Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 28, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-37301Prevalent genetic alterations in pediatric thyroid carcinoma: insights from an Argentinean studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Preciado, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 22 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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This policy applies to all data except where public deposition would breach compliance with the protocol approved by your research ethics board. If you are unable to adhere to our open data policy, please kindly revise your statement to explain your reasoning and we will seek the editor's input on an exemption. Please be assured that, once you have provided your new statement, the assessment of your exemption will not hold up the peer review process. Additional Editor Comments: Despite the study is interesting, I and other invited reviewers feel it needs substantial revision prior considering it for publication. Moreover, the study overlooked many important findings in the field of pediatric thyroid cancer. Kindly look into the following articles in the field to include, PMID: 31289610; PMID: 30272236; PMID: 27824297; PMID: 26711586. In addition, consider carefully addressing all the reviewers' comments seen below. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). 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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Partly Rationale: - The methodology is generally sound with appropriate techniques - However, several limitations affect the strength of conclusions: * Small sample size without power calculation * Single-center design limiting generalizability * Lack of validation cohort * Limited statistical rigor * Overstatement of conclusions relative to data presented Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?No Rationale: - Basic statistical approaches only (chi-square, Fisher's exact, t-test) - No correction for multiple comparisons - Absence of multivariate analysis - No power calculation - Limited consideration of confounding variables The statistical methodology demonstrates significant limitations that require addressing. The authors rely solely on basic statistical approaches (chi-square, Fisher's exact, t-test) without accounting for multiple comparisons or conducting multivariate analyses. The absence of power calculations and limited consideration of confounding variables undermines the robustness of their findings. Statistical rigor could be improved by incorporating survival analyses for follow-up data and implementing appropriate corrections for multiple testing. 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings fully available?Partly FISH Controls and Quality Control Issues Missing Essential Controls: No demonstration of negative control samples No presentation of internal controls No validation of probe specificity No quality control metrics for FISH signals Technical Problems: Lines 417-439: The FISH methodology section doesn't mention control samples No images showing: Negative controls Internal controls Background signal levels Signal-to-noise ratios Critical Impact: Cannot validate specificity of FISH results Unable to assess false positive/negative rates Questions reliability of fusion detection Compromises reproducibility of findings 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?Yes Rationale: - Clear organization - Generally well-written - Minor typographical errors Typographical Errors Examples: Line 82: "Within the pediatric group the incidence of TC" Should be: "Within the pediatric group, the incidence of TC" Missing comma for proper clause separation Lines 88-89: "between 2000 and 2009[5]" Should be: "between 2000 and 2009 [5]" Missing space before citation Line 75-76: text formatting inconsistencies in spacing after periods - Some sections could be more concise Verbose Introduction Section: Original (Lines 78-81): "Although the thyroid gland is not the leading cancer site worldwide, thyroid cancer (TC) is the most common malignancy of the endocrine system, and its incidence has been steadily increasing over the past decade in all age groups" Could be: "Thyroid cancer (TC), the most common endocrine malignancy, shows increasing incidence across all age groups" Redundant Statements: Lines 19-20: "† Both authors contributed equally to this work † Both authors contributed equally to this work" Unnecessary repetition Wordy Methods Description: Lines 406-411: Could be more concise by combining technical details My final Thoughts While the manuscript presents valuable data on pediatric thyroid cancer in Argentina, substantial revisions are required before publication. The technical foundation is sound, but statistical analyses and data presentation require significant enhancement. With appropriate revisions addressing these concerns, this work could make a meaningful contribution to the field of pediatric thyroid cancer research. The manuscript presents a methodologically structured investigation of genetic alterations in pediatric thyroid carcinoma from an Argentinian cohort. While the technical approaches (IHC, FISH, Sanger