Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 5, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-44412Model reference adaptive system and Pseudo-Sliding Mode Control with Exponential Reaching Law for Sensorless-Speed control of PMSMPLOS ONE Dear Dr. karboua, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Reviewers have now commented on your paper. You will see that they are advising that you revise your manuscript. If you are prepared to undertake the work required, I would be pleased to reconsider my decision. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 09 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1) The paper's focus is primarily on the medium to high-speed operation of PMSMs, leaving out important challenges related to sensorless control at low speeds, where accurate estimation of rotor position is difficult. A more balanced discussion on how the proposed system performs across all speed ranges, including low-speed operation, would provide a more comprehensive analysis. The authors might also consider addressing how their technique could be adapted for low-speed conditions. 2) Although the manuscript compares the proposed method with classical ERL-SMC, the range of alternative control strategies is narrow. Control strategies such as Field-Oriented Control (FOC) or other advanced adaptive or predictive controls are not fully explored. The authors should include a broader comparison with state-of-the-art sensorless control methods beyond sliding mode control. This could provide a clearer context for the superiority or trade-offs of the proposed technique. 3) The MATLAB/Simulink environment used for simulations may oversimplify the complexities of PMSM control, such as measurement noise, real-time computational delays, or implementation constraints. The authors should simulate real-world imperfections such as sensor noise or communication delays to show how the controller handles such challenges. Alternatively, a discussion on the feasibility of real-time implementation and how the system could perform under these conditions is crucial. 4) The paper provides limited detail on how the parameters (e.g., gains of the PI regulator in MRAS or sliding surface design in SMC) are chosen and tuned. The tuning process is often critical to achieving desired performance but is not discussed in depth. The paper would benefit from a more detailed explanation of the parameter tuning process and its impact on system performance. Additionally, the authors should comment on the computational complexity of implementing the proposed system, especially regarding real-time applications. 5) The manuscript does not address the scalability of the proposed control strategy for larger or more complex systems, such as multi-phase motors or systems with multiple interacting machines. A discussion on the potential challenges and solutions for scaling the proposed control system to more complex or multi-machine systems would enrich the paper's contribution. Reviewer #2: This manuscript presents the importance of sensorless speed motor drives, particularly in the context of PMSMs, and introduces a hybrid control technique aimed at improving system reliability and performance. The integration of the MRAS and pseudo-sliding mode control, combined with the ARL, presents a novel approach to addressing common control challenges, including uncertainties, dynamic conditions, and chattering issues. However, the writing needs extensively improvements. After carefully reviewing this work, some comments are given below: A. Sec. 1 1. Sec. 1 gives a good breif for the sensorless PMSM systems. However, many references are too out-of-date. For example, the related works about SMC [31-37] were published between 1983-2023. Only [36] and [37] were published within 5 years. Please consider the following recently published works about SMC techniques. Yun Zhang, et al. "Vector control of permanent magnet synchronous motor drive system based on new sliding mode control," in IEICE Electronics Express, vol. 20, no. 23, pp. 20230263-20230263, 2023. Lei Zhang, et al. "PMSM non-singular fast terminal sliding mode control with disturbance compensation," in Information Sciences, vol. 642, pp. 119040, 2023. Hao Yang et al. "Application of new sliding mode control in vector control of PMSM," in IEICE Electronics Express, vol. 19, no. 13, pp. 20220156-20220156, 2022. Hao Yang et al. "Generalized super-twisting sliding mode control of permanent magnet synchronous motor based on sinusoidal saturation function," in IEICE Electronics Express, vol. 19, no. 9, pp. 20220066-20220066, 2022. B. Sec. 3 2. The title of Sec. 3 needs to be modified. Maybe "Designing of the PMSM’s senserless speed obercation using MRAS" a better title. 3. Fig. 2 needs more explaination. Especially the symbols used in this Figure. Besides, Fig. 2 has no corss-reference. Please refer to Fig. 2 in your context. C. Sec. 4 4. In Eq. (20), the symbol of n is not defined. 5. Fig. 5 is not corss-referenced in your context. D. Sec. 5 6. Fig. 15 is not corss-referenced in your context. 7. The disturbances simulated in the paper are relatively simplistic, focusing on parameter variation and load torque application. Real-world systems often encounter more complex and unpredictable disturbances, and it is unclear how the proposed method would perform under such scenarios. 8. The results are based solely on simulations using MATLAB/Simulink. While simulations are valuable, the absence of real-world experimental data raises concerns about the practical implementation of the proposed method, especially under varying environmental conditions or hardware limitations. E. Sec. 6 9. Conclusion should be Sec. 6 not Sec. 5. Please renumber it. 10. The study focuses on specific PMSM parameters and operational conditions. There is limited discussion on how the proposed control strategy would generalize across different motor types or in applications with significantly different torque or speed requirements. 11. Please dicuss some possible disadvanteges about the proposed method. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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PONE-D-24-44412R1 Model reference adaptive system and Pseudo-Sliding Mode Control with Exponential Reaching Law for Sensorless-Speed control of PMSM PLOS ONE Dear Dr. karboua, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we have decided that your manuscript does not meet our criteria for publication and must therefore be rejected. I am sorry that we cannot be more positive on this occasion, but hope that you appreciate the reasons for this decision. Kind regards, Aymen Flah Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments : Even the answers given to the previous phase of revision, authors fail to change opinion of two reviwers (to get a positive decision), one of the reviwer, still feel that the work is not perfect and his opinion still the same after the first round. As required by the journla policy, 2 positive reports must appear on a work, however this is not the case. therefore, the paper is declined to be published. best regards [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Limitations and Shortcomings: 1) The primary focus on medium to high-speed operation omits a thorough analysis of sensorless control at low speeds, a critical domain for many PMSM applications. 2) The comparative analysis is narrow, and limited to classical ERL-SMC. Field-Oriented Control (FOC) and advanced adaptive or predictive control strategies, which are widely adopted, are notably absent. 3) The paper lacks a systematic discussion on parameter tuning (e.g., gains of the PI regulator and sliding surface design) and computational complexity for real-time implementation. 4) Some references, particularly on sliding mode control techniques, are outdated. Recent advancements should be incorporated to strengthen the literature review. Reviewer #2: In this revision, all my major concerns have been well addressed. Only some minor comments are raised in this revision. I would like to suggest accepting this manuscript. The leged in Fig. 20 should be given for the three curves in different colors. The same issues were found in other figure, such as Fig. 15 (b). Please check this concern in the whole manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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