Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 15, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-02263Saliva urea nitrogen for detection of kidney disease in adults: A meta-analysis of diagnostic test accuracyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Abdalla, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 30 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: Some suggestions are made as follows to improve the quality of the manuscript. (a) Recent studies have identified several novel biomarkers associated with kidney illnesses. To make the manuscript better, the introduction should include summaries of more earlier studies. (b) To do the meta-regression, the author(s) you need to figure out the sensitivity and specificity of SUN for each of the two reference tests individually. The analyses should come up with pooled figures for each test, not for the whole thing. (c) The use of only a few literature studies raises major questions about the usefulness of the given meta-analysis. Furthermore, it's important to outline the limitations. (d) The language editing needs improvement by a native speaker. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: In this work, the authors reveal that saliva urea nitrogen for detection of kidney disease in adults: A meta-analysis of diagnostic test accuracy. Several suggestions are made as follows to improve the quality of the manuscript. 1. All abbreviations should be substantiated for the first time. 2. Several novel biomarkers were identified in renal diseases by the latest studies such as PMID: 38538857; PMID: 39098923; PMID: 38053242; PMID: 35577910; PMID: 26376947. Please summarize these previous studies in the introduction section to improve manuscript. 3. Publishing clinical studies should be further discussed. 4. Limitations should be described. 5. Please change the references based on the guide for authors. 6. The language editing should be improved by a native speaker. Reviewer #2: The author has reported a review paper regarding the current status of Salivary Urea nitrogen tests for screening of chronic kidney disease. The manuscript is well written and consists of important information. Although there are few points which needs to be addressed for better readability of this work, mentioned pointwise: 1. Line no. 71: SUN is the abbreviation of "Salivary urea nitrogen", use this phrase instead. 2. The introduction does not depict the level of SUN for healthy and sick, the information should be there. 3. Comparative analysis of alternative biomarkers such as Scr and BUN is missing. Author's claim on SUNs performance is vague until it is benchmarked with Scr and BUN 4. What is the key takeaways of this study? How experimental research will get benefit from this study? 5. Author should consider experimental factors of SUN as success criterion too. 6. How SUN model will be effective with other non specific disease state along with CKD? 7. Conclusion is not technical, need to be revised. Reviewer #3: The manuscript provides a meta-analysis of a diagnostic test accuracy: the use of measurements of saliva urea nitrogen (SUN) as a method for detection of kidney disease in undeveloped countries. The manuscript is well written – no particular issues with language detected; each section of the manuscript is also comprehensively presented. Major concern/comment: I have a major concern in relation to the merit of the presented meta-analysis on the exclusive basis of the low number of literature studies used. After all the search made and through the application of the eligibility criteria only seven studies remained, references 18-24. From these studies three are made in the same country (Malawi) and all seven share at least one author in the list of authors of the publication. One of the authors (Rhys Evans) is present in five of the seven publications. Thus, the question to be raised is why did the authors decided to perform such meta-analysis considering these facts? Reviewer #4: I read the meta-analysis on SUN with great interest. The paper is well written, and the importance of the work is clearly and compellingly communicated. The authors address an important gap in the literature and there is value in conducting a meta-analysis to aggregate published studies. My main concerns when reading the paper was switching back and forth between reference tests presenting sensitivity or specificity for certain tests without presenting both sets of data for both reference tests. Further, the thresholds for the reference tests are not provided. The authors should clearly indicate what the reference test is, and if they are going to include two, then specify which is primary and secondary, and present all statistics for each test. Further, the patient population should be better defined. It is difficult to conceptualize using the test for both CKD, AKD, and AKI and using BUN and creatinine as reference tests. Specific comments For the meta-regression, the sensitivity and specificity of SUN need to be calculated separately for the two reference tests. It’s also hard to envision how estimates can be pooled when thresholds of what constitutes a positive test differs across studies. The analyses should generate pooled estimates within each test, not overall. The reference test varies between SCr and BUN but in both cases, the thresholds of what constitutes a positive reference test is not provided and is needed. For the sources of heterogeneity, consider the threshold of the tests used both for the index and the reference test. The paragraph on a previous meta-analysis on salivary creatinine and urea is interesting and the data appropriately contextualized given the results presented. This needs to be reconsidered when the estimates are provided for each reference test separately, as the interpretation is likely to change. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Saliva urea nitrogen for detection of kidney disease in adults: A meta-analysis of diagnostic test accuracy PONE-D-25-02263R1 Dear Dr. Abdalla, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: After careful revision according to the comments of reviewer, the manuscript has been improved as compared to previous version, it is recommended for publication. Reviewer #3: I am fine with the author's reply to my comment and all other reviewer comments. The new version of the manuscript has been considerably improved in overall quality. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Rui de Albuqerque Carvalho ********** |
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