Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 2, 2025 |
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: In this manuscript, Ash and co-authors describe a mouse model which better recapitulates sporadic tau pathology in the context of pathological aging and Alzheimer’s disease (AD). They perform various morphometric analysis including dendritic complexity and spine analysis, as well as slice electrophysiology experiments in developmentally- and adult-born dentate gyrus neurons which receive inputs from the lateral entorhinal cortex overexpressing wild-type human 4R tau and GFP, or simply GFP. The experimental design is neat and targets precisely the neural circuit of interest, which the authors claim to better recapitulate early stages of AD pathology before the spread tau across other brain regions. Generally, the experimental design and data analysis including statistical analysis are robust and convincing. The manuscript is well written and generally clear. I have some concerns regarding the conclusions and interpretation of the results. Major concerns: 1) The authors found no change in cell density in layer 2 LEC between tau and GFP overexpression using DAPI as a marker. Can they comment on the reason why they used DAPI and not a specific neuronal marker and what the expectation is regarding cell vs neuronal survival in this context? 2) Throughout most of the manuscript the analysis includes sex as a factor in the statistical design for which I commend the authors as we know that there is a substantial difference in the prevalence e.g. of AD between women and men. However, it almost feels like they felt they have to do it rather than actually seriously consider the effect of sex. Information about the impact of sex/gender on tau pathology, aging, AD is missing in the introduction. Moreover, the significant effect of sex on dendritic morphology (Fig.4) is not at all mentioned in the Discussion in the context of the existing literature. No interpretation for molecular mechanism or expected outcomes for either the significant effect on dendritic complexity or lack of significant effect of sex (including main effects and interactions) on the other morphological or electrophysiological measurement. 3) Related to the sex stratified analysis in Fig.4, it is critical to point out that the N=29 and 22 males and 15 and 14 females which represents a substantial difference. Is it possible that the lack of difference between tau and control in females is simply due to lacking enough statistical power? Could the authors provide statistical evidence that that’s not the case and/or discuss the caveat of including twice as many males? The same concern would stand for all cases where there is such a big difference in N (e.g. Fig 5C and E). 4) Is it possible that the lack of significant difference in the LTP experiments (and also in other experiments) stems from inefficient transfection of tau? Can the authors provide some sort of correlation of transfected fibers (intensity or other measure) normalized to surface area/volume/number of L2 LEC cells and EPSC change? 5) The authors interpret the increase of the density of thin spines as well as the increased adult neurogenesis as compensatory neuroplasticity. This is a bit confusing to me, as it has been previously shown that neurogenesis in AD, for example, can be increased or decreased depending on the mouse mode. Furthermore, even though the authors didn’t observe significant changes TBS-induced LTP, between tau and GFP overexpression, the tau potentiation is if anything smaller. The authors should clarify/elaborate this in the Discussion. Minor concerns: 1) The authors should please refer to all panels of the figures specifically in the text. Not just Figure 3. 2) In some cases (e.g. for Fig.6), not all terms of the statistical model (main effects/interactions) are available in the Results. The authors should please provide them. 3) What statistical tests were used to decompose the interactions? Those should be provided where necessary. 4) The authors do not comment on how injection of tamoxifen itself affects basal neurogenesis, LTP and morphometrics in DG neurons. The experiments are designed such as both groups (control/GFP and tau overexpression both include tamoxifen), which makes the conclusions sound. However, the authors should include references from the literature, so it’s easier for the reader to interpret the data. 5) The statistical results in the result section referring to the data in Fig. 7 A-D are either wrong or misinterpreted. The authors should correct that “However, for both ABNs and DBNs, there were no statistically significant differences in EPSC size between hTau and GFP mice (Fig. 7A,C; ABNs: effect of stimulation intensity: T221=5.2, P<0.0001; effect of hTau: T14=0.01, P=0.99; effect of sex: T14=0.1, P=0.92; hTau x sex interaction: T14=0.05, P=0.96; ; hTau x stimulation intensity interaction: T221=0.7, P=0.48; hTau x sex x stimulation intensity interaction: T221=3.6, P=0.0004; hTau vs GFP P>0.5 for both males and females; DBNs: effect of stimulation intensity: T230=6.7, P<0.0001; effect of hTau: T13=0.92, P=0.37; effect of sex: T13=0.80, P=0.44; hTau x sex interaction: T13=0.7, P=0.49; hTau x stimulation intensity interaction: T230=3.0, P=0.003; hTau x sex x stimulation intensity interaction: T230=1.9, P=0.06).” hTau x stimulation intensity interaction: T230=3.0, P=0.003 is completely dismissed and hTau x sex x stimulation intensity interaction: T230=1.9, P=0.06 is similarly dismissed as a trend, whereas similar trend P=0.054 was previously highlighted (“While the hTau x sex interaction was not statistically significant (T24=-2.0, P=0.054), the average dendritic length was 17% lower in male hTau mice as compared to GFP controls, but female hTau mice were 7% higher” ) Reviewer #2: The authors developed a system to model the early-age tau pathology by expressing human tau specifically in LEC brain region. The major phenotype is that mature spines postsynaptically are reduced by hTau, although other aspects including electrophysiology are not changed. I would be intersted in whether the model mouse show cognitive deficits, while that should be beyond the scope of this study. Minor points: 1. The authors should cite the figures more specifically. For example, they should cite "Figure 4B" instead of "Figure 4", unless they want to refer the whole figure. It occurs for too many times. 2.In Figure 4C, they'd better add x-axis (e.g. distance) with length unit (micrometer). ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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A mouse model of early sporadic tau pathology induces neurogenic plasticity in the hippocampus PONE-D-25-18279R1 Dear Dr. Snyder, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication by editorial decision since a second reviewer did not send his opinion in a timely manner (apologies for this) and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Efthimios M. C. Skoulakis, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors have addressed the majority of my concerns. The manuscript now properly discusses the caveats of the experimental design and analyses. The authors have added a section in the discussion on sex differences in their findings and their interpretation in the context of the existing literature, as well as have introduced them properly in the introduction and abstract. The description of the statistical analysis is now clear and the reader can easily follow the experimental design and analysis to be able to draw conclusions from the presented data. The manuscript is valuable description of a new animal model that may capture some cell and circuit properties of early sporadic tau pathology in humans. Minor comments: 1) In the current version of the manuscript, the figure legend for figure 1 is missing 2) In the figure legend for figure 7, # is marked as P<0.05, I am assuming this is P<0.1? Please correct. 3) The following sentence in the newly added paragraph in the discussion doesn't seem to follow logically from the previous ones, please rewrite: "...In female humans, this might therefore translate into more dramatic or earlier-onset plasticity effects." ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No ********** |
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