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| Original SubmissionNovember 24, 2024 |
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** Reviewer #1: Very Respected Authors, COVID-19 is still relevant. Your paper is well written. The abstract is well organized. The aim is clear. The methodology is well explained, and you have obtained approval from the ethics committee. The appropriate statistical analysis was chosen. The results are clearly presented, and the discussion effectively explains the findings in relation to other research results. Relevant references have been selected. Reviewer #2: The manuscript by Mikhail Kostinov, et. al., describes a study of phagocytosis by monocytes and neutrophils from patients with COVID-19. Authors indicate that phagocytosis in deficient in these cells and it is restored after treatment and improvement of patients' health conditions. Also, they compare the standard treatment with the standard treatment plus a bacterial antigen vaccine, called Immunovac VP4. Previous reports have suggested that cells of the innate immune system, particularly phagocytic cells, have a role in the pathogenesis of the disease. Hence, exploring the function of these cells is relevant. However, the present report does not properly address the phagocytic functions of cells. The manuscript is written in a confusing manner because many concepts are not described appropriately, particularly at the beginning of the manuscript. For example, "bacteria-based immunostimulating agent, CRP, AST, SpO2, and Immunovac VP4" are not defined until very late in the manuscript. So, the reader cannot follow what the authors are referring to. Also, it is not clear what the control group is and what an "immunostimulating agent" is. Moreover, it is stated that "control group (41 patients), which received only the standard treatment, and main group (64 patients), which received the standard treatment in combination with Immunovac VP4 vaccine..." This is not clear. What happen to the more severe and less severe groups? How were they re-assigned to the new "control" and "main" groups? In addition, the abstract reads "Blood monocyte PI correlates with COVID-19 severity:" This is just the opposite of what is reported later in the results section. As a consequence, the manuscript is disordered and confusing. A major concern of the whole report is that the main purpose of the study is to evaluated the relationship between leukocyte phagocytic activity against S. aureus and clinical status. Unfortunately, phagocytosis is not evaluated properly. Since, phagocytic function is announced, from the title, as a major part of the study, one would expect a detailed description of the procedures to evaluate this important function. Phagocytosis assay is mentioned briefly and superficially. Many important technical details are left out. Because, phagocytosis was evaluated by flow cytometry, it is important to know how were cells identified? What cell markers were used? The cell gating strategy should be shown. Fluorescence associated to cells is not necessarily indicative of phagocytosis. How do authors distinguish internalized from adherent bacteria? Another confusing part is, how was phagocytosis estimated from "data tables corresponding to the flow cytometry histograms"? This is not clear at all, and it should be described in greater detail. More importantly, phagocytic index (PI) is not defined. Normally, phagocytic index is the number of phagocytosed particles (bacteria) per 100 phagocytic cells. In the present manuscript it is shown as "%". Percentage of what? In addition, it is mentioned that statistical methods were used to evaluate "kinetics of phagocytic indices". How could authors calculate kinetic parameters of phagocytosis from FACS data? Phagocytosis kinetics cannot be estimated with this methodology. Another major flaw in this report is the lack of a proper control group. To accurately evaluate phagocytosis in cells from patients, phagocytosis of cells from healthy individuals "real control" must be included for comparison. Therefore, data presented do not support authors' conclusions and the whole report is not reliable. In materials and methods section Description of patients is cumbersome. Was the main group made up of patients with severe COVID? As indicated before the selection of groups is described in a confusing manner. Description of Immunovac VP4 vaccine is also difficult to evaluate. Although, this product seems to be commonly used in Russia, there is very little literature about it to properly evaluate its properties. Articles related to this product and cited in the manuscript are in Russian. Therefore, it is not possible to really evaluate this product. As indicated before, phagocytosis assay is not described properly. In RESULTS section Figure 1. Confusing. There is no legend. What are the red and white symbols? Figure 2 Plots are not shown complete. They overlap. Also, the figure legend is confusing. Do all "more severe" and "less severe" patients "have moderate COVID? This is not a standard classification and it results very confusing. For phagocytosis "The median neutrophil PI was 97.9 (96.3; 99)%, and the median monocyte PI was 91.2 (84.6; 95)%. Phagocytic index is normally not expressed as percentage. It is not clear what data are been presented. What are the numbers in parenthesis? These data cannot be interpreted adequately. Moreover, more than 90 % does not suggest a problem with phagocytosis Table 2 What is "RLMEM"? Similarly, Rm and Rc are not defined "Linear mixed-effects models (LMEM) were used to evaluate the relationship between the kinetics of phagocytic indices and the severity of a patient’s condition." Again, this statement is very confusing. Kinetics of phagocytosis cannot be evaluated with the methodology used in this report. Figure 4 Again, what is monocyte phagocytic index? Data are not clear. No real difference is observed among groups. In all cases phagocytosis of cells from healthy "real control" individuals should be included for comparison. In Discussion "There is a growing body of evidence that phagocyte dysfunctions in patients with COVID-19 and lung damage are linked with an increased susceptibility to secondary infections." No references are provided for this statement. "An upregulation of activation markers and downregulation of S. aureus phagocytosis in circulating phagocytes in COVID-19 patients was demonstrated by Koenis D.S. et al. [34, 35]" The work by Koenis D.S. et al. is the reference 35. However, reference 34 does not support authors' statement. In fact, reference 34 suggests the opposite, as it reads "Fcγ receptor-mediated phagocytosis, IL17, and Tec kinase canonical pathways were enriched in patients with severe COVID-19". Other points Review the use of English language is required. Pronouns are missing in many sentences. References 3 and 5 are the same Reviewer #3: The primary aim of the manuscript "Phagocytic Activity of Blood Monocytes and Neutrophils in COVID-19 patients in relation to their clinical status and use of immunotherapeutic treatment" was to investigate the phagocytic function of neutrophils and monocytes in patients with moderate COVID-19 using the phagocytic index (PI). Specifically by analyzing changes in PI in patients treated with standard treatment and Immunovac VP4 compared to those receiving only standard treatment. PI was evaluated at different time points: immediately after hospitalization, and fourteen and thirty days post-hospitalization. The goal was to understand how phagocytic function differs between patients with more severe and less severe COVID-19 and how these changes correlate with other parameters such as C-reactive protein, oxygen saturation by pulse oximetry (SpO2), and aspartate aminotransferase (AST). The main problem of the paper is the methodology, but other sections need to be reviewed. 