Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 27, 2024 |
|---|
|
PONE-D-24-06893Outpatient care changes and associated mortality among Veterans with heart failure during the COVID-19 pandemicPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewer's comments may be found at the end of this email. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 05 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Pracheth Raghuveer, MD, DNB Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: 1. When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. Thank you for stating the following financial disclosure: "Department of Veterans Affairs, HSRD funding IRP 20-003". Please state what role the funders took in the study. If the funders had no role, please state: "The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript." If this statement is not correct you must amend it as needed. Please include this amended Role of Funder statement in your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. 3. Thank you for stating the following in the Competing Interests section: "Dr. Wu and Emily Corneau have no conflicts to declare. Dr. Vijayakumar is supported by NHLBI T32 postdoctoral training grant T32HL094201and a research grant from the Amyloidosis Foundation. Dr. Erqou is supported by the Department of Veterans Affairs, VISN-1 Career Development Award. Dr. Kokkirala owns shares in TDOC and AMWL telehealth stocks. There are no relationships with industry." Please confirm that this does not alter your adherence to all PLOS ONE policies on sharing data and materials, by including the following statement: "This does not alter our adherence to PLOS ONE policies on sharing data and materials.” (as detailed online in our guide for authors http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/competing-interests). If there are restrictions on sharing of data and/or materials, please state these. Please note that we cannot proceed with consideration of your article until this information has been declared. Please include your updated Competing Interests statement in your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. 4. Please include your full ethics statement in the ‘Methods’ section of your manuscript file. In your statement, please include the full name of the IRB or ethics committee who approved or waived your study, as well as whether or not you obtained informed written or verbal consent. If consent was waived for your study, please include this information in your statement as well. 5. Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This national study represents outcome data for approximately 500,000 (predominantly self-identified) male patients diagnosed with Heart Failure (HF) within the Veterans Health Adm (VHA). The study compares mortality outcomes for two different "pre-COVID" time periods versus the Febr 1, 2020 to Jan 31, 2021 "Covid period." The main exposure variable is type of outpatient visit (none; in-person; video; or phone). The study controls for a broad set of confounders/co-variates and applies advanced statistics incl General Estimation Equation, in the analysis. For a subset, COX regression modeling is used, as well as Kaplan Meier Survival Analysis. The main study findings are: Decreased outpatient visits for HF during Covid vs pre-Covid; Highest risk-adjusted mortality rate among the "non-visit" group followed by phone visits; video consultation, and lowest for those with at least one outpatient, in-person visit. The study also explores pharma adherence (possession) as a possible mediator between visit type and mortality outcomes. The authors recognize several study limitations, including observational nature. They recommend possible next steps to strengthen study reliability including randomized clinical trials. The authors also discuss possible clinical implications. Specific Comments: Table 1. In the legend, provide more detailed info re stat applied to determine, for example, stat differences across groups in pulmonary Vascular Disease. Legend only states P <.... Table 2. Excellent summary of the COX regression modeling. Figure 1. Difficult to delineate which line represents Total Outpatient Visits Febr/2020-ff. Figure 2. Discuss possible reasons that the apparent increase in mortality during Covid did not occur until November and forward of 2020. Expand discussions re distribution of established risk factors, e g BNP, across visit groups and possible impact on survival, in addition to pharma adherence. The Cox modeling adjusts for a large set of risk factors/co-variates, but there is no discussion as to their possible pathophysiological role of such risk factors/covariates in mediating/moderating the mortality outcome. It's especially interesting that there are no stat sign differences in biomarkers (although in dx) across visit groups in Table 1. Several of these biomarkers are closely related to HF outcomes, e.g., BNP. Expand discussion re implication of decreased overall outpatient visits (although virtual (video and phone) visits have increase) during Covid. Is this a trend that holds true still? I don't request additional analysis. However, the authors mention the need for further studies of the optimal mix of in-person vs virtual visits. There is no data presented, as far as this reviewer can find, that outcomes are better than pre-Covid for any of the three visit types. When comparing mortality rates over time, how does rate look when only adjusting for pre vs peri Covid periods? Did VHA have sufficient virtual (video and phone) visits pre-Covid to allow for meaningful analysis. Expand discussions as to the drivers of more virtual visits during Covid. Are there any indications that the most (multi) sick patients, and withe the worst LVEF were more likely to avoid in-person healthcare visits? Table 1 does not show significant differences across several of the categories, e.g., urban vs rural that the authors discuss the VHA has addressed existing digital divide. Rather than merely listing the various programs the VHA has launched to address socioeconomic/racial