sequencing, NGS) are appropriate and well-executed, the study's conclusions are partially compromised by several limitations. The sample size (57 cases) lacks power calculation justification, and the single-center design limits generalizability. Although the experimental procedures are rigorous with appropriate controls, the absence of a validation cohort and limited follow-up period weakens the strength of the proposed diagnostic algorithm. Recommendation The manuscript requires major revisions before publication. While it presents valuable data on pediatric thyroid cancer in Argentina, the statistical analysis and conclusions need substantial strengthening to meet PLOS ONE standards. Reviewer #2: This manuscript offers valuable insights into genetic alterations in pediatric thyroid carcinoma in Argentina and proposes a practical algorithm for diagnosis. While the study is commendable, there are a few recommendations to improve clarity, add depth to the analysis, and enhance visual presentation. Below are my suggestions to help refine the manuscript. 1. Comparison Between Pediatric and Adult PTC The manuscript touches on differences in molecular profiles between pediatric and adult PTC but doesn’t fully explore the clinical implications. It would be helpful to expand on why gene fusions like RET and ALK are more common in pediatric cases. These differences could stem from unique aspects of developmental biology or tumor pathogenesis. Additionally, elaborating on how these findings influence treatment approaches, such as the prioritization of fusion-targeted therapies, would add meaningful context. 2. Regional and Environmental Influences The study finds a lower frequency of RET fusions in this Argentinean cohort compared to global reports, but it doesn’t delve into potential reasons. Including a discussion on environmental factors, such as radiation exposure (if there are some previous studies), or regional genetic predispositions, could strengthen the analysis. By comparing these findings with international data (e.g., Table S2), the authors can emphasize the novelty of this study. 3. Molecular Algorithm The molecular algorithm proposed in this manuscript is practical and suitable for resource-limited settings, but it may have limitations. For instance, rare or complex genetic alterations might be missed due to its reliance on sequential IHC and FISH testing. Acknowledging this limitation and suggesting future validation in larger or more diverse cohorts would enhance the discussion. Highlighting its adaptability to various healthcare environments would also strengthen its applicability. 4. Algorithm Figure Quality The figure illustrating the molecular algorithm (Figure 3) could be improved for better clarity and presentation. Adding clear labels for each step, consistent color coding for different molecular testing methods, and arrows to guide the flow would make it more visually intuitive. Using a high-resolution image with detailed legends and annotations would further enhance its accessibility. Recommendation: Kindly revise the algorithm figure by including a detailed legend that explains each step and using distinct icons or symbols to differentiate methods like IHC, FISH, and NGS. 5. BRAF V600E Frequency The manuscript notes a lower frequency of BRAF V600E mutations in this cohort but doesn’t fully explain why. This could be linked to the younger age of the cohort, as this mutation is more prevalent in older populations. Expanding on this connection and discussing how it impacts early diagnosis and treatment strategies in pediatric PTC would add depth to the findings. 6. Language Improvements Some sentences in the manuscript are overly complex and could be simplified for better readability. Below are a few recommended revisions: Page 13, Line 254: Current: "In this study we sought to address the occurrence and frequency of genetic alterations..." Recommended: "This study aimed to investigate the frequency of genetic alterations and their associations with clinical and histopathological features." Page 14, Line 288-289: Current: "Overall, and also in line with previous reports, in our pediatric series gene fusions were more prevalent than SNVs" Recommended: "In line with previous studies, our findings indicate that gene fusions are more prevalent than SNVs in pediatric PTC cases." Page 15, Line 318: Current: "Since V600E antibody may give false negative results in a minor proportion of cases..." Recommended: "Given the potential for false-negative results with the V600E antibody in some cases." Page 15, Line 329: Current: "Although pediatric sporadic cases of PTC with two concomitant alterations have been reported...etc" Recommended: "While sporadic pediatric PTC cases with two concomitant genetic alterations have been documented." ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . 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Prevalent genetic alterations in pediatric thyroid carcinoma: insights from an Argentinean study PONE-D-24-37301R1 Dear Dr. Preciado, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Avaniyapuram Kannan Murugan, M.Phil., Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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