bacteria, fungi, archaea) that drive carbon and nitrogen cycling. 2. The explanation of RS and RL should be refined for clarity. Instead of "more quickly and completely to regain function," use "recover function more rapidly and effectively." 3. While the introduction discusses soil organic carbon (SOC), porosity, and fertility, it should explicitly state which soil health assessment methods are commonly used and how they may overlook stress response. 4. The transition to multi-functionality indices should be smoother, explaining their relevance in quantifying overall ecosystem function rather than listing citations. 5. The hypotheses should be more precise: - Specify how high porosity and SOC reduce water loss and heat transmission. - Explain why microbial diversity may enhance both RS and RL by fostering functional redundancy. 6. The methodology section should be more structured by separating different processes with clear subheadings. Consider breaking down complex sentences for readability. 7. Ensure uniformity in naming conventions, such as consistently referring to "CONV," "ORG," and "FOR" throughout the text without alternation between abbreviations and full forms. 8. In certain methods, like enzyme activity assays and microbial community analysis, Briefly summarizing key steps within the main text will enhance clarity. 9. Ensure uniformity in how measurements are reported (e.g., using consistent units for soil moisture and enzyme activities). Some values, such as temperatures and durations, should be explicitly stated in standard scientific formats. 10. How do microbial community composition and diversity vary across forest, organic and conventional land-use systems? 11. What are the key soil physicochemical properties driving microbial community shifts under different land-use types. 12. How do carbon and nitrogen cycling processes respond to single and combined drought-heat stress across distinct land-use systems. 13. What mechanisms underpin microbial functional resilience and resistance to environmental stressors in different land-use regimes? 14. How can land management practices be optimized to enhance microbial stability and ecosystem functions under climate variability? 15. How can soil health assessment frameworks be modified to better account for the unique resilience and stress responses of natural ecosystems, rather than relying solely on agricultural benchmarks? 16. What specific microbial adaptations contribute to improved resistance and resilience under heat stress, and how can these be leveraged to enhance soil health in both natural and managed systems? I hope that the authors shall go through the points and revise the MS accordingly for its possible publication. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Do soil health indicators predict carbon and nitrogen functional stability under drought and heat? PONE-D-24-46379R1 Dear Dr. Lazicki, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Dafeng Hui, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors have conducted a comprehensive revision of the manuscript, substantially improving its overall quality. Reviewer #2: Dear Authors, I am happy to see the changes made in the revised manuscript. All the comments were taken care off and this MS now can be accepted on the discretion of EIC / AE. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Junqiang Zheng Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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