1.- Clarification of Methodology: - A complete description of how neutrophils and monocytes were purified from blood and how the phagocytic function was measured has to be included in the Methods section. - Clearly understand how the phagocytic index (PI) was calculated. 2.- Consistency in Terminology: - Standardizing the terminology throughout the manuscript is important for clarity. Using different terms "control," "main group," "standard treatment," and "standard treatment plus vaccine" to refer to the same group is very confusing. 3.- Inclusion of Neutrophil Data: - The abstract and results sections do not include data on the phagocytic index for neutrophils or address their phagocytic function alongside monocytes. Figures and text need to be updated accordingly. 4.- Figures and Data Presentation - Figure 2 has to be revised to improve clarity and readability. The panels are incomplete. - The graphs should better represent the data, highlighting the differences in PI between groups and time points. - Figure legends should include a description of what colors represent on figures. 5.- Discussion and References: - Ensure all paragraphs are appropriately referenced. The paragraph of the discussion section beginning with "considering a wide range of studies" does not include citations. - The reference cited in the introduction regarding the ability of monocytes and macrophages to regenerate tissues is not an appropriate source. 6.- Title - The title of the manuscript is misleading because it aims to analyze the phagocytic activity of blood monocytes and neutrophils in COVID-19 patients, and the methodology presented is not enough to drive the paper's conclusions. Minor Changes: 7.- Abbreviations and Numbers: - All abbreviations should be defined the first time they are mentioned in the manuscript. - Numbers in parentheses, such as "CRP (20.1 (10.9; 43.2)) mg/L," need to be defined and clarified. Explain if these numbers represent medians and interquartile ranges. 8.- Abstract Adjustments: - The abstract mentions monocytes as phagocytic cells but no neutrophils. The description of the results for neutrophils should be included. 9.- References: - Duplicated references (e.g., references 3 and 5) - References that do not support the corresponding paragraphs (e.g., reference 11) 10.- Additional edits: - There are some typographical errors and inconsistencies in terminology. - Define all abbreviations in tables and figures. Reviewer #4: The authors of this brief research report investigate an important aspect of the relationship between the phagocytic activity of peripheral-blood monocytes and neutrophils and the severity of COVID-19. This study provides valuable insights into how the immune system responds to viral infections and how immune dysfunction may influence the course of the disease. It is noted that COVID-19 is often accompanied by bacterial infections, such as pneumonia. The research presented is well-executed, with thorough attention given to the selection of study groups and parameters. However, there are a few major points for consideration. Major Comments: 1. Novelty: the similar study was done by Laura Otto Walter et al. (2022, DOI:10.1111/imm.13457) with broader panel of biochemical parameters. Authors proposed as a novelty a study of Immunovac VP4 as an efficient treatment for COVID-19 accompanied infectious. 2. Monocyte PI: The statement that "higher monocyte PI on admission was associated with lower CRP levels, lower percentages of lung involvement on CT scan, and higher SpO2 levels" seems contradictory. This finding suggests a more complex interaction, possibly reflecting specific disease mechanisms. What could explain such effect? 3. Immunostimulant Effect: The treatment with the immunostimulant showed blood monocyte PI improvement only in more severe patients. What might be the underlying mechanism of Immunovac VP4 action in combination with standard treatment? Could standard treatment interfere with or inhibit the action of Immunovac VP4? 4. Duration of fever: “However, the more severe patients who received Immunovac VP4 had higher levels of oxygen saturation (p=0.01), which suggests clinical benefits of immunotherapy. Moreover, in the patients with less severe COVID-19 who received Immunovac VP4 the mean duration of fever was 2 days shorter than in those who received only the standard treatment (p=0.001).” Quite curious results, which the authors probably should explain further in the Discussion section. Also, it’d be beneficial to include the duration of fever in more severe patients in the Results. In the Results, the authors show that Immunovac VP4 did not affect the monocyte PI or SpO2, but it significantly reduced the duration of fever in less severe patients. Conversely, the opposite effects were observed in more severe patients. Minor Comments: 1. The manuscript contains several typographical and grammar errors. For example, the phrase "monocyte and neutrophil phagocytic indices", “were investigated these parameters in relation to the treatment regimen administered to the study subjects.” 2. “In COVID-19, the activation of resident alveolar macrophages, CD68+CD169+ macrophages of lymph nodes, and CCR2+ monocytes through PRRs triggers the production of type I IFN-γ and other pro-inflammatory cytokines, such as interleukin (IL)-6, IL-1β, and tumor necrosis factor (TNF)-α, that have effective antiviral functions but also contribute to lung tissue damage and inflammation.” This statement requires a reference. 3. “In viral infections, neutrophils migrate to the site of pathogen invasion and contribute to the killing of viruses through active oxygen series (ROS) and phagocytosis.” Is it supposed to be Active oxygen species? 4. It’d be convenient to add more details in Figures description titles. 5. 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