Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 21, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-03572Puriton® attenuates the asthma severity in ovalbumin-induced murine model via balancing Th1/Th2 and inhibiting inflammationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Park, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 11 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript studied the attenuation effect of Puriton on allergic asthma in mice. Puriton may play a role in restoring the balance between Th1/Th2, improving airway remodeling, reducing mucus secretion and goblet cells hyperplasia, suppressing Th2-related cytokines as well as IgE production. It may be an effective and helpful treatment for allergic asthma. However, there are some problems, which must be solved before it is considered for publication. The first major problem with this manuscript is that it is poorly grammatically written. I have listed some of them below. Abstract: - All abbreviations should be defined upon their first appearance. Line 19: Change to “In 2019, 262 million asthma patients were estimated, with 455 thousand deaths caused by asthma”. Line 21: “elder” replace by “elderly”. Line 26: “Puriton” add “Treatment with Puriton”. Introduction: - From Introduction to Discussion, All abbreviations should be defined upon their first appearance and used consistently thereafter. - Information about Puriton needs to be supplemented in INTRODUCTION. Line 38, 39: grammar “Symptoms of asthma includes……which is …..[4] and airway…..” replaced by “Symptoms of asthma include……which are …..[4]. Airway…..” Line 40: “was resulted” replace by “results” & “change” to “changes” Line 42: “hyperplasia/apoptosis/fibrosis” change to “hyperplasia, apoptosis, and fibrosis”. Line 48: “….of that will be over that” change to “….will be over that age”. Line 49-51: long sentence. Line 51: “…not only Th1 cell and Treg cells” replace by “…not only Th1 cells but also regulatory T (Treg) cells”. Line 56: change to “ …Th1 and Th2 cells and Treg cell-related cytokines…..” Line 59: delete “for”. Line 60: change into “drugs are categorized into: anti-inflammatory……….”. Line 62-63: “As most of all need inhalator (nebulizer) …..and that is therapeutic limit” rewrite. Line 67: change to “………………gas exchange, fluid balance, and muscle contraction.” Line 68: “And recently biological effects of them have induced…..” replace by “Recently biological effects of them have been induced……”. Do not start the sentence with “And”. Line 70: “enhancing” replace by “enhancement”. Materials and methods: It is best described, however: I think “Ethics statement” comes before “Animal experiment” . Line 79: Remove “with”. Line 81: “…as a positive one” replace by “…as appositive control”. Line 82: change to “2 dosage groups of Puriton”. Line 90: change to “…and in the afternoon, 5% ovalbumin was inhaled using nebulizer….”. Line 115: change to “After fixation, the samples were dehydrated using graded …..” Line 117: “sectioned by” replace by “sectioned at”. Line 120-121: change to “……and Schiff stain (….) were conducted.”; “using with” replace by “using”. Line 127: remove “with”. Line 134: change to “prostaglandin E2 (PGE2)” Results: - Significant levels (P-values) must be added in your Result Section. - Titles are so long. - You must mention the increase or decrease in the results compared to which group. Line 171: change to “As shown in Fig 3A. OVA………”. Line 173: “seem” replace by “seemed or appeared”. Line 176-178: change to “Although the immunohistochemical analysis suggested that the control effect of Puriton® on IFN-γ and IL-12p40 seemed effective based on quantitative evaluation, the effect of Puriton® did not reach statistical significance (Fig 3C)."” Line182: add compared to what “The expression of IL-4 protein in OVA treatment group significantly increased compared to CON….”. Line 187-190: IL-6!!!! You mean IL-13., replace. Line 205: “by those in DEX” correct as “to those observed with DEX treatment” Discussion: Punctuation should be added. Line 209: “…..meet allergen APCs introduce that to Th2 cell” replace by “…..meet allergen, APCs introduce it to Th2 cell”. Line 211-215: change to “….(< 1 day), its high affinity for mast and basophil allows easy interaction with allergens. After a mast cell and/or basophil meets an allergen, leukotriene D4 and PGE2 are…… such as asthma, allergic rhinitis, and atopic dermatitis”. Line 216-220: long sentence. Line 220: change to “IL-4 released from…the release of IL-4, IL-5, and IL-13, promotes IgE production from….”. Line 246: “such” change to “such as”. Line 250: change to “….inflammation, as demonstrated in this study.” Line 259: “Minerals attributed” replace by “Minerals have been attributed”. Line 268-270: rewrite. References: It’s better to add recent references (2024 and/or 2025) Figures: - Any abbreviations used in the figures must be defined in figure captions upon their first appearance, then use the abbreviated form. - Use arrows or stars to point out your results on the figures. - Improve the resolution of figures. Line 419, 428: “effects of” replace by “effects on”. Reviewer #2: I found the article to be accepted with slight modifications, which are addressed in the suggestion, as NF-KB and signaling pathways are needed to say Puriton has an anti-inflammatory effect to treat asthma. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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<p>Puriton® attenuates the asthma severity in ovalbumin-induced murine model via balancing Th1/Th2 and inhibiting inflammation PONE-D-25-03572R1 Dear Dr. Park, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Vinh Le Ba, PhD in Pharmaceutical Science Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): You can change the author information based on your comments. Reviewers' comments: |
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