Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 30, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-49441Effectiveness of Coordinated Care Interventions Delivered to Stroke Survivors in Low and Middle-Income Countries: Systematic Review and Meta-Analysis ProtocolPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Danso-Appiah, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In addition to the reviewer comments below, I have also appended a few comments from the editor. My general impression of this protocol is that there is an overuse of vague language and methodological descriptions. Because this is a protocol paper, it is very important for your methods to be concretely defined and set in stone. Please review your protocol carefully to check for this during your revision. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 26 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please provide a complete Data Availability Statement in the submission form, ensuring you include all necessary access information or a reason for why you are unable to make your data freely accessible. If your research concerns only data provided within your submission, please write "All data are in the manuscript and/or supporting information files" as your Data Availability Statement. 4. Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. Additional Editor Comments: 1. I question the use of Google Scholar as a literature source. As you may know, most entries on the Google Scholar database are unmoderated and may not be legitimate research articles. It is also difficult to develop systematic search strategies for Google Scholar compared to dedicated academic database providers, such as OVID or EBSCOhost. 2. Please concretely define whether you will compute OR or RR as the effect measure for dichotomous outcomes. 3. Line 418, please remove capitalization on "Forest plots". 4. Please do not use vague language such as "The synthesis may be stratified based on patient populations, components of interventions and study designs." Given that this is a prospective protocol, you should clearly define any subgroup or sensitivity analysis that you are going to conduct. 5. Note that you should not be using statistical measures of heterogeneity as the deciding factor for whether a random- or fixed-effects approach is used. This decision should be purely made based on characteristics of the included patients and studies -- in most cases, this will be a random-effects model unless you have a clear justification for using fixed-effects (e.g., the patient population are very similar, such as pooling studies from the same institution). Please concretely define your approach as a random-effects approach. 6. What is "appropriate imputation methods"? Clearly define them and any sensitivity analyses that will be used to assess impact of imputation, and cite any methodological paper, if needed. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions? The research question outlined is expected to address a valid academic problem or topic and contribute to the base of knowledge in the field. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses? The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable? Descriptions of methods and materials in the protocol should be reported in sufficient detail for another researcher to reproduce all experiments and analyses. The protocol should describe the appropriate controls, sample size calculations, and replication needed to ensure that the data are robust and reproducible. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception, at the time of publication. The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript describes a study protocol that aims to assess the effectiveness of coordinated care interventions delivered to stroke survivors in low- and middle-income countries through a systematic review and meta-analysis. The protocol is very well written and systematically designed in accordance with the latest guidelines. Please find below some minor comments: 1. If you hypothesize having outcomes measured on different scales, I suggest including the SMD, which converts all these measures into standard units for the analysis of continuous outcomes. 2. I recommend aligning the methods described in the abstract with those detailed in the full text (e.g., the electronic databases listed are not entirely consistent, and key searches in LMIC-related field are not mentioned). 3. I suggest ensuring consistency between this protocol and its registration on PROSPERO. This could be achieved by making minor updates to the PROSPERO registration, such as finalizing the electronic search strategy, including the GRADE approach, etc. Consistency across all documents is essential. Reviewer #2: General Comments: This manuscript presents a promising protocol for a systematic review and meta-analysis to assess the effectiveness of coordinated care interventions for stroke survivors in low- and middle-income countries (LMICs). The importance of this topic is evident given the increasing burden of stroke and the complex care needs of survivors in LMICs. The review has the potential to make a significant contribution to the literature, particularly in identifying effective care models for stroke survivors in resource-limited settings. However, several aspects of the manuscript require clarification, refinement, and additional detail. Below are my detailed comments and suggestions for revision: Abstract: The abstract provides a succinct overview of the study, but it could benefit from more clarity in describing the specific aims of the review. For example, it would be helpful to highlight explicitly that the review aims to identify the components of care coordination interventions and their impact on stroke outcomes. The expected outcomes section could also be slightly reworded to clarify the role of stroke severity, type, and the nature of the interventions in influencing outcomes. Suggested Revision: Add more specific details in the aims section, such as "to assess the impact of care coordination interventions on clinical outcomes such as motor recovery, cognitive function, and mental health, while also exploring factors like stroke type and severity." Background Expand the background to include more specific details about the healthcare challenges in LMICs, such as a lack of stroke specialists, rehabilitation facilities, and access to follow-up care, which necessitate the need for effective care coordination. METHODS Suggested Revision: Remove redundant mentions of databases like "ProQuest" and "Google Scholar." Consider including preprint databases in the search strategy to capture emerging studies. Inclusion/Exclusion Criteria: While the inclusion criteria are well outlined, it is unclear how the study will define "care coordination" in the context of stroke management. The term “care coordination” is widely used but can have various meanings across studies. A clear, operational definition would help in the screening process. Suggested Revision: Define "care coordination" clearly, specifying which elements (e.g., case management, multidisciplinary care) must be present for a study to be included. Risk of Bias: The manuscript mentions that two reviewers will conduct risk of bias assessments but does not specify which validated tools will be used. It would be helpful to state explicitly which risk of bias tool will be used (e.g., Cochrane Risk of Bias tool for randomized trials). Suggested Revision: Specify the risk of bias assessment tools that will be used, such as the Cochrane Risk of Bias tool for randomized controlled trials (RCTs). Suggested Revision: OUTCOMES Clarify if all the mentioned tests for motor recovery and QoL will be included or if a subset will be prioritized based on relevance to the intervention or study design. Suggested Revision: Provide more specific definitions for secondary outcomes like "service use" and "recurrent stroke" to clarify what will be included in the review. Statistical Methods: The statistical methods section mentions using a random-effects model when heterogeneity is significant but does not specify what thresholds for heterogeneity (e.g., I² statistic) would trigger this model. It would also be useful to explain how potential publication bias will be assessed. Suggested Revision: Specify the thresholds for I² that would justify the use of a random-effects model. Also, describe how publication bias will be assessed (e.g., funnel plots, Egger’s test). The manuscript states that ethical approval is not required because the study involves secondary data. While this is understandable, it would be important to mention any potential conflicts of interest related to the inclusion of data from international donors or stakeholders who may influence stroke care policies. Suggested Revision: Include a brief statement regarding potential conflicts of interest, particularly related to the involvement of international funding or healthcare organizations. Conclusion and Implications: The expected outcomes are promising, but the manuscript could benefit from a clearer discussion on how the findings will specifically influence policy and practice in LMICs. For example, what actionable recommendations might emerge for stroke care teams or health policymakers? Suggested Revision: Expand the conclusion to include potential actionable recommendations for stroke care providers and policymakers in LMICs based on the expected findings. Suggested Revision: Conduct a thorough review for grammar and clarity, ensuring consistency in writing style and tone throughout the manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). 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Effectiveness of Care Coordination Interventions Delivered to Stroke Survivors in Low and Middle-Income Countries: Systematic Review and Meta-Analysis Protocol PONE-D-24-49441R1 Dear Dr. Danso-Appiah, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jiawen Deng Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-24-49441R1 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Danso-Appiah, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Jiawen Deng Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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