Peer Review History
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PONE-D-24-44553Suppression of mechanical hypersensitivity and change in the expression of the dopamine D2 receptor by administration of anti-CGRP antibody into the trigeminal ganglion in trigeminal neuropathic pain model ratsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Maegawa, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 18 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors Maegawa et al. have reported that the interaction of CGRP and D2 receptor in the trigeminal ganglion neurons is involved in orofacial neuropathic pain development using infraorbital nerve ligation (ION-CCI) model rats. The following are comments on this paper: Major 1. The authors want to mention that the interaction between pERK-IR and D2 receptor expression in Vc neurons is involved in the orofacial neuropathic pain mechanism. To clarify this question, double immunostaining of CGRP and D2 receptors should be conducted in each group of animals. 2. Furthermore, did D2 receptor immunoreactivity express in neurons or non-neuronal cells? The authors need to show the double immunohistochemistry of pERK and NeuN, as well as the D2 receptor and NeuN. 3. The authors need to test if CGRP injection into TG causes mechanical hypersensitivity in naïve rats. 4. CGRP may be released from central terminals of CGRP-IR cells in Vc and act on D2 receptor-IR cells. If this is so, the authors need to show the interaction between CGRP-IR cells and D2 receptor-expressing cells. 5. Does intrathecal administration of CGRP or CGRP Ab cause D2 receptor expression or drown regulation in Vc in ION-CCI rats? The authors need to conduct this experiment. 6. Since the authors mentioned a lot about the involvement of satellite glial cells in orofacial neuropathic pain in the discussion section, the authors need to show the immunohistochemistry data of satellite cell activation in TG following ION-CCI. Minor 1. The authors addressed the head-withdrawal threshold (HWT) in each group of animals, sham, ION-CCI, ION-CCI+vehile injection into trigeminal ganglion (TG), ION-CCI+CGRP injection into TG, ION-CCI+IgG injection into TG and ION-CCI+CGRP antibody injection into TG. It’s better to show the time course change in HWT. 2. High-magnification photomicrographs should be addressed in Fig. 1 B and Fig. 4A. 3. Some large-sized TG cells look CGRP-IR. It is necessary to analyze the cell size of CGRP-IR cells in ION-CCI tars. 4. The photomicrographs in Fig.4A are pretty low quality. Need to show higher quality photomicrographs in Fig. 4A. 5. The discussion section is awkwardly addressed in the current paper. The discussion section should be totally rewritten. Reviewer #2: The authors found an interaction between CGRP and D2R in the Vc after IONI. TG administration of anti-CGRP antibody decreased CGRP and D2R expression in the Vc. However, the authors need to address the following issues to strengthen the manuscript. The authors noted that the fluorescence intensity correlates with the amount of CGRP and D2R, using Ref. It is quite difficult to conclude from fluorescence alone without measuring protein levels by Western blot analysis. The authors must show Western blot data. Pentobarbital cannot be used for anesthesia due to the welfare of the animals. Use the appropriate anesthetic. Which cells in Vc express D2R? If CGRP projected to the Vc regulates D2R expression, then D2R and pERK are likely expressed in the same cells. Double staining of D2R and pERK should be done. Describe the cellular mechanisms by which CGRP increases D2R expression. If CGRP is altering D2R expression through changes in activity in the upper brain, there is no proof of this, and further experiments should be done. Reviewer #3: PONE-D-24-44553 In the manuscript entitled “Suppression of mechanical hypersensitivity and change in the expression of the dopamine D2 receptor by administration of anti-CGRP antibody into the trigeminal ganglion in trigeminal neuropathic pain model rats” the Authors aimed to investigate the relationship between CGRP and the dopaminergic nervous system in neuropathic pain following anti-CGRP Ab treatment in the trigeminal ganglion. The Authors should clearly define in the introduction section the differences from the previous study (DOI: 10.1016/j.bbrc.2022.05.015) in which they already investigated the relationship between the CGRP and dopaminergic pathway. Indeed it should be highlighted the novelty of the present study together with the aim of the study. The Authors stated: “The current study aims to elucidate the relationship between CGRP and the dopaminergic nervous system in neuropathic pain further.”; to achieve this purpose they only looked at the Dopamine D2 receptor immunoreactivity in the Vc following an anti-CGRP Ab treatment, which was already investigated in a previous paper from the same Authors (doi: 10.1016/j.bbrc.2022.05.015). The only difference was the site of anti-CGRP Ab administration (cerebroventricular vs TG), but the result is the same: dopamine D2 receptor immunostaining in the Vc decreased after treatment with an anti-CGRP antibody. In the present form this study does not seem to provide additional information to the field. Beside the abovementioned issue I have some comments about this manuscript, which is however well written. 1. To specify in the abstract that were used male rats. 2. To better explain when the animals were sacrificed, e.g. how many days or hours from the last administration, etc.. A schematic representation would be helpful (at least as supplementary material). 3. Even if references of previous papers from the same Authors (in which they used the same CGRP antibody) are provided it is not clear to me how did they define the dose of an antibody designed to be used in IHC to be injected in the rats. Are there any toxicological test related to its use in vivo? 4. To specify that the IHC staining and analysis were performed ipsilateral to the ION-CCI 5. Line 192: “As reported previously, pERK-IR cells were primarily found in the superficial layers of the Vc”, please to add references. 6. To add the sample size calculation. Which was the primary outcome? 7. To add which test was used for testing data normality. 8. To include in the figure legends the statistical test used and N. 9. Line 305: “Our findings also suggest an involvement of CGRP and CGRP receptor in the TG on trigeminal neuropathic pain”. In which way the data in this study outline an involvement of CGRP receptor? No investigation on them was achieved. 