Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 28, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-48500Prevalence of post-intensive care syndrome among intensive care unit-survivors and its association with intensive care unit length of stay: Systematic review and meta-analysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ayenew, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Dear Authors kindly address all the comments given by the reviewers and the academic editor Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 18 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: PICS systematic review Dear Authors thank you for submitting an interesting article, I have a few suggestions Comment 1 Line 78 – it will be useful for the readers if the incidence of actual percentages of the various types of PICS syndrome, instead of mentioning that PICS is highly prevelant. Comment 2 The table 2 contains z score and P > z, it will be easier to understand these scores if the authors could add the scores in the explanation of the statistical analysis in the methods section. Comment 3 Kindly explain the funnel plots and forest plots with legends under the plots, it will be easier for the readers to understand. [Note: HTML markup is below. 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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Post-intensive Care Syndrome (PICS) is an important but very underreported entity. It is essential to diagnose and treat PICS to reduce the long-term effects on the individuals. It is a well-written manuscript in standard English. Data supports the conclusions and the statistical analysis has been performed appropriately. Data and figures are available. As an intensivist, I recommend this manuscript to be published. Reviewer #2: I thank the respected editor and authors for the chance to review this interesting manuscript. The authors have aimed to evaluate the prevalence of post intensive care syndrome (PICS) among ICU survivors. The study is well conducted and I very much enjoyed reading the manuscript. I have no major comments. There are some minor points I would like to address: Abstract: Line 53, 55 and 56: Please add units to prevalence measurements (percentage). Line 55. I suggest authors briefly mention the three domains of PICS. E.g.: “Among the three domains of PICS (physical, cognitive and mental domains), the highest prevalence score was observed in …” Line 58. The odds ratio has been mentioned two times. Keywords: Please fix the last keyword as it seems to be a typo (LCU length of stay) Introduction: Line 69. “not particularly not favorable” is a bit vague. Please use better wording. The abbreviation for PICS is introduced in line 70. Please refrain from using the full form throughout the manuscript (for example, beginning of lines 72, 78 and 82 reintroduce the abbreviation). Lines 91-beginning of 94 are basically repeating the previous 2-3 paragraphs. Please remove these sentences or replace with other information authors deem important. Line 90. Authors could mention a few of the studies for prevalence. For instance, lines 246-247 could also be used in the introduction. Given that authors have provided results for each domain of intensive care syndrome, I recommend that they briefly mention intensive care syndrome encompasses various domains and introduce these domains in the introduction. Furthermore, as studies have employed diverse methods and measures, especially for the mental domain, authors could more clearly define each domain (and what they include) in the methods section. Methods: Line 108. Did authors mean CINAHL (Cumulative Index to Nursing and Allied Health Literature) database? Either way, please also write the full name of the database. Line 120. On the other hand could be removed. Results: Line 162. Currently the quality evaluation is only mentioned here. The results section could contain a paragraph reporting the quality evaluation and why some studies have missed a few points (mostly in representativeness and ascertainment subdomains). Please more clearly define “non-covid”. According to line 172, which says “Nine of the total 19 articles were conducted exclusively among COVID-19 patients.” It is not clear whether the other 10 articles were conducted on a mixed population or exclusively on patients without covid (primarily because in table 1, there are studies done after covid which have been marked as non-covid in type of case column). Table 1. The articles could be arranged in alphabetical order for better use of the table. Same goes for figures 2 and 3. Table 1 could also greatly benefit from a presentation of disease severity in each included study. If most studies have reported scores such as APACHE for their patient population, this could be added in a column labeled “disease severity”. I do understand that studies have provided limited information and gathering such data might not be possible. This comment is merely a suggestion; its implementation is at the discretion of the respected author. Some studies (namely Alejandro 2024, Friberg 2023, and Weidman 2022) have reported extremely varying prevalence compared to other studies. I suggest that, if possible, authors briefly explore why they judge such extreme differences exist. (such as varying patient population, utilized treatment methods, and so on) Lines 186 and 190 do not match table 2, probably due to rounding, please address this. Line 191. I2 statistics for studies conducted before COVID-19 is mentioned as 13.94 in the text and 98.47 in table 2. Please review these results. Line 231. The cumulative number of patients (sample size) for these three studies could also be noted in the manuscript text. Publication bias could be moved to the end of the results section (after results for length of stay). In addition, please write the exact p value instead of p > 0.05 (Line 220). Figure and table titles have “2024” in the end. Remove these dates if they are unnecessary. Discussion: Line 291. Typo. IUC. Line 305. I suggest that authors mention that analysis was limited by the number of included articles. Conclusion: Line 328, 329. Considering that only three articles were included in this analysis, I suggest authors do not use such concrete wording. (e,g: significant association could be changed to possible association) Line 331. “Future research should focus…”: Authors could mention the need for more studies evaluating the relation between ICU length of stay and PICS development. Additional factors such as age, gender, length of post-ICU hospital stay could also be mentioned as possible future research avenues. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). 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Prevalence of post-intensive care syndrome among intensive care unit-survivors and its association with intensive care unit length of stay: Systematic review and meta-analysis PONE-D-24-48500R1 Dear Dr. Ayenew, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ramya Iyadurai Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Dear Authors Thank you for addressing all the reviewers comments. Reviewers' comments: |
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