Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 3, 2025 |
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thank you for the chance to review the paper. The only noticeable flaw is the limited number of patients in the urban setting. Other limitations have been stated in the limitations section. This paper can inspire many future researchers to investagate the topic further. Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript, which explore antecedents of social isolation and their impact on mental health among cancer survivors. This is a strong and well-executed paper. I recommend only minor revisions to further strengthen its conceptual clarity and interpretive depth. Bidirectionality of SIL and Mental Health: One central question concerns the relationship between social isolation and loneliness (SIL) and mental health. A complicating factor is the likely bidirectional relationship between these constructs. SIL may contribute to the development of mental health challenges, but it may also arise as a consequence of such conditions—for example, anhedonia and social withdrawal are hallmark symptoms of depression. I encourage the authors to briefly address this bidirectionality in the discussion section, even if only to note the limitations of causal inference in the current design. A similar consideration applies to variables related to negative perceptions of life, which may serve both as predisposing risk factors and as symptoms of depression Acknowledging this complexity would strengthen the interpretive nuance of the paper. Use of Theory and Modeling Approach: The application of theory and statistical modeling is logical, rigorous, and clearly explained. The incorporation of the Stress Process Model is a strength. As described, this model highlights the effects of cumulative stress over time. However, it was unclear to what extent the cumulative nature of stress exposure was captured in the analytic model. If not explicitly modeled, the authors may consider discussing how the model could inform future work or how the cumulative nature of stress might shape the interpretation of their findings. Reviewer #3: . The study addresses a relevant topic, focusing on a determinant of mental and physical health: social isolation in cancer survivors. It uses a nationally representative database (HINTS 6), allowing important generalizations to the US population. PLS-SEM modeling is suitable for examining complex and mediating relationships in contexts with multiple latent variables. The division between urban and rural areas introduces an important contextual dimension to the analysis, thereby expanding the understanding of geographic disparities in cancer care. Overall, this is a rigorous and pertinent study that contributes to the understanding of the factors associated with social isolation and its relationship with mental health among cancer survivors. However, the manuscript could benefit from some improvements, mainly in the detailing of certain information (such as the sample), in the discussion of the implications of the limitations in the results, and in including a section on the practical implications of the obtained results. 1. A more detailed description of the sample is missing, mainly in terms of sociodemographic and clinical variables. Although the study includes basic information, the authors should include a more complete table of sociodemographic and clinical characteristics (such as age, ethnicity/race, income, type of cancer, etc.). It may make sense to separate the descriptive statistics between urban and rural areas (since this is a focus of the study). This more detailed description provides greater richness to the study and contextualization. 2. Since this is a cross-sectional study, limiting causal inferences about the relationships proposed in the theoretical model, it would be pertinent to include: a more explicit discussion about the limitations of causality in cross-sectional studies; suggest future longitudinal studies to validate the proposed relationships; reflect on possible reversibility bias in the observed relationships (e.g., isolation → poorer perceived quality of care). 3. Explicitly discuss which important variables were missing in the HINTS data and how this may affect the results 4. All variables were self-reported; therefore, other types of bias, such as recall bias and social desirability, should be discussed. 5. Provide better support for interpretations based on existing literature on the differences between rural and urban health systems or contexts. 6. An essential component that is missing from the manuscript is directly suggesting practical implications based on the results obtained (e.g., public policies, contextual interventions, etc.) If the suggested improvements are implemented, the manuscript can be accepted into PLOS ONE and make a significant contribution to the literature and scientific research in oncology, mental health, and public health. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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| Revision 1 |
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Dear Dr. Choudhury, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The manuscript has been evaluated by three reviewers, and their comments are available below. Although reviewers 1 and 2 are satisfied with the revised manuscript, reviewer 3 has some requests. Could you please revise the manuscript to carefully address the concerns raised? Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 27 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. 2. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The authors have sufficiently address my feedback and I am happy to recommend this paper for publication. Reviewer #3: The manuscript has been significantly improved, but still requires some minor adjustments that will further strengthen the study's contribution to the literature on cancer survivor health. The authors considered and responded to all comments and suggestions. A new table with participant characteristics was added, increasing the transparency and contextualization of the study. The discussion of the limitations of cross-sectional studies was adequately addressed. The inclusion of the potential bidirectionality between variables (e.g., social isolation ↔ mental health) and the suggestion of future longitudinal studies are strengths of the new version of the article. Regarding missing variables in HINTS, the authors refer to the treatment of missing data. However, what was suggested was a critical discussion of the important variables missing from HINTS and how this may limit the interpretation of the results (examples of critical missing variables include cancer type, treatment type, access to mental health services, and support network). We suggest that the authors engage in this critical reflection. Regarding the literature on rural and urban contexts, the answer that this is "out of scope" is insufficient. Statistical control for health system variables was not requested; however, theoretical foundations from the existing literature were used to interpret the differences observed between rural and urban areas. It is suggested that studies that discuss access barriers, community cohesion, or disparities in post-cancer mental health be cited to better support interpretations, even if indirectly. Regarding practical implications, caution must be exercised and causal prescriptions avoided. However, even in exploratory studies, it is possible and desirable to suggest practical implications and plausible interventions based on the results, always with some caution. For example, telemedicine programs, virtual support groups, or health literacy initiatives could be mentioned as potential strategies, especially in rural communities. We recommend including an "Implications for Practice" subsection with possible, data-based recommendations. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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| Revision 2 |
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Antecedents of Loneliness Among Cancer Survivors: An Exploratory Analysis of the Health Information National Trends Survey (HINTS) Data. PONE-D-25-18009R2 Dear Dr. Choudhury, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Taiwo Opeyemi Aremu, MD, MPH, PhD Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #3: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #3: All reviewer comments have been addressed, and the article is considered suitable for publication. The authors are advised to verify all references and correct any remaining minor errors. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #3: No ********** |
| Formally Accepted |
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