and geographic digital divide, the authors should recognize the challenges with these programs to actually impact health-related divide. Reviewer #2: I have provided my comments as an attachment to the authors as well. Thank you for the opportunity to review this paper. Understanding how the shift to telehealth during COVID in the VA affected mortality is very important, particularly in the context of potential policy changes being debated at CMS. I have some comments for the authors below. Major comments: 1. Please modify odds ratios to be marginal effects. See a recent publication Norton et al. on the challenges with interpreting odds ratios outside of case-control studies: https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/10.1111/1475-6773.14337 2. The authors write that “the main exposure was outpatient visit day…” I’m not sure what this means. Could the authors elaborate on how the exposure was calculated? Is it a binary variable indicator whether the patient had an outpatient visit at any time in the outcome period? Is it the number of visits? What level of observation is used here? 3. I have some concerns about the statistical analysis that the authors conducted a. It would be helpful to see an estimating equation. What is the outcome? What is on the right-hand side? It looks like the authors used both a Cox regression and a GEE? What is the reason for estimating both? Why would time to event be a useful measure here? b. It looks like the authors included VA health care use for one year from the baseline. Can the authors explain a little more what this looked like? Are they summing all visits before the pandemic period? A little clarification would be helpful. I’m hoping to verify that the authors did not include utilization during the pandemic period. c. How was the variable for positive COVID-19 test coded? Was that a binary indicator? Additionally, where was this information obtained? From VHA CDW? d. The authors write that they tested for effect modification by COVID-19 status and several other variables by fitting interaction terms. Because there are issues with interaction terms in non-linear models, these are difficult to interpret. I suggest the authors estimate these as stratified models instead. 4. I’m glad to see that the authors ran their models in 2018 and 2019 as well. Those results, in the appendix now, should be discussed somewhat in the context of their findings. The fact that there is a mortality difference in 2020 between in-person and other visit types seems consistent with the pattern in 2018 and 2019. Are there possibilities for patient selection? For instance, are high-need patients in rural areas with less appointment availability more likely to use telehealth or not receive a visit to begin with? Reviewer #3: The authors have produced an analysis of the association of visit modality and HF mortality prior to and during the COVID-19 pandemic. There are several highly commendable aspects of this manuscript, including the comprehensive detailing of the methods and a clear and interesting discussion. The inclusion of the medication possession ratio analysis to begin to explore one possible mechanism is a strength. I do have some suggestions for improvement: Major: My biggest concern is regarding the study design and the conclusions it allows one to draw; there are likely a number of unobservable confounders when comparing individuals who had no in-person or no video-based care over the exposure period to those who did, including frailty, beliefs about healthcare/the pandemic, and general engagement in care (particularly when comparing to those with no follow-up). This is noted in the limitations, but I worry that it significantly limits interpretation of these findings. In general, while the authors do this to some extent, it is important to avoid drawing causal conclusions from these results. What do you make of the fact that the same pattern of lower mortality risk with in-person and video-only visits compared to those with no outpatient visits was also observed in the pre-pandemic period (2018 and 2019)? A bit more discussion/interpretation of these findings would be helpful. Minor: It would be helpful to the reader in the abstract and conclusion to note that while there was an increase in virtual visits as stated, this was only partially compensatory (i.e., overall follow-up was decreased during the pandemic compared to pre-pandemic period). I may be misinterpreting, but for all the figures with visits per 100 Veterans, if the Y-axis is showing annual visit rates per 100 Veterans--wouldn't that mean that e.g., an annual rate of 80 visits per 100 Veterans = 0.8 annual visits, not 8? With regard to your statement that "the low (<5%) COVID-19 positivity rates in our study population suggest that COVID-19 infection may not have played an important role in the higher annual mortality rate seen in 2020"--given you are only capturing COVID-19 tests done in the VA system and the general difficulty of obtaining a test at that point in the pandemic, it seems likely that the actual rate of COVID-19 positivity was much higher than this (as you note in the limitations), which undermines your conclusion that disruption in outpatient care is what caused the increased mortality. Very minor, but in the following sentence, "Our results suggest that the disruption and change in outpatient care maybe related to the increase mortality in this vulnerable population", there should be a space between "may" and "be" and I believe it should say "increased" mortality with a "d". On p. 15, "sever" should be "severe". It would be helpful to understand why you defined 1/31/2020 as the end of the pre-pandemic period, as most lock-downs and disruptions in care began a bit later. The supplement states that "Telephone visits are not specified as cardiology/primary care"--in fact they are, but require accounting for both primary and secondary stop codes. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: Yes: Bengt B. Arnetz, M.D., PhD Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step.
