Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 21, 2025 |
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If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Please ensure that the manuscript adheres to reporting standards applicable to the study design, available at https://www.equator-network.org/reporting-guidelines/ [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Please describe the pre-and-post test noted in line 424 in the methodology section - including questionnaire developing and pre-testing etc - and analysis used to achieve these results. The paper notes adaptation of the app to local guidelines but doesn't describe if PNG guidelines are up to date in alignment with global standards - please add language to discuss this as - in theory - the App is in alignment with global guidelines Please source other papers that have reported on testing the App in other contexts (Rwanda, DR Congo etc) Reviewer #2: General: Interesting to see the continued dissemination of the App through both formal and informal mechanisms after the initial training and launch activities were complete - one can infer continued interest within networks of health care workers. The Data Availability Statement should address where the data can be accessed without restriction, in line with the requirements of the section for publication. Would edit out use of passive voice throughout. Specific suggested edits: Line 39 - would suggest "adapt" rather than "develop". Lines 212 - 213: For reader understanding it would be good to clarify how downloads reached 1873 in Dec 2024 but 1495 downloads are reported from 2022 - 2024; if baseline started at 606, 1495 downloads would still be higher than 1873. Does this figure take App deletions into consideration or is there another explanation? Lines 225 - 226: This reads a bit differently than what was reported in lines 121 - 123 "Half of the users had learnt about the App through in-service training, others had received stand-alone training in the use of the App, learnt about it through a colleague or friend or through a conference or other event." Lines 278 - 279: This is a promising outcome of utilization of the App. Is this qualitatively reported by the HCWs (and if so, would add "reportedly"), or something that was documented and can be confirmed? Line 358 (section): in the challenges, was there any information provided by the HCWs interviewed regarding supplies? While beyond the scope of the Safe Delivery App, it would effect if and how the HCWs could put the directives to use. For example, if the App explains up to date guidance of management of PPH which includes certain drugs, medications, and commodities which may not be available - how did they overcome this, or was this addressed in the adaptation? If not it's also ok because this is touched on in the discussion, but would be a good addition to results if this was covered. Lines 424 - 425: Unsure if skills should be mentioned as there is no clear explanation on how this was determined or score increase on skills test provided. Suggest removing, or adding more supporting data. Line 459: Are the PNG version of the App and the Red Book fully aligned and contain the same content? If so would be strong to emphasize that. 518 - 520: The last line is a bit confusing, it makes it seem as if all of the midwives, nurses, other HCWs that were spoken about are "unskilled" or that the App is for non-skilled providers. Authors may be trying to say where staffing resources are low and HCWs have to deal with increased case load, manage complications, or where continuing professional development/ refresher training is rare? ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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"It's like a book in the palm of my hand": Adapting the Safe Delivery App for Papua New Guinea to improve quality of maternal and newborn care PONE-D-25-20687R1 Dear Dr. Vallely, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Hannah Tappis, DrPH, MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Previous reviewer comments have been thoughtfully addressed. Reviewers' comments: |
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