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| Original SubmissionSeptember 9, 2024 |
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Both reviewers provided positive feedback regarding the overall quality of your study, highlighting the robustness of the experimental design and the relevance of the findings in the field of memory and decision-making. However, they have also raised several points that require further clarification and refinement in the revised version. Their feedback is insightful and, when implemented, will significantly enhance the clarity, rigor, and overall impact of your manuscript. I believe their comments are highly relevant and aimed at improving the quality of your work, ensuring that it meets the highest standards for publication. Specifically, the reviewers have provided detailed recommendations in the following areas:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: These two experiments (one fully online and the second both online and in-laboratory) examined different memory processes (i.e., familiarity versus recollection) interact during value judgment and risky decision-making. The two experiments were well executed, aimed to answer the 4 research hypotheses and the results obtained were promising, and positive which are relevant for implementation of programs. The statistical analyses were appropriate in testing the various hypotheses postulated. A pilot study was carried out. Perhaps, a brief summary of its findings would be good to illustrate to the readers about this results and how were these incorporated in the actual experiments. In Experiment !, the analysis showed that there was no main effect of overall source accuracy, nor any significant interaction between source accuracy, RPR and source confidence. What could be the reasons for this? Nor was there any significant interaction between familiarity, RPR, and source confidence. Same experiment design was use in Experiment 2. How were these participants split into 2 groups (online and in-laboratory groups)? For the online sample, majority of the participants were not compliant with the task instructions. Why is this so? Discussion and limitations of study were well discussed for both the experiments. Reviewer #2: This is a well-written and interesting paper examining the separate and interacting effects of recollection and familiarity on value judgment and memory-based decision making. The authors find that familiarity increases subjective value and that it does not tradeoff with source memory—recollection and familiarity instead interact to both increase subjective value. The authors do a great job motivating the study and explaining their hypotheses, and the study design and analyses are well thought through and technically rigorous. The flow of the paper is also great—for example, I had noted two major weakness of experiment one (the causal interpretation of effects of familiarity on choice and the potential unwillingness of participants to complete the source memory task), but both were stated in the discussion of experiment one and then addressed by experiment two. So I think the paper is in generally good shape, and I have the following comments (which are all mostly minor and given in rough order of when they are relevant in the paper) to help improve it: - I think it would be more clear to present the prediction figure (Figure 1) after (or alongside) the design of experiment one. This is because the predictions are specific to the experiments, and it would be easier to interpret them once the experiment is explained. I’d like to suggest that the predictions are either added as a separate panel to what is currently Figure 2 (the task design), or that these two figures are reversed in order. I also think that the axes could be improved (the obvious assumption is that left is low and right is high, but this should be made explicit). - While reading the task design, I kept wondering how the bet structure made sense when it was introduced by the practice betting task (for example, I kept wondering whether losses were involved). This is later clarified in the memory-based betting task, but it’d be good to introduce that earlier. Related to the presentation of the task, Figure 2C is labeled memory-based betting but in the methods that label is used to describe the whole four-part task. I think this should just be made to match, and the authors can solve this however they see fit/what they think is the most clear. The methods also state the task is three-parts, (which I sort of get if both source tasks are grouped together), but I think it should be labeled as having three-partings. - I have a few clarification questions about the statistical analyses for experiment one. How was the categorical lure predictor coded (0 and 1 or some other coding scheme?) Related to this—why was a separate model for the effects of lure familiarity trials needed (LME 1.2), since these effects should be captured by the interaction term of the previous model (i.e. if the categorical lure predictor is 1)? I am not necessarily concerned by this choice, but I would like it to be clarified. There is also a predictor labeled RSP in LME 1.3, but this was not defined as far as I could tell (and I apologize if I missed this). - It is interesting that repetitions increased the RPR but not source accuracy (and later that the opposite occurs in experiment 2). I think this may be because these variables are in tension with one another: participants should be less accurate about the source if they tend to mis-attribute low probability sources to high probability sources (which should in turn increase the effect of RPR on betting). Was there any evidence for such a relationship? This is also relevant for the overall discussion (~ lines 676 - 682). - A nice feature of this design is that it is rational to bet on every trial if participants have no source memory. But isn’t it the case that participants who may be completely rational but not rely on memory are being excluded by the pre-registered criteria (>99% bet rates)? I’m not very concerned by this because very few participants are actually affected here, but I think it might be worth stating why this rationale was chosen given the design of the task. I am also wondering whether you found any relationship between memory performance and overall betting rates. I know you observed that people are generally risk averse here, but I wonder whether it is also the case that less risk averse people are also more forgetful, which would indicate that they are rational when memory is poor? I think this aspect of the design might allow you to gain more insight into participants’ overall strategies when solving the task. - While the authors admit that drawing causal influences of familiarity on betting behavior is difficult, there are still statements about directionality in the results (lines 275-277; lines 281-282). I think these should be amended. Relatedly, in experiment two the authors state that adding some temporal distance (via separate blocks for decisions and memory judgments) can help address this, but I don’t see how this is necessarily the case. The element of the experiment two design that really accomplishes this is the counterbalancing, so in my opinion the writing should be revised to reflect that as a primary explanation for this design choice in experiment two. - Regarding the statistical methods for experiment two, I am again unclear why a separate model for lure items is needed, since this should again (I think) be captured by the interactions with the lure categorical predictor variable. I understand why this is the case for targets since the authors need to look at the effects of source accuracy, but the rationale for doing so with lures should be made more clear. - When comparing the linear and exponential models, a procedure that is more robust to overfitting should be used. Ideally this would be cross validation (for example, leave-N-subjects or, per subject, leave-N-trials out). I think it is possible that this may reveal more nuanced differences in the fit than just a straight comparison of the NLL. This ultimately may not be so important given that the authors state (but don’t show) that a similar result was observed for the relationship between familiarity/source confidence and lures/errors/correct responses, but I think cross validation would strengthen this result. - A few typos: - Stars are missing from the source accuracy portion of table 2 - line 235: they value expectations —> their value expectations - line 525: I think this should be referencing Figure 4a rather than 3a (which was for experiment 1) - line 528: Same here, I think this should be Figure 4b instead of 3b - line 547: Figure 3c —> Figure 4c - line 559: Figure 3d —> Figure 4d ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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