10. The discussion is redundant and speculative, since the finding of the present study do not provide further information. Reviewer #4: This is a well-designed and presented study investigating the mechanisms of trigeminal neuropathic pain. In particular the role of CGRP and anti-CGRP antibody in trigeminal neuropathic pain model in rats. The appropriate statistical methods were used and the data is presented clearly. The results support the findings. Minor comment: Could you please use a better resolution images for the figures? it would make viewing of the results much easier. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Suppression of mechanical hypersensitivity and change in the expression of the dopamine D2 receptor by administration of anti-CGRP antibody into the trigeminal ganglion in trigeminal neuropathic pain model rats PONE-D-24-44553R1 Dear Dr. Maegawa, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: No Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #4: (No Response) Reviewer #5: Introduction 1. Clear Hypothesis and Objectives: o Issue: The introduction lacks a clear statement of the hypothesis and objectives. o Suggestion: Clearly state the hypothesis and objectives at the beginning to help readers understand the purpose and direction of the research. 2. Redundancy: o Issue: There is redundant information regarding the role of CGRP and its receptors. o Suggestion: Consolidate this information to make the text more concise and focused. Methods 3. Detailed Descriptions: o Issue: Some methodological details are missing or insufficiently described. � Example: The exact coordinates for the stereotaxic apparatus are not specified. � Example: The type of dental acrylic used for fixing the cannula is not mentioned. � Example: The method of drug administration into the TG and the intracisternal space could be described in more detail to ensure replicability. o Suggestion: Provide these details to ensure that other researchers can replicate the study accurately. 4. Consistency in Terminology and Units: o Issue: Inconsistencies in the use of terminology and units. � Example: Ensure that all measurements are in the same units (e.g., grams for weight, microliters for volumes). o Suggestion: Maintain consistency in terminology and units throughout the section. 5. Ethical Considerations: o Issue: Brief description of measures taken to minimize animal suffering is missing. o Suggestion: Include a brief description of any measures taken to minimize animal suffering. Statistical Analysis 6. Clear Description of Statistical Methods: o Issue: The statistical methods are not described in sufficient detail. � Example: The software or tools used for statistical analysis are not mentioned. � Example: The rationale for choosing specific statistical tests is not explained. o Suggestion: Clearly describe the statistical methods used, including any software or tools, and explain the rationale for choosing specific tests. Results 7. Data Presentation: o Issue: The data presentation could be clearer and more concise. � Example: The results could be summarized in a more straightforward manner. � Example: The use of figures and tables could be optimized to illustrate key findings. o Suggestion: Summarize the results in a more straightforward manner and optimize the use of figures and tables. 8. Interpretation of Results: o Issue: The results are not sufficiently discussed in relation to the hypothesis and objectives. o Suggestion: Provide a more thorough interpretation of the findings, linking them back to the hypothesis and objectives. 9. Linking Results to Introduction: o Issue: The results should be more clearly linked to the introduction. o Suggestion: Ensure that the flow from the background information to the experimental design and findings is seamless. Discussion 10. Comprehensive Discussion: o Issue: The discussion section should comprehensively interpret the results, compare them with existing literature, and discuss the broader implications of the findings. o Suggestion: Expand the discussion to include comparisons with existing literature and broader implications. 11. Future Directions: o Issue: Potential future research directions are not clearly outlined. o Suggestion: Clearly outline potential future research directions based on the findings to help understand the broader impact and next steps for the research. Grammar and Syntax 12. Proofreading: o Issue: There are grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. o Suggestion: Proofread for grammatical errors and awkward phrasing to maintain a professional tone and ensure that the text is polished. Reviewer #6: Although I was not a reviewer of the first edition, I have reviewed the changes by the authors, and they have been adequately addressed. I think this paper brings new knowledge over intrathecal administration of an antibody, #1 it addresses differences between peripheral and central mechanism #2 antibodies does not generally cross the BBB, hence therapeutically in is interesting that the antibodies work peripherally. Regarding western blots of CGRP, this can be very difficult, due to the small size of CGRP so this is also recognized as a general problem. Injection of an antibody in the TG could interfere with immunohistochemistry, nevertheless this study showed similar effects in figure 6, (Reducha PV, Bömers JP, Edvinsson L, Haanes KA. Rodent behavior following a dural inflammation model with anti-CGRP migraine medication treatment. Front Neurol. 2023 Feb 23;14:1082176. doi: 10.3389/fneur.2023.1082176). Further, if there is a second round of revision, I would consider including that there are therapeutical CGRP-antibodies available that are used to treat migraine. You are not correct that no commercial antibodies are available for CLR, for example there is this one: https://www.alomone.com/p/anti-crlr-calcrl-extracellular-antibody/ACR-060 . But, unlike the antibodies for CGRP in IHC, which work great, the antibodies for the CGRP receptors are generally not very good, for example see here: Hendrikse ER, Rees TA, Tasma Z, Garelja ML, Siow A, Harris PWR, Pawlak JB, Caron KM, Blakeney ES, Russo AF, Sowers LP, Lutz TA, Le Foll C, Walker CS, Hay DL. Characterization of Antibodies against Receptor Activity-Modifying Protein 1 (RAMP1): A Cautionary Tale. Int J Mol Sci. 2022 Dec 16;23(24):16035. doi: 10.3390/ijms232416035. So I deem the approach in the current paper satisfactory. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: Yes: Randolph Jeffrey Kwaw Reviewer #6: No **********
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