|
| Revision 1 |
|
PONE-D-24-06893R1Outpatient care changes and associated mortality among Veterans with heart failure during the COVID-19 pandemicPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. 1) I'm not sure why the authors decided to remove the GEE estimates. I certainly didn't intend for that, instead, I would have removed the time-to-event modeling. I asked the authors initially why time-to-event would be an interesting outcome here, but they didn't respond to that question. I think the GEE answers the more useful question of the overall relationship with mortality rather than how much time passed before death. My suggestion is to remove the Cox Regression and Kaplan Meier curves, and focus on the results from the GEE with marginal effects. 2) The authors write that they performed interrupted time series analysis. It would be very helpful to see the interrupted time series figure (showing the slope change) to drive the point that they're making. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 21 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.These are the specific comments by the reviewers: Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Pracheth Raghuveer, MD, DNB Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have provided acceptable and valid comments to all of this reviewer's critique. The revised manuscript is written in a way that provides responses to all of my initial critiques. Reviewer #2: I appreciate the authors' responses to my comments. I have a few additional suggestions/comments. 1) I'm not sure why the authors decided to remove the GEE estimates. I certainly didn't intend for that, instead, I would have removed the time-to-event modeling. I asked the authors initially why time-to-event would be an interesting outcome here, but they didn't respond to that question. I think the GEE answers the more useful question of the overall relationship with mortality rather than how much time passed before death. My suggestion is to remove the Cox Regression and Kaplan Meier curves, and focus on the results from the GEE with marginal effects. 2) The authors write that they performed interrupted time series analysis. It would be very helpful to see the interrupted time series figure (showing the slope change) to drive the point that they're making. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: Yes: Bengt B. Arnetz Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
| Revision 2 |
|
PONE-D-24-06893R2Outpatient care changes and associated mortality among Veterans with heart failure during the COVID-19 pandemicPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 04 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Pracheth Raghuveer, MD, DNB Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have addressed most of my comments. One remaining comment: Please provide info in Abstract and in the Result section re p value (trend) when presenting the decreased likelihood for death in each of the three categories (1. at least one in-person visit. 2. Video only. 3. Telephone only) with ref categories no visits. OR and Conf Intervals are provided for each of the three categories. However, no stat data is provided across the three categories. It is stated that data will be shared upon reasonable request. I assume that satisfies the Journal's policy. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: Yes: Bengt B. Arnetz ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
| Revision 3 |
|
Outpatient care changes and associated mortality among Veterans with heart failure during the COVID-19 pandemic PONE-D-24-06893R3 Dear Dr. Wu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Pracheth Raghuveer, MD, DNB Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #5: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #4: it is a well written article . The study has a comprehensive dataset (509,511 patients) providing a detailed comparison of pre-pandemic and pandemic outpatient visits and mortality rates. Inclusion of historical cohorts (2018 & 2019) strengthens the findings by ensuring results are not exclusive to the COVID-19 period. The study design is well defined and statistical approach i s clear and well explained. However for areas of improvement, I have few comments: -Many sentences are long and complex, making it harder to follow. Suggest breaking down long paragraphs into smaller, more digestible sections. -Confounding factors like access to telehealth services (e.g., internet availability, digital literacy), differences in healthcare-seeking behavior among patient subgroups can also be considered. Overall it is a well done paper and I wish the team , Good luck! Reviewer #5: Abstract does not have clarity .It may be rewritten for better clarity .It is better to clarify that personal visit once in 6 months reduced mortality hazard by a percentage while video visits reduced the hazard by -- and telephone only visits reduced ---so much It is better to call video visists as vdeocalls rather than calling it as video and telephone . grooups could be in person visit, videocall visits and telephone only visits or no visits ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: No ********** |
| Formally Accepted |
|
PONE-D-24-06893R3 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wu, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Pracheth Raghuveer Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
Open letter on the publication of peer review reports
PLOS recognizes the benefits of transparency in the peer review process. Therefore, we enable the publication of all of the content of peer review and author responses alongside final, published articles. Reviewers remain anonymous, unless they choose to reveal their names.
We encourage other journals to join us in this initiative. We hope that our action inspires the community, including researchers, research funders, and research institutions, to recognize the benefits of published peer review reports for all parts of the research system.
Learn more at ASAPbio .