Peer Review History
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PONE-D-24-48602Community health volunteers’ experiences during the COVID-19 pandemic in Kiambu county, Kenya: a qualitative studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Juttla, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 10 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Which kind of support was provided to the CHVs prior to the promulgation of law that recognized their role in the health system? 4. How many health facilities are this county, and what kind of services do they provide, especially during the COVID-19 pandemic? 5. What is/are the roles of the CHVs (not CHPs) played in relation to these HFs or various levels of care, if any? 6. I suggest the study population and sampling should come after the study design. 7. What do you mean by this: “The data was collected as part of a larger quasi-experimental mixed methods pre-post study”? 8. The selection of CHVs was somewhat opaque and unspecific. Can you please elaborate on the selection of CHVs for the FGD sessions? 9. How was the desired number of participants determined? 10. Line 139, why do you have to use the word exigencies? I suggest you use the word needs or requirements 11. Were the participants informed of their preserved right to quit the study at any time? Was it verbal or in writing? 12. The PI (MMK) was the County Head of Clinical Research while the researcher (NW) who did data collection NW was the Monitoring and Evaluation Coordinator. Can you please re-write this? 13. There seem to be contradictions in the emerging ideas from the FGDs considering the barriers and their roles. 14. At what point in the COVID-19 pandemic were the CHVs provided with kits, such as face masks, by the NGO- Living Goods, given that a major limitation to service delivery by the CHVs was the lack of appropriate PPE and basic devices at the point of care? 15. This is in keeping with studies conducted in Guinea, Liberia and Sierra Leone during the Ebola outbreak (23). How many studies have you cited here? Kindly correct this. 16. “The present study also highlighted the negative economic effects of the response to COVID-19 on the community members. This is corroborated by another study conducted in Poland where people relayed similar financial destitution as a result of the pandemic measures (25).” This does not tally with the sub-topic of misinformation or being scared about the disease. Perhaps, this (economic implication) can be discussed elsewhere. 17. Regarding disappointment in government, the authors should discuss what they found (results) in the current study, then compare it with other studies (local and international) and proffer possible explanations, where relevant. 18. The discussion requires a lot of improvement as it seems shallow and unconvincing. 19. There are other real and potential limitations and biases in the study that should have been stated in the manuscript. The authors need to think through this. 20. The entire manuscript requires editing. 21. On the recommendation, this study was conducted before the CHVs (community health strategy) were formally integrated into and compensated by the formal health system by the GoK. Hence, how does this study adequately identify the challenges and obstacles towards realizing the UHC goal in the context of the roles of the CHVs given the temporal change(s)? 22. The recommendations are lengthy and somewhat boring. The authors should summarise and make this section concise. 23. The discussion, conclusion and recommendation require considerable revision with a clear flow of thought and reorganization, in alignment with the objectives of the study. Reviewer #2: Community health volunteers’ experiences during the COVID-19 pandemic in Kiambu county, Kenya: a qualitative study GENERAL COMMENT. This is generally a good research manuscript. The choice of the study population is appropriate, and the context of investigation is also very applicable. There are documented facts that COVID-19 pandemic revealed the weaknesses in the health systems across WHO African countries and most especially its implications regarding the human resources for health (HRH) is palpable. The inclusion of the CHVs in Kenya was supposed to be helpful in taming the scourge, but this research is an eye opener to the challenges associated with their duties and the gaps in governance in general at the study location. The comments below should be addressed by authors and if this is done dutifully, the manuscript can be accepted by the journal for publication. SECTIONAL COMMENTS Line 22-23: You may want to use another suitable word here…. like ‘CHVs participated in responding to the crisis’……. Line 24-25: Expunge this phrase ‘Given that the test of a healthcare system is a health crisis….it is not necessary Line 30 -31: A county in Kenya is a big geographical area with sizeable population covered by appreciable number of CHVs. Please clarify the reason behind limiting the FGDs to only 2. Ensuring saturation of information in any qualitative study is very key to avoid bias in findings Line 40: The word ‘disappointed’ should be replaced with another suitable word. It looks like the researcher was emotionally drawing a conclusion and may not necessarily represent the findings from the study Line 94: On a general note, data collection in qualitative study should harness multiple sources of information, including Focused Group Discussion (FGD), Key Informant Interview (KII) and possibly document review. This will facilitate information richness and reduce bias to the barest minimum. However, if only FGD was to be used, it was expected that it would be done with multiple groups with adoption of saturation principle. Another acceptable option is to conduct interview for reasonable sample (with applicable sampling formular) of the CHVs using self-administered semi-structured questionnaire. I’d advise that the authors consider this suggestion as important. Line 100: It will be good if the researcher could add other related county statistics as regards the number of health facilities, health workers/population ratio, and possibly the prevalence of the COVID-19 along with case fatality rate in the county as of the study period. Line 128-129: Previous pandemic or COVID-19? If for the COVID-19, for how long before the time of their selection? Line 151-152: You may just replace this with…..’Two of the research-authors’. Then how were you able to circumvent bias in the qualitative data collection knowing fully well that two of the authors served as data collectors? Line 154-164: The researcher should try to summarize what the FGD questions are all about. There is no need to itemize all of them Line 170-171: Please refer to my earlier comment on this in your abstract. Why limited to 2 FGD only, when saturation level needs to be achieved? Line 184: Write PI in full. Line 192: If there was no previous description of MAXQDA2020, the authors may want to add few lines to clarify that Line 197: Where is The University of Eastern Africa Baraton located? Is it in the same county for study location? If not, why the University? Line 211: Perspective of the community on what? Line 22-267: The author should check for full quotation of the respondent’s feedback. I guess the mother has a child with a sickness that was attended to in 7 months. In addition, the phrase ‘I removed her’ should be rephrased as appropriate Line 231; The quote is too short/. Author should Add a preceding statement to make the quote more comprehensive. Something must have been reported as a positive before the respondent is filled with joy. Line 315-316: The right way to report should be ….’The respondents reported that there was stigmatization’….. Line 324: Use ‘According to CHVs’ opinion…. Line 327-328: As this statement ;323 ‘’The political leaders themselves did not adhere to the protocols’’ was the perception of the CHVs, the author should reflect this tone as required. A good option is to rephrase as much as possible Line 408; Authors can replace with ‘’’This is in tandem with the findings from studies conducted…..’ Line 418-425: This is good. However, I expect to see other side of the arguments where other researchers’ findings contradicts this study’s findings, and they give a balanced few-lines discussion around this. This applicable to other sub-sections of the discussion Line 427: This phrase sound biased. One county can not stand alone to conclude that the government is disappointing. The author should find another word/phrase to convey the minds of the respondents and should not report with emotions. Line 428: The author may want to use another word apart from ‘pessimistic’ ...Another word like ‘respondents expressed reservations’……. Line 444: On a general note, the recommendation section should be summarized by the authors. Maximum of 3 paragraphs should be adequate to summarize the salient recommendations. Lines 445-447: Authors should not insinuate that the findings are generalisable to the whole country of Kenya. I guess a possible recommendation should be that a possible comparative study using broader method should be done across multiple counties. A better inference can be drawn if this is done in the future. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . 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PONE-D-24-48602R1Community health volunteers’ experiences during the COVID-19 pandemic in Kiambu county, Kenya: a qualitative studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Juttla, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The issue of the conduction of only 2 FGDs vis-a-vis saturation of information is a challenge that you still have to address. I would suggest that you include this in the study limitation section and discuss its impact on the reliability of your findings, conclusions and recommendations. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 22 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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