Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 12, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-01876Global trends and disparities in ischemic heart disease attributable to high systolic blood pressure, 1990–2021: insights from the Global Burden of Disease studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Guo, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: The topic is interesting. However, I recommend a major revision incorporating suggestions and comments from Editor and Reviewers. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 22 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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However, methodology and discussion section might need some major revisions. My comments are included. Methodology section: 1. The authors should include more details about their approach: How did you extract the data? Which GBD estimate did you use? Which age groups did you include? Did you restrict to adult or include all age? 2. How did you determine the mortality of hypertension-related IHD? It would be very helpful to indicate the method precisely for readers who are not familiar with GBD can understand. 3. A brief summary of statistic model using by GBD Collaborators to establish those datasets/estimate would also be helpful. 4. Statistical analysis: How did you calculate EAPC? Which model did you use? A details explanation would be needed. Discussion section: This section is overall confusing with repetitive statement. 1. From line 281 - 293. The statement that hypertension-related IHD is dominant in male than female was mentioned in line 281 then repeated in 286-287. Moreover, lines 283-285 and lines 287-290 had literally the same meaning. 2. You need to discuss more about the underlying reasons of your findings (disparity in sex/age/region) and propose potential solution. 3. Limitation (lines 307-317). You need to acknowledge that hypertension defined by GBD is significantly different to the current definition from major guidelines including AHA/ACC, ESC, JNC, ISH.... This definition did overestimated your findings concerning the burden of IHD. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Deferring line edits for now as an epidemiologic study of ischemic heart disease without statistical analyses and/or adjustments including smoking, lipids, or diabetes does not, to me, seem technically sound or scientifically rigorous. Some more general methodologic/analytic thoughts as below: --I see consistent with prior published work (ref. 20) and GBD TMREL, but a high SBP cut-off of 110-115 mmHg is not consistent with most clinical guidelines (many of which have changed meaningfully throughout the long study time period of 1990-2021); suggest at least mentioning in the discussion. Also, was the cut-off greater than or equal to 115 mmHg or 110 mmHg? --are SDI categories per country or per participant? It seems per country (lines 225-227 and PMID 33069327) but this should be clarified in the methods section and perhaps mentioned as a limitation in the discussion section (i.e., if SDI categories are per country, all participants from a low SDI country may not be low SDI; if SDI categories are per participant, high SDI in one country may not align with high SDI for another country). What are the SDI categories based on? Reviewer #2: The manuscript titled "Global Trends and Disparities in Ischemic Heart Disease Attributable to High Systolic Blood Pressure, 1990–2021: Insights from the Global Burden of Disease Study" presents a comprehensive analysis of the global burden of ischemic heart disease (IHD) linked to high systolic blood pressure (HSBP). By leveraging the extensive Global Burden of Disease (GBD) 2021 dataset, the study aims to highlight trends, regional disparities, and demographic variations in IHD burden over three decades. While the manuscript is well-structured and provides valuable epidemiological insights, several critical issues need to be addressed to strengthen the robustness and interpretability of the findings. General Comments: Strengths: The study utilizes a robust dataset (GBD 2021), ensuring a large sample size and global applicability. The analysis of temporal trends and disparities across different sociodemographic index (SDI) categories adds value to the study. The use of age-standardized rates (ASRs) and estimated annual percentage change (EAPC) enhances the comparability of results. Weaknesses: The manuscript lacks a clear justification for the focus on HSBP-related IHD, as opposed to other major modifiable risk factors for IHD (e.g., diabetes, smoking, obesity). There is an overreliance on descriptive analysis without a deeper exploration of underlying causal mechanisms driving observed trends. The discussion on public health implications is underdeveloped, particularly regarding potential interventions and strategies tailored to different SDI groups. The manuscript does not sufficiently address limitations related to data quality and potential biases in the GBD dataset. Detailed Comments: Introduction: The introduction effectively outlines the significance of IHD and its burden worldwide but would benefit from a more explicit rationale for focusing on HSBP as the primary risk factor. Including a comparative discussion of other key modifiable risk factors would improve contextual clarity. The literature review should include more recent studies on the interplay between hypertension control policies and IHD burden across different global regions. Methods: The use of the GBD dataset is appropriate, but additional details on the methodology for calculating DALYs and ASRs should be provided. Specifically, how were missing or inconsistent data handled across the different countries included in the analysis? The