Peer Review History
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PONE-D-24-28436Identifying the causal effect of workplace violence on depressive symptoms, burnout, sleep problems, work-life balance and intention to quit in Peruvian physicians and nurses: a cross-sectional study using propensity score matchingPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Copaja-Corzo, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ACADEMIC EDITOR: I have reviewed the comments from Reviewer 1, including the suggestion to cite a specific reference. While the reference appears relevant to the manuscript, I have ensured that it is clearly communicated to the authors as optional, in alignment with PLOS ONE’s guidelines. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 03 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript addresses a critical issue in healthcare settings—workplace violence (WV) and its impact on mental health and work-related outcomes among healthcare professionals. The study is well-conducted, employing robust statistical techniques to draw causal inferences from observational data, making it a valuable contribution to the literature. However, there are areas where the manuscript can be strengthened, particularly in contextualization, methodological detail, and discussion. Key Strengths 1. The topic is timely and highly relevant, especially given the mental health challenges exacerbated by workplace violence in healthcare. 2. The use of propensity score matching (PSM) is a notable strength, as it enhances the causal inference capabilities of the study. 3. The manuscript is comprehensive in addressing multiple outcomes, including depressive symptoms, burnout, sleep problems, work-life balance, and turnover intentions. ________________________________________ Weaknesses and Areas for Improvement 1. Introduction • Contextualization: The introduction could better contextualize why workplace violence is particularly prevalent in Peru. Although it briefly mentions South American perspectives, expanding on cultural and systemic factors unique to Peru (e.g., healthcare infrastructure, socio-political issues) would enhance the relevance. • Literature Gap: While the introduction does well to outline the general impact of WV, it could benefit from citing recent studies that cover broader work environments and settings, helping the reader understand the global context of WV. • Suggested Studies for Inclusion: 1. "Mistreatment of nurses by patients and its impact on their caring behaviors: The roles of psychological detachment and supervisor positive gossip" – This paper can contribute to understanding how WV influences caring behaviors in different healthcare systems. 2. "The role of psychological ownership in linking decent work to nurses' vigor at work" – Relevant for highlighting the effect of ownership and decent work conditions, which may influence resilience against WV. 2. Methods • Detailed Explanation of Variables: The manuscript could benefit from a more comprehensive description of the variables, particularly the independent variable (WV). Clarifying the criteria for categorizing different types of WV would strengthen the transparency and reproducibility of the study. • Justification for Using PSM: Although PSM is a strong methodological choice, explaining why it was chosen over other methods (e.g., instrumental variables) would provide clarity. Additionally, detailing the robustness checks for the PSM model would strengthen confidence in the findings. • Ethics: The ethics statement would benefit from a mention of how WV data were anonymized, especially given the sensitive nature of the information. • Limitations in Data Collection: Addressing any limitations in the secondary dataset (e.g., potential biases in the survey questions related to WV) would provide a more balanced perspective. 3. Results • Results Presentation: While the results are comprehensive, adding summary tables to break down the effects of WV on specific outcomes (e.g., depressive symptoms versus work-life balance) would enhance clarity. This is especially useful for readers who may not be familiar with PSM techniques. • Qualitative Insights: Given the complex nature of WV, consider adding qualitative insights or hypothetical case examples. For instance, how does experiencing WV potentially influence a healthcare worker’s intention to quit versus burnout? 4. Discussion • Comparative Analysis: While the discussion addresses global comparisons, it could benefit from a deeper examination of the cultural context in South America and how it influences WV’s prevalence and impact. Additionally, comparing the findings with those from other high-risk professions (e.g., police, education) might provide additional insights. • Causal Implications: Although PSM provides some causal inference, the discussion could further emphasize that cross-sectional designs inherently limit causal claims. • Suggested Studies for Inclusion: 1. "Decent work and ethical ideologies of nurses—A multicenter cross-sectional study" – This paper could reinforce discussions about work-life balance and ethical considerations. 2. "How Decent Work Influences Internal Whistleblowing Intentions in Nurses" – This study can help explore how WV influences not only turnover intentions but also ethical behaviors within the workplace. 