Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 22, 2024 |
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: These improvements will enhance the clarity and impact of the article. We look forward to receiving the revised version. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The manuscript “Development and validation of an interpretable longitudinal preeclampsia risk prediction using machine learning” presents a study that highlights the development of a machine learning-based tool to longitudinally predict the risk of preeclampsia. This is a relevant topic, mainly because it can contribute to minimizing risks during pregnancy and childbirth - a factor dominated by the quality of prenatal care. The research developed by the authors presents a new approach to predicting preeclampsia that allows doctors to identify patients at risk early and provide personalized predictions throughout pregnancy - something desired, for example, for women with pregnancies considered high risk in primary health care. Recommendations [1] Introduction The text presented in the introduction is quite clear and objective, and is very well written. However, it would be important for the authors to include more global epidemiological data on preeclampsia. What is the incidence and prevalence of this health problem in pregnant women worldwide? In addition to the factors presented by the authors, are there other factors that may be decisive for the development of preeclampsia? I believe that this information will make the text even more qualified and will better justify the contributions of the research. [2] Methodology The methodology is very well documented, which guarantees the reproducibility of the steps used. However, I would like to know if the authors will make the data used in this research available? This is important to ensure greater transparency and reproducibility of the experiment. The data can be made available in a supplementary file or a public domain repository, for example Zenodo. I believe that including a flowchart with the sequence of steps used in the methodology will further qualify the text and illustrate in a more visual way the entire path followed by the authors during the experiments. [3] Related works In the introduction, the authors present some related works and also manage to critically discuss some of these works. However, I consider it important to create a specific section for this. It would be interesting for the authors to discuss this topic in more depth, what are the similar works and what is the main difference between these works and also between what is being proposed by the authors? This is very important, as it better qualifies the research and highlights its contributions. The main contribution cannot only use machine learning; in my opinion, the main contribution is the predictive capacity and its application, especially in public health. For example, the work “ILITIA: telehealth architecture for high-risk gestation classification” works on the classification of high-risk pregnancies - pregnant women with high-risk pregnancies, but it does not use machine learning. It is a specialist architecture that applies a validated classification protocol that has great application in public health, in particular by carrying out this screening process remotely, through telediagnosis and teleconsultation. [4] Discussions The results presented in the manuscript are relevant. So I expected a discussion that addressed issues related to public health. Preeclampsia is a global health problem, so how can women from all over the world have access to this type of health care? How can this type of technology be included in public health so that more health professionals can have access to it and apply it to their patients? These are more important challenges than those of technology, because the technological challenges are being solved, but expanding access and improving equity in the health of the population does not seem to be on the list of priorities of countries - as is the case in the United States, for example, which has the technology, but the health system is still very expensive and fragile - it is not inclusive. Reviewer's consideration I would like to congratulate the authors for their excellent work, and I am grateful for the opportunity to review this manuscript. The work is of good quality and deserves to be published, but it needs minor adjustments first. Reviewer #2: This manuscript describes the development of a longitudinal preeclampsia prediction tool, and the clinical impact of the usage of the tool in the context of current literature. The manuscript has incorporated a robust and multi‐faceted methodology which makes it technically sound. The study has a comprehensive data source from three hospitals. The paper has been further strengthened with the external validation using the nuMoM2b dataset. The study demonstrates a thorough exploration of predictive modelling techniques. Shapley values have been used for interpretability. Clear Performance Metrics are evidenced by reporting AUCs with confidence intervals at eight gestational time points. The manuscript has not found any significant differences in performance based on race and ethnicity which is important for clinical applicability of the model. The data largely support the conclusions from the study. The predictive model shows promise for early and personalized risk identification for preeclampsia to help in treatment of the patients. The main claims of the paper is that it presents as a novel longitudinal prediction tool to predict the risk of preeclampsia at multiple gestational time points using a diverse collection of data. The tool demonstrated internally acceptable performance and has also been externally validated using the nuMoM2b cohort, supporting its potential generalizability. The significance of the claims are critical as it addresses a critical gap in current clinical tools, which can miss up to 66% of patients at risk. The model has integrated a broad range of data types with advanced machine learning techniques which can provide data-driven, personalized medicine in obstetrics. The claims in the paper are generally placed within the context of known limitations in the field, and the authors appear to have treated the literature fairly. The analyses support the claims regarding improved preeclampsia risk prediction. But further evidence in the form of prospective studies are needed. This would provide a greater validation of the tool’s effectiveness and clinical impact. This is a retrospective study and hence there is no prespecified trial protocol against which deviations can be assessed. The details of the methodology has been incorporated in the paper - including study population, selection criteria, the time periods, eight gestational points for data collection, the types of data used, the modelling techniques used. This is sufficient to allow the experiments to be reproduced. The limitations section is well-articulated with the authors rightly pointing out the diagnostic ambiguity due to the overlapping features with gestational and chronic hypertension. The exclusion of home blood pressure measurements as it is unavailable in the EHR is clearly stated. This suggests to integrate home monitoring in future work indicates a proactive approach to enhancing predictive power. The study is based on retrospective data and that prospective validation is needed as noted in the limitation section. The manuscript is generally well organized and written in standard English following a clear structure by describing the background, methodology, results, and conclusions in a logical sequence. Including brief explanations or supplementary material could further enhance accessibility and understandability for a broader audience. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Development and validation of an interpretable longitudinal preeclampsia risk prediction using machine learning PONE-D-24-59081R1 Dear Dr. Kovacheva, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Zenewton André da Silva Gama, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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