Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 29, 2024 |
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: A disproportionality analysis was performed to investigate adverse event reporting associated with Tenofovir Alafenamide (TAF) in the FDA adverse event reporting system between 2016 and 2023. Four principal methodologies were used to detect signals in the database. This is a straightforward analysis that offers useful hypothesis generating information for future studies. Some minor comments below: Introduction: Includes a lot of run-on sentences and some grammatical errors. Authors should consider subheadings to break up sections to help the reader, as well as use a grammar checking software to restructure some awkward sentences. For example: I. Hepatocellular Carcinoma II. Hepatitis B (consider combining with section 1 and truncating - reader doesn't need detailed information on both conditions as you are just trying to describe disease burden and significance) III. Antiviral Therapy IV. TAF Methods: Please describe which suite of tools were used to execute which methodologies. Also, were you comparing methodologies? Maybe provide a citation as to why those four analytic methodologies were chosen. Typos: -Line 154 indicates a different time period of study (Q1 2001 - Q1 2023) than lines 145-146 (4th quarter of 2016 to 1st quarter of 2023). -Table 1. Please review as there are some symbol errors/typos. Also, please type out the full meaning of a word before using the abbreviations in the text and in the footnotes of the table. Thank you. Reviewer #2: Zhang et al entitle "A real-world disproportionality analysis of Tenofovir Alafenamide(TAF): data mining of the FDA adverse event reporting system(FAERS) " clearly reported that TAF could be adverse drug for viral hepatitis B. Why are you using the FAERS database to study this drug, it should be that someone else has done this with this similar database similar methodology, so you can write cite in the INTRODUCTION section about some specific other similar studies, such as recommending a few (It is equivalent to saying that someone else has done this type of research using the FAERS database, and you can use this database to do research related to TAF as well):【1】Wang Y, Zhao B, Yang H, Wan Z. A real-world pharmacovigilance study of FDA adverse event reporting system events for sildenafil. Andrology. 2024 May;12(4):785-792. doi: 10.1111/andr.13533. Epub 2023 Sep 19. PMID: 37724699. 【2】Zhao B, Fu Y, Cui S, Chen X, Liu S, Luo L. A real-world disproportionality analysis of Everolimus: data mining of the public version of FDA adverse event reporting system. Front Pharmacol. 2024 Mar 12;15:1333662. doi: 10.3389/fphar.2024.1333662. PMID: 38533254; PMCID: PMC10964017.【3】Yang H, Wan Z, Chen M, Zhang X, Cui W, Zhao B. A real-world data analysis of topotecan in the FDA Adverse Event Reporting System (FAERS) database. Expert Opin Drug Metab Toxicol. 2023 Apr;19(4):217-223. doi: 10.1080/17425255.2023.2219390. Epub 2023 May 30. PMID: 37243615.【4】Zhao B, Zhang X, Chen M, Wang Y. A real-world data analysis of acetylsalicylic acid in FDA Adverse Event Reporting System (FAERS) database. Expert Opin Drug Metab Toxicol. 2023 Jan-Jun;19(6):381-387. doi: 10.1080/17425255.2023.2235267. Epub 2023 Jul 12. PMID: 37421631.【5】Li, Jie, Zhao, Bin, Zhu, YongQing, Wu, Jibiao, Vitreoretinal Traction Syndrome, Nitrituria and Human Epidermal Growth Factor Receptor Negative Might Occur in the Aromatase-Inhibitor Anastrozole Treatment, International Journal of Clinical Practice, 2024, 5132916, 9 pages, 2024. https://doi.org/10.1155/2024/5132916【6】Zhong, C., Zheng, Q., Zhao, B., & Ren, T. (2024). A real-world pharmacovigilance study using disproportionality analysis of United States Food and Drug Administration Adverse Event Reporting System events for vinca alkaloids: comparing vinorelbine and Vincristine. Expert Opinion on Drug Safety, 23(11), 1427–1437. https://doi.org/10.1080/14740338.2024.2410436 Besides, I have general suggestion is: 1. Clarity and Grammar: Improve sentence structures and grammar throughout the manuscript to enhance readability. For example, in the **Abstract**, the sentence *"TAF is a new class of drugs approved for the treatment of viral hepatitis B."* could be revised to *"TAF is a novel antiviral drug approved for the treatment of hepatitis B virus (HBV) infection."* 2. Abstract Improvements: The **Abstract** should briefly mention key findings, including unexpected adverse events. The conclusion should explicitly state the significance of these findings for clinical practice. 3. Methodology Details: Provide a clearer explanation of statistical methodologies such as **BCPNN** and **GPS**, ensuring non-specialist readers understand their application. 4. Data Presentation: Tables should be formatted for consistency. For example: - Align column headers for better readability. - Ensure numerical values have consistent decimal places. - Clearly define abbreviations (e.g., **SOC, PT**). 5. Discussion Enhancement: - Clarify the implications of **unexpected adverse events** such as **cerebral infarction and dementia**. Are these findings clinically significant? - Provide possible biological explanations or cite relevant literature. - Discuss potential confounding factors. 6. Reference Formatting: Ensure all references are correctly cited in **PLOS ONE format** and include DOI links where applicable. 7. Figure and Table Legends: Each table/figure should have **self-explanatory captions**, detailing key insights for readers. 8. Ethical Considerations: If patient data were used, confirm compliance with ethical guidelines and data privacy regulations. 9.Can Author put a bar chart for the percentage of TAF uses in the top five country and hospitalization, death, life threating events, and disability. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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Dear Dr. li, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The revision has addressed many of the critiques. However, several modifcations are still required before the manuscript is suitable for publication.1. Please write out all abbreviations at first mention, including in the Abstract and the main text of the paper. 2. The Introduction contains many statements that must be supported by references. For example, the section on TAF refers to many aspects of TAF's safety record without references that are needed. Please review the entire manuscript and add references to support statements based on prior studies and literature.3. Please capitalize the first word in each row of the tables (e.g., Sex).4. In Table 2, please define what is meant be "Investigations" as a category.5. In Table 3, the authors examined liver tests in multiple ways (ALT, AST, transaminases, etc.). Please provide a justification for this or else present analyses that include all of these as a single category of abnormal transaminases.6. In line 300, the authors mention TAF being used off-label for HIV or hepatitis B, but this medication seems to have FDA approval for both infections. Please correct or clarify and justify. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 28 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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A real-world disproportionality analysis of Tenofovir Alafenamide(TAF): data mining of the FDA adverse event reporting system(FAERS) PONE-D-24-49151R2 Dear Dr. li, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Douglas S. Krakower, MD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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