5. Limitations and Future Research • Acknowledgment of Cross-Sectional Limitations: Emphasizing the inherent limitations of cross-sectional designs and the inability to establish true causality would strengthen the manuscript’s transparency. • Further Research: Suggesting longitudinal studies to track WV’s effects over time would provide a more robust basis for intervention development. Additionally, exploring qualitative studies to understand the lived experiences of healthcare workers dealing with WV could provide richer insights. 6. Language and Formatting • Language: Several sections of the manuscript would benefit from careful proofreading to enhance readability and eliminate grammatical errors. • Formatting: Consistency in terminology (e.g., “workplace violence” versus “WV”) and uniform formatting of statistical terms (e.g., using “95% CI” uniformly) would improve clarity. Reviewer #2: Peer Review Comments Identifying the causal effect of workplace violence on depressive symptoms, burnout, sleep problems, work-life balance and intention to quit in Peruvian physicians and nurses: a cross-sectional study using propensity score matching Javier A. Flores-Cohaila1 , Brayan Miranda-Chavez2 , Cesar Copaja-Corzo3* Sn Comments The authors attempt to identify the causal effect of workplace violence on depressive symptoms, burnout, sleep problems, work-life balance and intention to quit in Peruvian physicians and nurses: a secondary analysis of the 2016 National Healthcare Satisfaction Survey in Peru was conducted and Poisson regression models adjusting for all covariates were employed . Consider the following comments below in each section. Abstract 1 Title is too long, it should not exceed more than 14 words. Title should be concise, comprehensive, and clear. 2 The abstract provides a clear overview of the study objectives, and key findings, effectively summarizing the research. Consider design, setting, sample, and tools of study in methods. 3 Abstract should not include citations or abbreviations, if possible. Although its not clear what the design and sampling method for the study. 6 The conclusion emphasizes the need for targeted interventions to address work-place violence in healthcare workforce, aligning with the study findings. Consider elaborating on the specific types of interventions that could be effective in eliminate WV. 7 The keywords are relevant and adequately represent the study focus. However, consider adding additional keywords that capture specific healthcare contexts to improve searchability Introduction 8 The introduction needs more elaborations and a comprehensive background, contextualizing the significance of your study variables. Consider briefly discussing study variables as factors influencing, antecedents, consequences and challenges faced by healthcare system. 9 Consider Integration of Theoretical Frameworks: Consider integrating relevant theoretical frameworks or models of work-place violence (e.g. Justice theory, or Frustration aggression theory) into the discussion to provide a theoretical basis for interpreting the findings and guiding future research and interventions. 10 Add briefly paragraph about significance of the study. Materials and Method 11 Consider including more details about the rationale for choosing a secondary analysis of the 2016 National Healthcare Satisfaction Survey in Peru were selected as the study location. Put research questions. 12 Consider sample size determination 13 The data collection tools and procedures are detailed, including the use of the sociodemographic survey. To enhance reproducibility, consider providing references or additional information about the validity and reliability of these instruments. Also, add years of developing and modifying this tool. 14 Ethical considerations, consider providing more details about how confidentiality was maintained during data collection and analysis. Results 15 Ensure that the tables are properly formatted and labeled for easy interpretation Discussion 17 Secondary analysis research should include a discussion of results. Restate the main research questions that guided the analysis then connect results to existing theories or literatures. Show your point of view and results of your study in discussion. Compare with previous researches. 18 Consider exploring potential contextual factors or methodological limitations that may have influenced these results, providing a more understanding of the findings. 19 However, it could benefit from expanding on the practical implications of the findings for healthcare organizations and policymakers in the region. Specifically, discussing specific strategies or interventions that could be implemented to address the identified factors contributing to transition shock would provide actionable insights for stakeholders. References 20 Use Vancouver style for writing references and in text citation in study. Also, consider language editing. Thanks for inviting me as a peer reviewer in this journal. Dr. Noura Mohamed Fadl Lecturer of Nursing Administration Department, Faculty of Nursing, Alexandria University ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). 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