Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 12, 2025 |
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This will take you to the ORCID site and allow you to create a new iD or authenticate a pre-existing iD in Editorial Manager.-->--> -->-->7. Please amend either the abstract on the online submission form (via Edit Submission) or the abstract in the manuscript so that they are identical.-->?> [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The reviewed manuscript entitled “Carbon fiber reinforced composite material layup design optimization method and its application in automobile battery box” investigates lightweight design and performance optimization of battery boxes using carbon fiber composites. The article is scientifically and technically sound, with clear practical significance. However, several major concerns should be addressed to enhance readability and clarity: 1- The introduction provides good context but needs a clearer distinction of how this work differs from previous studies. 2- The methodology lacks comparisons with existing optimization algorithms, making it difficult to assess the PSO-BFO algorithm's effectiveness. 3- The finite element modeling section should include a mesh sensitivity analysis for validation. 4- Sources of the 3.67% error in modal frequencies are not discussed and should be clarified. 5- Figures and tables need annotations to highlight key observations clearly. 6- The scalability of the proposed method to other automotive components is not addressed. 7- Statistical validation or repeatability of the experimental results is lacking and should be included. 8- The literature review could be expanded to include recent advancements in digital twin technology. 9- Intermediate optimization results, such as fitness evolution, are not shown and should be added for better visualization. 10- The structural design section could benefit from discussing the durability of the materials in harsh conditions. 11- Details on the choice of excitation point in the experimental setup need clarification. Reviewer #2: 1- The paper presents improvement rates in battery box performance metrics, but no confidence intervals, statistical significance tests, or sensitivity analysis are provided. Given the computational nature of the study, variance in optimization outcomes should be reported. 2- The study primarily relies on finite element simulations to evaluate the optimized battery box's structural behavior. However, experimental validation is missing. The absence of load tests, vibration tests, or impact assessments makes it difficult to confirm the claimed improvements. 3- The influence of different fiber orientations in the composite layup is not systematically investigated. The PSO-BFO hybrid algorithm optimizes layup sequences, but the paper does not analyze how small deviations in fiber angles (±5° or ±10°) affect stress distribution, stiffness, or failure modes. 4- The crashworthiness of the optimized battery box is not discussed. Since the battery box is a critical safety component, it should be evaluated under impact scenarios in addition to static and modal analyses. 5- The transition between the SMC composite upper panel and the carbon fiber composite lower panel could lead to localized stress concentration. The paper lacks stress contour plots highlighting these transition regions and does not mention how delamination or interface debonding risks were mitigated. 6- The study does not compare the optimized hybrid composite battery box with other alternative lightweight designs to contextualize the improvements. 7- The paper does not include a convergence plot for the hybrid PSO-BFO algorithm. Given that hybrid swarm-based optimizers may experience premature convergence, it is essential to demonstrate whether the objective function stabilizes and how many iterations were required. 8- While the PSO-BFO hybrid approach is novel, the paper does not compare its performance with other optimization algorithms. Benchmarking against existing approaches would strengthen the validity of its effectiveness. 9- The study does not assess how variations in material properties (e.g., fiber volume fraction, matrix stiffness, interlaminar shear strength) influence the optimization results. Given manufacturing inconsistencies, this should be addressed. 10- The shear properties of the optimized composite layup are not analyzed. Battery boxes may be subjected to out-of-plane shear loads, which could lead to delamination. A short-beam shear test or interlaminar tension test should be conducted. 11- The paper does not discuss the practical challenges in manufacturing the hybrid composite battery box. Issues like tooling cost, layup reproducibility, curing cycle optimization, and adhesive bonding techniques should be addressed. 12- Given the scope and content of this paper, it may benefit from considering the following related works: https://doi.org/10.1007/s00521-024-09494-4 https://doi.org/10.1016/B978-0-443-13191-2.00015-8 ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Carbon fiber reinforced composite material layup design optimization method and its application in automobile battery box PONE-D-25-01443R1 Dear Dr. Zhang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Khalil Abdelrazek Khalil, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** Reviewer #1: The authors have provided amendments to all the suggested queries, therfore, I recommend this work for publication in PLOS One Reviewer #2: After thoroughly reviewing the revised manuscript and the authors' detailed responses to the initial comments, the improvements made are satisfactory. All concerns have been adequately addressed, and the manuscript now meets the standards for publication. Acceptance of this article is recommended. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-25-01443R1 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Zhang, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Khalil Abdelrazek Khalil Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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