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PONE-D-24-54766New technology for an ancient fish: A lamprey life cycle modeling tool with an R Shiny applicationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gomes, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 14 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The model, named as lamprey life cycle model (LLCM), was based on a simulation-based framework over 100 years. The default parameter values of lamprey life cycles were derived from references contains empirical data or based on assumptions. Then, the authors conducted a global sensitivity analysis (GSA) and Random Forest analysis to evaluate the influence of individual life stage parameters on lamprey population size and identify critical knowledge gaps. Additionally, they analyzed five management scenarios to illustrate potential management applications, including the addition of an upstream barrier, adult translocations, and hatchery releases. Overall, this manuscript developed the lamprey life cycle model to support conservation and control efforts for lamprey species. It is a heuristic tool for generating hypotheses and includes custom R functions, a Shiny application, and underlying code for future use and adaptation. However, there is a need to tone down some claims that are not fully supported by the data presented. (1) Environmental variables such as temperature and density can influence fish sex determination. Study in 2017 (https://doi.org/10.1098/rspb.2017.0262) suggested that density and nutrition can affect the sex ratio in sea lampreys. Therefore, the default value of sex ratio parameters maybe adjusted, environmental factors need to be considered. Additionally, whether user-defined parameters and default values can be adjusted based on observed field data from other lamprey species, especially those were not defined in Pacific lamprey. (2) The author suggests that the parameters of LLCM can be adjusted with field data, ecological theory, expert opinion, and sensitivity analysis, which indicated that the model was highly adaptable in the face of uncertainty and had potential value in the conservation and management of lamprey species. Although the simulation results provide useful guidance for selecting management strategies, how can the model to be adjusted using new empirical data to improve its application and decision-support capabilities in the future. (3) What is the reason for the differed results of GSA and GSA forest analyses? The results were differences between broad and realistic parameter sampling schemes, but the reasons behind the shifts in parameter sensitivity (such as why age-7 larval survival becomes more important?) are not discussed. Briefly explain or hypothesize why certain parameters gain or lose influence between two analyses. (4) In management cenario sensitivity results, why do they select five scenarios? Although the author presented that barriers reduce spawning populations and translocations restore them, the implications for management aren't deeply discussed. For instance, how feasible are the interventions? A brief discussion of the practical challenges or advantages of implementing scenarios like translocations and hatchery supplementation. (5) Can LLCM be applied to the life cycle analysis of other lamprey species, such as the Japanese lamprey or other marine species? (6) Is there any research data on the population abundance of Pacific lamprey, and has this data been incorporated into the model? (7) The reference format is inconsistent, such as in lines 866-867 and lines 874-876. Reviewer #2: Overall comments A well written paper describing a useful modeling tool. Two general comments and a few line-by-line edits The GSA analysis – a plain language description of why this analysis was done would prepare the reader for considering the implications in the discussion. The MSE response variable throws me off as the response of interest for a sensitivity analysis. More detail on what this variable is comparing would be helpful. With a sensitivity analysis, I think of a measure of how much the response variable of interest changes (in this case the size of the spawner population) as we vary a parameter. I have a hard time placing your analysis in this conceptual framework. Not to say that it needs to be, but currently this section is hard for me to follow (both the methods and the rationale for why it is important). Applications to Great Lakes sea lamprey control – this is mentioned in the first sentence of the discussion and in the conclusion, but the idea does not get developed at all in the text. If this is an important part of this work, the idea should be developed more in the text. An example of how it could be used or description of the management need that could be addressed would be helpful here. Similarities and differences to other DSTs that have been used to model sea lamprey dynamics in the Great Lakes would also be relevant to this discussion. As a starting point, Jones et al. (2009) and subsequent applications of this model would be relevant to discuss. Jones, M.L., Irwin, B.J., Hansen, G.J.A., Dawson, H.A., Treble, A.J., Liu, W., Dai, W., Bence, J.R., 2009. An Operating Model for the Integrated Pest Management of Great Lakes Sea Lampreys. TOFISHSJ 2, 59–73. https://doi.org/10.2174/1874401X00902010059 Line by line comments Figure 2 Caption. Between and within year descriptions – from the model description, Line 330 – burn in of 50 years in Fig. 3, doesn’t match description in text (few years) Figure 3 Captions- I find the last sentence of the caption confusing/don’t follow the rationale. In cases where carrying capacity is based on data or even expert opinion for a particular stream, seems like the number of spawners is relevant model output. Lines 494 – mean squared error response – what is being compared to what here? I usually think of using MSE to compare an estimated value to a known value. I get lost in the description of how it is applied here, I am not familiar with using MSE as a metric to describe a sensitivity analysis. Seems like a crucial concept to understand the significance of the whole GSA section and it gets lost on me. Some added plain language text on the rationale for the methods and why the analysis was done would be helpful. Lines 612 – modeling local populations also become important when modeling the combined outcome form multiple stream-specific conditions/management actions. This allows for more realistic simulations. Lines 697 –Is the point here that there will tend to be considerable uncertainty in life history parameters, particularly carrying capacity terms, so one shouldn’t put much weight on the absolute numbers of spawners as this is an equilibrium-type model (gets spun up with a burn-in period, rather than initialized at a specific value)? This could be stated more plainly. Also, if this is the case, why should we consider comparisons among management scenarios (relative number of spawners) as reliable but absolute numbers as unreliable? Digging into this question a bit more would help the reader here. Lines 730 – an example of how it could help control efforts in the Great Lakes would be useful. This is brought up in the first line of the discussion as well, but never gets fleshed out with any detail. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . 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