Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 25, 2025 |
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Please provide us the anonymous certificate of proofreading and attached it in the table of correction. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The manuscript examines how bank-firm relationships and executives with banking backgrounds influence corporate ESG greenwashing among Chinese A-share listed firms. The topic is relevant given the increasing scrutiny on ESG disclosures and concerns about misrepresentation in corporate sustainability reporting. The study presents a compelling argument that firms with bank affiliations are more likely to engage in greenwashing, driven by executive compensation structures and financialization pressures. However, several areas require improvement to strengthen its contribution. The introduction effectively highlights the importance of ESG and greenwashing but lacks a clear articulation of how this study advances prior research. While the role of bank lending in ESG disclosures has been studied, the influence of non-lending banking relationships is relatively unexplored. The paper could better position itself within the existing literature by clarifying how it differentiates from previous work and what unique insights it offers. The theoretical framework, grounded in Institutional, Agency, and Legitimacy Theories, is appropriate but could benefit from a deeper discussion of potential alternative mechanisms. While the argument that banks encourage greenwashing to align with investor expectations is plausible, the role of industry-specific factors and competitive pressures deserves more attention. The empirical strategy is generally well-structured, with a comprehensive dataset covering Chinese A-share firms from 2010 to 2023. However, concerns arise regarding the measurement of greenwashing. The study constructs greenwashing metrics based on discrepancies between various ESG scores, yet different rating agencies employ distinct methodologies. The reliability and consistency of these measures require further justification. The study could enhance its robustness by cross-validating greenwashing scores with alternative proxies, such as textual analysis of ESG reports or media sentiment analysis. The identification strategy attempts to address endogeneity concerns through firm and industry-year fixed effects. While these controls mitigate some sources of bias, the potential reverse causality between bank relationships and ESG disclosures remains a concern. Firms with stronger governance structures may attract bank investors, rather than bank ownership causing greenwashing tendencies. The instrumental variable approach could be strengthened with a more convincing exclusion restriction. The study claims that financialization amplifies symbolic ESG disclosures, yet the direction of causality between financialization and greenwashing requires further scrutiny. The results indicate a significant positive relationship between bank-firm ties and greenwashing, with executive compensation acting as a mediating factor. While the findings align with the hypothesis that banking relationships incentivize firms to inflate ESG disclosures, the magnitude and economic significance of these effects remain unclear. The study could provide additional analysis to assess whether greenwashing leads to tangible market benefits, such as increased investment or lower financing costs. The moderating effects of financialization and transparency are interesting but require deeper interpretation. While transparency appears to reduce greenwashing, the underlying mechanisms—whether through enhanced regulatory oversight or investor scrutiny—are not fully explored. The heterogeneity analysis offers valuable insights, showing that non-state-owned enterprises and firms in financially underdeveloped regions are more affected by greenwashing incentives. These findings underscore the role of institutional and regional factors in shaping ESG misrepresentation. However, additional robustness tests, such as a placebo test or falsification check, could further validate the results. The discussion section effectively summarizes the findings but could engage more critically with alternative explanations. The conclusion reiterates the study’s contributions but lacks concrete policy and managerial implications. The suggestion that regulators should strengthen ESG disclosure requirements is valid but requires more specificity regarding which aspects of ESG reporting need improvement. Similarly, the recommendations for financial institutions and corporate managers could be more actionable. A major revision is required to refine the theoretical positioning, strengthen the empirical identification, and deepen the interpretation of results. The manuscript presents a relevant contribution, but further work is required to enhance its robustness and practical implications. Reviewer #2: Referee Report for Manuscript: "Bank-Firm Relationships and Corporate ESG Greenwashing" Summary: This manuscript investigates how bank-firm relationships, specifically through bank equity holdings and executive affiliations with banks, affect corporate greenwashing behaviors in Chinese A-share listed firms. The study utilizes Institutional Theory, Agency Theory, and Legitimacy Theory to explain motivations behind symbolic ESG disclosures, focusing on executive compensation and financialization as underlying mechanisms. I hope my comments can be useful to further improve this draft. 1. Conceptual Clarity: The paper could benefit from additional clarity on why the differences between ESG scores from various sources accurately measure greenwashing. More justification of the validity and reliability of these measures would strengthen the analysis. 2. Endogeneity Concerns: Although the study uses fixed effects to address endogeneity, additional econometric strategies such as instrumental variable approaches or quasi-experimental designs would strengthen causal inference. At minimum, incorporate a lead-lag analysis to address possible reverse causality and strengthen the robustness of causal inferences. 3. Methodological Robustness: Provide stronger rationalization for employing Tobit models and Propensity Score Matching. What are the treatment groups and control groups? The current draft is not clear on this. 4. Empirical Analysis: a. Given existing literature highlighting banks' influence through lending relationships, explicitly control for bank lending relationships to isolate the distinct impacts of equity holdings and executive affiliations on greenwashing behaviors. This additional control will strengthen causal claims and clarify contributions beyond traditional lending relationships. b. The current construction of the main independent variable (BankRel) combines distinct dimensions—firm holdings of bank shares, bank shareholding in the firm, and executives' banking backgrounds. Separately analyze these components, particularly distinguishing the effects of firm holding bank shares from banks holding firm shares, as these relationships may differently influence corporate governance and ESG reporting incentives. As shareholders, banks should have enhanced monitoring capabilities over firms' ESG disclosures due to their closer involvement in corporate governance, thereby potentially reducing information asymmetry. Explore further heterogeneity, potentially considering the separate effects of bank shareholding versus executive banking experience. 5. Minor: There are some typos and grammatical issues (e.g., consistently correct "Banking-frim" to "Banking-firm"). Standardize variable naming throughout the manuscript to improve readability, such as “Greenwashing” vs. “Green washing”. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Bank-Firm Relationships and Corporate ESG Greenwashing PONE-D-25-09658R1 Dear Dr. Liu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jasman Tuyon, Ph.D., MBA Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors have appropriately revised the manuscript by responding appropriately to feedback from the previous peer review round. The introduction provides a clearer description of the key value of the study by closely examining non-lending bank-firm relationships, which researchers have neglected in previous work. The authors have improved the theoretical model by combining institutional with agency and legitimacy perspectives, while extending the analysis of alternative mechanisms characterised by signaling effects and financialisation-driven temporary performance metrics. The authors effectively addressed endogeneity issues by using instrumental variables together with placebo tests to verify results. The researchers have provided extensive details on how the greenwashing index works, while providing more rationale for using multiple ESG data sources. Additional details have been added to the empirical findings, which explore different bank affiliations and their different impacts on ownership structures and market trends. The authors now provide stronger policy and management implications in their conclusion, following their response to earlier concerns about economic significance. The manuscript shows notable improvements in three main aspects, including clarity, methodological precision and theoretical framework. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-25-09658R1 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Liu, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Jasman Tuyon Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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