Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 11, 2025 |
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Additional Editor Comments: The article is relevant and aligns with the WHO’s strategy for the triple elimination of mother-to-child transmission (MTCT) of HIV, syphilis, and hepatitis B. It presents an interesting approach to public policy development in Sub-Saharan African countries. However, the authors should clarify some points in the manuscript. More detailed information is needed on the MTCT situation in the two countries studied—specifically, the challenges and opportunities, as well as the similarities and differences between them. It is also important to explain the rationale for presenting aggregated indicators for the three infections, rather than analyzing the outcomes for each infection separately. Providing more detail about the selected study sites would also help readers better understand the context and the relevance of the findings. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses??> Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. Reviewer #1: The authors present a summary of their protocol for a study to be conducted in Burkina Faso and the Gambia that will implement a model for integrated clinical services to improve prevention of vertical transmission of HIV, congenital syphilis, and hep B. The aim is for the study findings to inform broader efforts in the countries, region, and Africa to achieve triple elimination of these diseases. The paper is somewhat lacking in its understanding of how their study would fit into broader initiatives to achieve triple elimination. There is some overreach on how their study can inform scale-up, even locally. For example, while reported to include a mix of rural and urban sites, there are no rural sites in Burkina Faso. While this may be appropriate (given the discussion with the Ministry to select the sites), it would be useful to have more local context integrated into the text to explain why the site selection worked out this way. On the other hand, the actual individual enrollment numbers for the quantitative survey and cohort study are substantial. Additionally, while the inclusion of a variety of study designs is interesting, the depth of description of the mixed methods evaluation is lacking. Overall, the balance could be shifted more towards the 2 countries and less towards the “big picture” that is contingent on the study findings and experiences with actual implementation Title 1. The reference to this being a protocol paper should appear in the title. Abstract 2. Clarify what the cost and CEA will examine. 3. The text is unclear in how it specifies the sample size. It will be conducted in 5 sites in each country – not 10 sites in each of both countries. Strengths and limitations 4. Specify the country contexts. 5. The timeframe for the second phase is provided as starting in 2025 when phase 1 is being presented in this paper under review in 2025. This is confusing. And will there be another paper for phase 2? Please clarify. 6. The study site sample of 5 per country, split between rural and urban settings may not necessarily be considered “several” if looked at from within individual categories. Introduction 7. It is unusual to have this section start with sub-headers. 8. Please use person-centered language throughout the entire manuscript and supplemental files. For example, “adolescents infected with HIV” should be adolescents acquiring HIV. 9. The epi data are out of date (e.g., 2018). Please update all metrics where such data are available. 10. The text emphasizes the general global situation more than the local context in these 2 countries. Please refocus and provide a succinct overview of the triple elimination targets before describing the situation with burden of disease and prevention access and uptake in the 2 countries. 11. With regards to hep B elimination, the most critical aspects are HBsAg screening of pregnant women and a country’s history of vaccination – whether the 3-dose series or birth dose implementation. Local vaccination practices are not mentioned until the end of the section and then in insufficient detail. For example, birth dose is not described in terms of the targeted and universal approaches referenced in WHO triple elimination validation criteria. 12. Overall, the section refers more generally to preventing these 3 infections and is lacking in its awareness of the WHO’s triple elimination strategy. Methods 13. It would be clearer if the hypothesis appeared earlier in the manuscript and was integrated into the objectives. 14. It is somewhat confusing to have objectives in one section and then have them repeated or supplemented elsewhere in the methods. 15. Was there a sample size consideration for the mixed methods study? This is missing. 16. How will the mixed methods data be analysed? This is missing. 17. Suggest focusing the text on what the authors intend to inform by way of health practice and policy in the countries where the study will be conducted. While their future study findings can inform efforts in the region and the sub-continent, this is somewhat beyond the scope of the proposed study. It remains to be seen if and how the study data could/would be directly generalizeable to the “triple elimination agenda in Africa” as a whole. 18. Overall readability is limited. Although a protocol paper, it would be of greater interest if it added more information (through data, narrative explanation) for a reader who wanted to learn more about challenges and opportunities to achieve triple elimination targets in these 2 countries. Reviewer #2: The article is highly relevant and aligns with Sustainable Development Goal 3, particularly with regard to the elimination of diseases such as vertically transmitted infections (HIV, syphilis, and hepatitis B). It also proposes the integration of hepatitis B vertical transmission prevention strategies with existing—though not yet well implemented—initiatives aimed at preventing vertical transmission of HIV and syphilis. This is especially pertinent given that public policies addressing hepatitis B in Sub-Saharan African countries remain underdeveloped. The implementation of the project described in the protocol has the potential to strengthen local efforts to eliminate vertical transmission and to enhance the maternal and child healthcare continuum. The following points should be better explained: - When will the Antenatal Care Panel test for HIV, syphilis, and hepatitis B surface antigen (HBsAg) (Abbott, USA) be used, and when will the SD BIOLINETM HIV/Syphilis Duo Test and DetermineTM HBsAg test be used? - For what purpose, and for how long, will the biobank samples be stored? It is also recommended to review the outcome indicators, especially when aggregating all infections into a single metric. Consider whether to maintain a composite indicator or to disaggregate outcomes by infection type. This would allow for a better understanding of the specific implementation aspects of the vertical transmission prevention protocol for each infection (e.g., the proportion of women at risk of MTCT who achieved virological suppression [for HIV and HBV infections] or cure [for syphilis] at delivery -Would it be more appropriate to report these infections jointly or separately?). ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Towards triple elimination of HIV, syphilis and HBV mother-to-child transmission: protocol of a simplified and integrated strategy in Burkina Faso and The Gambia: protocol for the phase 1 of the TRI-MOM project PONE-D-25-09454R1 Dear Dr. Quang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Angelica Espinosa Miranda, M.D., Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): The authors answered our comments and added all suggestions in the manuscript. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-25-09454R1 PLOS One Dear Dr. Vo Quang, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS One. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. You will receive an invoice from PLOS for your publication fee after your manuscript has reached the completed accept phase. If you receive an email requesting payment before acceptance or for any other service, this may be a phishing scheme. Learn how to identify phishing emails and protect your accounts at https://explore.plos.org/phishing. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Angelica Espinosa Miranda Academic Editor PLOS One |
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