choice of statistical models, including smoothed curve modeling and Spearman correlation, should be better justified. Why were these methods selected over alternative approaches (e.g., multivariable regression models)? The manuscript lacks sensitivity analyses to assess the robustness of the findings. Including sensitivity analyses that test the impact of different assumptions on the trends observed would enhance the credibility of the results. Results: The presentation of findings is clear, but additional subgroup analyses (e.g., stratified by region, gender, and age group) would improve interpretability. For instance, were any regions or demographic groups found to have significantly different trends in HSBP-related IHD burden compared to the global average? The discussion on increasing ASRs in low-SDI regions needs further elaboration. What specific socioeconomic or healthcare system factors may be driving these increases? The correlation analyses presented in the results should include effect size interpretations to aid in understanding the magnitude of associations. Discussion: The discussion should incorporate a more in-depth analysis of policy implications. Given the findings, what specific interventions should be prioritized in high-burden regions? More emphasis should be placed on explaining the disparities observed in different SDI regions. The manuscript should explore whether differences in healthcare access, medication adherence, or public health policies contribute to the findings. The limitations section should explicitly discuss potential biases in the GBD dataset, such as underreporting of IHD in certain regions or inconsistencies in blood pressure measurement methodologies across countries. Conclusion: The conclusion is concise but should better emphasize actionable recommendations for policymakers and healthcare providers. Consider highlighting the importance of future research to examine interventions aimed at reducing HSBP and mitigating its impact on IHD. Reviewer #3: The study comprehensively described global data on the risk of ischemic heart disease attributable to high systolic blood pressure, provided valuable data on regional variations. The results are scientifically sound and could impact health care. I would suggest the R code they used to get the study results with outputs. It would help future researchers to replicate the results of the study. Also, I think it will help in dissemination of the paper among the scientific society. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-25-01876R1Global trends and disparities in ischemic heart disease attributable to high systolic blood pressure, 1990–2021: insights from the Global Burden of Disease studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Guo, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: The manuscript has greatly improved, but a minor revision is needed to address all of the reviewer's comments. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by May 21 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Thien Tan Tri Tai Truyen, M.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: Minor Revisions: Justification for Focus on HSBP: The authors have expanded the rationale for selecting HSBP, though the introduction would benefit from a stronger link between underestimated HSBP impact and real-world cardiovascular risk perception among clinicians. Suggested addition: Cite the paper by Cesaro et al., titled "Discrepancies Between Physician-Perceived and Calculated Cardiovascular Risk in Primary Prevention: Implications for LDL-C Target Achievement and Appropriate Lipid-Lowering Therapy" ([doi:10.1007/s40292-025-00705-0]) to highlight the persistent under-recognition of hypertension in cardiovascular risk assessment and decision-making. Overreliance on Descriptive Analyses: While the authors clarified the descriptive purpose, adding a brief note acknowledging that causal inference is limited by the ecological nature of GBD data would improve transparency. Public Health Recommendations: Reviewer #2 requested expanded intervention strategies. The revised manuscript now offers policy-relevant proposals stratified by SDI level, which is a welcome improvement. Sensitivity Analysis: The authors provided a reasonable justification for not conducting formal sensitivity analyses, citing the use of GBD uncertainty intervals. This should be briefly mentioned in the limitations section for clarity. Detailed Comments: Introduction: Integrate the above-cited reference to reinforce the concept that hypertension is often under-recognized or undervalued relative to its true impact on IHD. Reframe the discussion of HSBP as a “silent burden” that may be systematically underestimated in risk stratification tools. Methods: The description of SDI assignment at the country level is now clear. Statistical rationale for Spearman and smoothed curve modeling is well-articulated. Results: The age-stratified and region-specific subgroup trends are now clearly presented and contextualized. Consider annotating graphs to highlight key divergence points among SDI categories. Discussion: The extended analysis of sex- and region-specific disparities is stronger. Emphasize how findings support global and local initiatives for hypertension control. Limitations: Acknowledge the inability to infer causality from ecological-level GBD data. Note that despite robust modeling, within-country inequalities in SDI and BP control are not captured. Conclusion: Now appropriately focused and policy-oriented. Reviewer #3: I have no further comments since the authors have addressed all my previous comments. The manuscript is technically sound ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . 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