Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 29, 2025 |
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The study compares the accuracy of Apple Watch VO₂ max predictions to indirect calorimetry, in order to address a crucial problem in wearable health technologies. The topic is extremely pertinent in light of the growing use of consumer wearable technology for health monitoring. The backdrop is organized effectively, highlighting the significance of VO₂ max as a health indicator and recognizing the shortcomings of the available evaluation techniques. The testing procedure, exclusion criteria, and participant recruiting are all covered in depth in the methodology's extensive documentation. But there are a few issues: - The sample size (n=30, of which 28 were analyzed) is too small to extrapolate results. - The study's relevance to populations with lower fitness levels may be limited because it mostly involves people with strong cardiorespiratory fitness. - There is no explicit explanation in the study as to why particular Apple Watch models were chosen over others or whether hardware variations affected the findings. The statistical approach is relative good, employing Bland-Altman analysis, mean absolute percentage error (MAPE), and mean absolute error (MAE) to assess agreement. However, the study could have benefited from additional analysis: - A regression model to explore factors influencing the discrepancies. - Subgroup analysis to determine whether the accuracy of estimates varies by demographic factors (e.g., age, sex, fitness level). The authors appropriately cite relevant literature, including a meta-analysis on wearable-derived VO₂ max estimates. They also highlight the proprietary nature of Apple’s prediction algorithm as a limitation, a crucial consideration in wearable validation research. The study suggests that Apple Watch could serve as an alternative to traditional submaximal exercise testing but requires further refinement. However, the discussion could be improved by: - Addressing whether firmware updates might influence VO₂ max accuracy over time. - Providing a clearer stance on whether Apple Watch is suitable for specific use cases (e.g., general fitness tracking vs. clinical decision-making). While the study contributes valuable insights, its limitations—small sample size, fitness level bias, and high variability in agreement—raise concerns about its broader applicability. With above suggestions, the paper would be more robust and suitable for publication. Reviewer #2: I would like to applaud the authors on this work, it is important to scrutinize the quality of data coming out of "consumer devices" and we need more research focus on this topic. I only have a few suggestions for the authors, some I would consider "major" and would need to be addressed for publication and some I would consider optional. Overall, I think the manuscript can be improved with minimal effort and will be suitable for publication. Major suggestions: (1) Fix your figures. I see no purpose for Fig 1 as it stands, the data from it is actually in Fig 2 and the graphics are neither discussed nor referenced. Fig 2 is also not referenced anywhere in the manuscript. And please add some captions. The figures are probably the weakest part of this manuscript. (2) Bring some data / discussion into the manuscript around the repeatability and/or within-subject variance of the gold standard test. It would have been great if the authors collected more than 1 VO2 MAX estimate / subject to be able to derive this from their own data, however, I would be happy with just reference values from published literature. And then the authors should compare the Apple Watch bias / precision / accuracy to the variance of the gold standard test. For example, I would really want to know: is 6 mL/kg/min difference within 1,2,3 SDs of the gold standard test? (3) Include all key parameters that Apple uses in their algo. For example, "sex" and "height" are missing on page 4, line 84 and "sex" is missing on page 6, line 140. (4) Page 7, in the "Outcomes" section of the Methods, provide a reference to the Bland and Altman work, for example: Altman DG, Bland JM. Measurement in medicine: the analysis of method comparison studies. Statistician. 1983;32:307–17. 10.2307/2987937 or Bland JM, Altman DG. Statistical methods for assessing agreement between two methods of clinical measurement. Int J Nurs Stud. 2010;47:931–6. 10.1016/j.ijnurstu.2009.10.001 Minor suggestions: (1) Include some data from other submaximal exercise tests (mentioned on page 3, second paragraph) and discuss how other tests compare to the Apple Watch estimate. (2) Calculate not only the bias difference across testing methods but also the precision and create BA plots for those too. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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| Revision 1 |
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Dear Dr. Lambe, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The revised manuscript presents a well-structured and thorough validation study on the accuracy of Apple Watch VO₂ max estimates compared to the gold-standard method of indirect calorimetry. The authors have effectively addressed the concerns raised in the initial review by improving methodological transparency, incorporating additional statistical analyses, and expanding the discussion to provide better context for their findings. The inclusion of a post-hoc power analysis strengthens the study’s credibility, confirming that the sample size of 28 participants was statistically sufficient to detect meaningful differences between Apple Watch and indirect calorimetry. Additionally, the authors conducted regression analyses to assess the influence of age and sex on measurement discrepancies, although no significant associations were found. These additions enhance the depth of the study and demonstrate a rigorous approach to validation. A major improvement in the revised version is the expanded discussion, which now situates Apple Watch’s performance within the broader context of wearable technology and traditional submaximal exercise tests. The authors acknowledge the proprietary nature of Apple’s algorithm and how software updates may influence accuracy over time. Furthermore, they compare the observed error margins to those of conventional submaximal VO₂ max prediction methods, reinforcing the notion that Apple Watch may be more suitable for general fitness tracking than for clinical decision-making. The discussion also now includes a reference to the inherent variability of indirect calorimetry (~2.58 mL/kg/min), providing a useful benchmark for interpreting the Apple Watch’s underestimation of VO₂ max by 6.07 mL/kg/min. Despite these strengths, some limitations remain. The sample is still skewed towards individuals with high cardiorespiratory fitness, which restricts the generalizability of findings to less fit or clinical populations. Although the authors acknowledge this in the discussion, future studies should aim for a more diverse participant pool. Another limitation is the uncontrolled nature of the Apple Watch data collection process, as participants generated VO₂ max estimates independently over several days without standardized exercise conditions. While this enhances ecological validity, it introduces external variables that may have influenced accuracy. Additionally, only one Apple Watch measurement was collected per participant, preventing an analysis of intra-subject variability, which would have strengthened reliability conclusions. Overall, the manuscript is significantly improved and provides valuable insights into the accuracy of Apple Watch VO₂ max estimates. The study is timely and well-conducted, contributing to the growing field of wearable health technology validation. However, to further refine the manuscript, the authors should explicitly emphasize the study’s limited generalizability and acknowledge the need for future research incorporating multiple Apple Watch estimates per participant. With these minor refinements, the manuscript is suitable for publication. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Jordan Brayanov ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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| Revision 2 |
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Investigating the accuracy of Apple Watch VO2 max measurements: A validation study PONE-D-25-04283R2 Dear Dr. Lambe, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Emiliano Cè, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: In the revised paper, the authors have covered all the comments made by the reviewer and therefore, in my opinion, the paper can be considered for publication. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No ********** |
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