Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 11, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-11648The CLASS (Cerebral visual impairment Learning and Awareness for School Staff) Pilot Study: An evaluation of the awareness of CVI amongst teachers and comparative evaluation of two different educational resources on understanding.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. St Clair Tracy, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 15 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Your study addresses a crucial gap in awareness and education surrounding Cerebral Visual Impairment (CVI), demonstrating commendable clarity and rigor. Using bitesized educational interventions for teacher awareness is particularly timely and valuable. However, several points must be addressed to enhance the manuscript's clarity, structure, and rigor. Please find the comments of the reviewers below, and here are my recommendations as well: First, ensuring consistent terminology throughout the text is important, especially regarding acronyms such as CVI and phrases like "bitesize learning" and "media format." Defining these acronyms upon first mention in the main text will aid in understanding. Additionally, some paragraphs in the "Results" section are lengthy; consider breaking these down into more digestible segments and adding subheadings where applicable to improve readability. In the discussion section, expanding on how your findings can be integrated into existing teacher professional development programs would be beneficial. Providing concrete recommendations or policy suggestions will strengthen the practical implications of your research. Furthermore, attention should be given to the visual quality of figures; specifically, Figures 4 and 5 could be improved with better resolution and visual clarity. Ensuring that fonts are legible and that color schemes are accessible to all viewers, including color-blind viewers, is essential. Finally, please cross-check all citations to ensure they align with the reference list and adhere to the formatting guidelines specified by PLOS. Thank you for your hard work, and we look forward to your revised manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Introduction: I recommend that the introduction section provides a more detailed overview of teachers' current understanding of Cerebral Visual Impairment (CVI) and emphasizes the important social significance of enhancing teachers' awareness of this condition. Research Population Selection: To ensure that this study is representative, could you further elaborate on the criteria and methods used for selecting the research population? Additionally, please clarify the approach taken to choose the participating schools and how the sample size was calculated. Research Process Illustration: I suggest creating a flowchart to clearly illustrate the research process, which would enhance the clarity of your methodology. Reviewer #2: I wish to commend the authors for putting in great effort to put this work together in the midst of the challenges they faced. CVI is an often-overlooked condition and often overlooked condition which negatively impacts many lives. Studies like this are essential in putting a spotlight on the condition. Below are some comments that may help improve the current state of the manuscript Comment 1 Can the authors introduce a section on analysis in the methods? Comment 2 Even though the authors provide details of ethical processes they had to undergo, they do not provide any ethics approval number Comment 3 In line 185 to 189, the authors try to present the characteristics of participants, this will have better been presented in a table format, which will have given room to provide more details about them, e.g. years of teaching, gender etc. Comment 4 Line 191 to 200, the authors describe the level of awareness and provide bulleted statistics below it. These statistics will have been better presented as a table, since that will give more details and will help in appreciation of the chi-square analysis. Comment 5 The authors can move the description of the scoring of the questionnaire (line 217 to 227) to methods The removal of item 5 before from subsequent analysis seems a little out of place. All items in the questionnaire contribute to the measure of a specific quantity, to remove an item there must be enough evidence that will suggest its redundant. The evidence presented of a marginal pre and post score is not a known means of eliminating an item from a questionnaire. The authors may provide a better statistical justification for its removal Comment 6 The authors often discuss the findings in the results section. It will be helpful to the reader if this is avoided and all such statements moved to the discussion section. An example is the discussion in line 305 to 308 Comment 7 The authors have indicated the bias that can be introduced by comparing the number of potential CVI cases among the various categories of teachers. Presenting the results as percentages or ratios may help to reduce the impact of the different class sizes. Comment 8 The authors state as one of their objectives “, compare the effectiveness of text-based versus immersive virtual reality simulation video resources in increasing CVI awareness” however there were no descriptive results that demonstrated this, except for the chi-square results presented. I will suggest the authors present results that segregates responses based on media type. Comment 9 Figure 4 and 5 have no x-axis and y-axis labelling Comment 10 The information provided in table 2 is the same as in figure 2. The authors may remove one of them. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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<p>The CLASS (Cerebral visual impairment Learning and Awareness for School Staff) Pilot Study: An evaluation of the awareness of CVI amongst teachers and comparative evaluation of two different educational resources on understanding. PONE-D-25-11648R1 Dear Dr. St Clair Tracy, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jordan Llego, PhD ELM, D. Hon. Ex., PhDN, RN Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Your study presents important and timely insights into the awareness of Cerebral Visual Impairment (CVI) among educators and the comparative impact of two educational interventions. The clarity of your methodology, the strength of your data analysis, and the practical implications for inclusive teaching practices were all commended by reviewers. The thoughtful integration of reviewer feedback has strengthened the manuscript considerably, particularly in its expanded discussion on policy relevance and professional development applications. We are particularly appreciative of the care taken to clarify methodological details, justify analytical choices (e.g., item exclusion due to ceiling effect), and improve data presentation through new figures and tables. Your commitment to transparency and educational impact aligns well with the values of PLOS ONE. Reviewers' comments: |
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