Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 9, 2025 |
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We sincerely appreciate their support, which contributed significantly to the completion of this study.]. Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: General Evaluation: This manuscript presents a well-structured multimodal neuroimaging study combining EEG and fNIRS signals to examine motivation-related visual cognitive processes. The topic is timely, and the methodology is clearly described. However, the manuscript would benefit from several improvements regarding figure clarity, data reporting, and statistical transparency. General Minor Comments • The abstract is mostly clear; however, the sentence beginning with "Although descriptive variability in HbO..." should be rephrased for better clarity and flow. • A diagram or flowchart summarizing the fNIRS preprocessing pipeline would significantly improve clarity for readers unfamiliar with the multi-step procedure. • In the Results section, Tables 3 and 4 could benefit from deeper commentary. Consider walking through a representative channel (e.g., PO4) in more detail. • In the Discussion, the non-significance of fNIRS results should be explored more thoroughly. Possible explanations may include inter-individual variability, low signal-to-noise ratio, or spatial resolution limitations. • There are some stylistic redundancies throughout the manuscript (e.g., repeated definitions of “motivation” and “ERP”). These could be condensed to enhance readability. • Some sentences are overly long or passive in structure. Refining the language for clarity and conciseness would improve the paper’s flow. ________________________________________ Major Comments 1. Clarification of EEG and fNIRS Channel Locations (Figure 2) In Figure 2, EEG and fNIRS sensors are plotted simultaneously; however, it remains unclear which markers correspond to EEG electrodes and which to fNIRS optodes. Please clearly distinguish them either through labels, shapes, or a color legend. I also recommend updating the figure caption to explicitly indicate which symbols represent EEG and fNIRS channels. Suggested caption addition: "EEG electrodes are shown as [color/symbol], whereas fNIRS optodes (sources and detectors) are shown as [color/symbol]." 2. Missing Formula for Cohen’s d (Figure 4) Cohen’s d is used to generate Figure 4, but the manuscript does not state the formula used for its computation. Please include the formula or a clear citation to ensure reproducibility. 3. Inconsistent Y-Axis Ranges in Figure 10 The subplots in Figure 10 appear to use varying y-axis scales, which hinders visual comparison between conditions. I recommend standardizing the y-axis (e.g., from –10 to 10) across all plots unless variability is justified and explained in the caption. Suggested note: "All y-axes were scaled uniformly from –10 to 10 µV for consistent comparison." 4. Missing Descriptive Statistics for Hemodynamic Responses (Table 4) Table 4 summarizes fNIRS responses but lacks descriptive statistics such as means and variances. Including a supplementary table that reports mean ± standard deviation values would enhance transparency and allow for deeper interpretation of the hemodynamic data. Suggested improvement: "A summary table reporting the mean and variance of HbO/HbR values per condition would strengthen the results." 5. Inconsistent Image Ordering in Table 4 In Table 4, the order of images across rows is inconsistent, which may confuse readers. Ensure that the same ordering of visual elements (conditions, time points, or regions) is maintained across all rows for clarity. Suggested instruction: "Use a fixed left-to-right ordering of conditions across all rows (e.g., [A, B, C])." Reviewer #2: The manuscript presents a well-organized and timely multimodal study using EEG and fNIRS to investigate visual cognitive motivation. The topic is important and the methodological framework is overall sound. However, significant revisions are necessary before the manuscript can be considered for publication. The main points requiring attention are outlined below: The simultaneous plotting of EEG electrodes and fNIRS optodes in Figure 2 is currently unclear. It is difficult for the reader to distinguish which symbols correspond to EEG and which to fNIRS components. Please revise the figure by using different shapes and/or colors for EEG electrodes and fNIRS sources/detectors, and update the figure caption accordingly. This distinction is crucial for understanding the multimodal setup. While the fNIRS preprocessing pipeline is described in detail, readers unfamiliar with fNIRS analysis might find it difficult to follow the multiple steps. Including a flowchart or diagram summarizing the preprocessing steps (motion correction, filtering, PCA, epoching, etc.) would substantially enhance the clarity and accessibility of this section. Cohen’s d values were used extensively, especially in interpreting fNIRS results (e.g., Figure 4), but the exact formula for Cohen’s d calculation is not provided. Please explicitly state the formula or provide a precise reference. Reproducibility is a key requirement. Subplots in Figure 10 (fNIRS responses) have inconsistent y-axis ranges across conditions. This inconsistency complicates visual comparison. Standardizing the y-axis scale across all subplots (e.g., –10 to 10 µV for EEG plots, appropriate range for HbO concentration in fNIRS) would improve interpretability. If variability requires separate scaling, this should be justified clearly in the figure captions. Table 4 presents averaged fNIRS hemodynamic responses but lacks descriptive statistics (mean ± standard deviation) across participants. This omission reduces the transparency and interpretability of the findings. Please add a supplementary table including means and variances for each condition and channel. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Simultaneous EEG-fNIRS Study of Visual Cognitive Processing: ERP Analysis and Decision-Related Hemodynamic Responses in Healthy Adults PONE-D-25-18575R1 Dear Dr. Ebru Ergün, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Onder Aydemir Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thank you for your thorough and thoughtful revisions. The reviewers have confirmed that all their comments were adequately addressed, and the revised manuscript demonstrates improved clarity and rigor. I am pleased to recommend the manuscript for publication. Congratulations on this fine work. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thank you for the revised manuscript. The authors have addressed all of my previous comments satisfactorily. I have no further concerns and recomandation Reviewer #2: I am pleased to report that the authors have thoroughly addressed all the concerns raised during the initial review. The revisions have significantly improved the clarity and overall quality of the manuscript. All requested changes appear to have been made appropriately, and no further modifications are necessary. Therefore, I recommend that the manuscript be accepted for publication in its current form. Best regards, Dr. Tugba Aydemir ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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