PONE-D-24-14141Choosing the right strategies:An analysis of crisis response strategies
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Reviewer #1: Abstract/ it is important to clarify the methodology of the research.
Introduction/ the authors must indicate more details about the crises types in China
and also which crises are the focus of the current study.
Gap and what makes this study different are not obvious in the introduction.
Literature review/ all universities mentioned in this part should by clarified by
adding the country.
Methodology/ why the authors select 2016.08 to 2023.08? justification needs to be
clarified.
More information about How the authors analyzed data are required.
Also, the two questions mentioned in the method section should be showed.
More details about how the authors conduct the content analysis are essential. The
following reference could be helpful;
Salem, I. E., Elkhwesky, Z., & Ramkissoon, H. (2022). A content analysis for government’s
and hotels’ response to COVID-19 pandemic in Egypt. Tourism and Hospitality Research,
22(1), 42-59.
Findings and discussion/
Tables should be less and summarized in an easy way.
Conclusion/ this part is very poor. So, it is important to divide it into two subtitles;
theoretical contribution and practical implications.
The English language should be revised by a native speaker.
Reviewer #2: More LR needs to be added.
Details of the methodology need to be provided.
The basis of selection and choices in crises needs to be elaborated.
How study can be fruitful to policymakers needs to be added.
Check the referencing style.
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� After anonymizing the names of all the people involved in the crisis, we agreed that
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Regarding revisions required by the reviewer#1:
1.Abstract/ it is important to clarify the methodology of the research.
� Thanks to Dr. Zakaria Elkhwesky for your professional comments. According to your
suggestion, the methodology of the research have been added in the abstract.
2.Introduction/ the authors must indicate more details about the crisis types in China
and also which crises are the focus of the current study. Gap and what makes this
study different are not obvious in the introduction.
� Thanks for your professional comments. Details about the crisis types in China and
crises which are the focus of the current study, also the distinction of this study
have been added to the manuscript. Due to the large amount of content, it is not shown
in this letter. Please review the revised manuscript. We hoped that the revised manuscript
has been improved.
3.Literature review/ all universities mentioned in this part should by clarified by
adding the country.
� Thanks for the reminder. The universities mentioned in the prat of literature review
have been clarified by add the country.
4.Methodology/ why the authors select 2016.08 to 2023.08? justification needs to be
clarified.
� Regarding the reason why we select 2016.08 to 2023.08 as the time range for case
selection, we have added further explanations to the manuscript.
“In this study, representative crises on Chinese social media from 2016.08 to 2023.08
are selected as the research objects, since the notice of “Further Improving Response
Capabilities to Government Affairs Crises in the Work of Openness of Government Affairs”
became a landmark in China's crisis response, which issued in August 2016 by Chinese
government to require clearly that “governments at all levels and their departments
should attach great importance to the response to public opinion crisis in government
affairs and implement the responsibility of response". The release of the notice standardized
the public opinion crisis response and promoted the public opinion crisis response
to become the normalization of the government and various institutions. Since then,
the response to the public opinion crisis in Chinese universities has also begun to
increase gradually. Therefore, this study selected crises between the time when the
notice was released to the end time as the research objects of this study.”
More information about how the authors analyzed data are required.
� Thanks to Dr. Zakaria Elkhwesky for your professional comments. After consideration,
we did find that the section on data analysis in the initial manuscript was short
of description in detail. Therefore, we have made revision in the manuscript. We have
redescribed the process of data analysis in the manuscript. The main additions are
as follows, minor changes were also made to the rest, which are reflected in the manuscript.
“In this study, two researchers participated in coding work. One is a doctoral student
in public opinion crisis, and the other is a staff engaged in the work related to
public opinion crisis response. In the first step, the strategies proposed in SCCT
and references mentioned above are sorted out as the original identified codes and
themes. The Chinese university response documents are coded in sentences, and potential
new strategies that do not fit the predetermined codes are recorded in new codes.
Generating codes requires marking interesting features of the data in a systematic
way. Then, all the codes are collected and sorted, the strategies that fit the definitions
are classified into the predetermined themes, and any potential new themes that do
not fit the predetermined themes are temporarily placed in the miscellaneous category
which is added to account for any incongruous evidence. The researchers investigate
whether the themes have "central organizing concepts”. Researchers generate new themes
and then name and define the new themes based on the central concepts.
For more clarification, it is significant to verify the transferability, dependability
and confirmability of data in qualitative thematic analysis. The concepts of transferability,
dependability and confirmability were thoroughly examined and proved in this study.
Transferability is determined by achieving reference adequacy by archiving the second
half of the dataset until the first half is analyzed, and then comparing the data
in the second half with the first half. Dependability is verified by peer debriefing.
One researcher provides another with detailed notes showing how he came to his findings,
and another researcher provides an external check to ensure that the observations
and interpretations of the data are valid. Confirmability is achieved by researchers
detailing their notes in a systematic way to illustrate the connections between their
data and findings. Through the verification, the coding scheme is basically determined.
In the second step, according to the coding scheme, coders were asked to code all
the response documents sentence by sentence, but the same strategy used repeatedly
in the same crisis was still recorded as once in the final count. To further ensure
the full understanding and consistency of the coding scheme between the two coders,
20% of the documents were conducted preliminary test on request. Before the comprehensive
implementation of the coding, any inconsistencies in coding or new discovered response
strategies are introduced to a third researcher for further discussion until a consensus
was reached.”
Also, the two questions mentioned in the method section should be showed.
� Thank you for your suggestion. The two questions mentioned in the method section
have already been showed in the revised manuscript.
More details about how the authors conduct the content analysis are essential. The
following reference could be helpful; Salem, I. E., Elkhwesky, Z., & Ramkissoon, H.
(2022). A content analysis for government’s and hotels’ response to COVID-19 pandemic
in Egypt. Tourism and Hospitality Research, 22(1), 42-59.
� We read the article in detail. The presentation of the methodology in this article
is outstanding. We have made a lot of modifications to the part of method in the manuscript
after referring to this article. Please check whether there has been any improvement
of the part of method in the revised manuscript. Thank you for your comments and your
reference, which has been an important guide for us.
5.Findings and discussion/ Tables should be less and summarized in an easy way.
� Thank you for your suggestion. In the manuscript, first, we deleted Table 3, the
text in the manuscript is sufficient to describe the content in this table. Second,
we removed Table 4 to present it by Fig 2. which is more aesthetically pleasing and
minimalist. Also, we deleted Table 5 and summarized it in a simple way. Finally, we
found that the contents of 4.4 and 4.5 can be combined, and we have made some adjustments
to the structure of the conclusions of these two parts, hoping that the revised manuscript
will be better.
6.Conclusion/ this part is very poor. So, it is important to divide it into two subtitles:
theoretical contribution and practical implications.
� Thank you for your valuable advice. We read the conclusion part of the reference
“Salem, I. E., Elkhwesky, Z., & Ramkissoon, H. (2022). A content analysis for government’s
and hotels’ response to COVID-19 pandemic in Egypt. Tourism and Hospitality Research,
22(1), 42-59”in detail and studied the conclusion structure of the reference. We have
rewritten the conclusion by divide it into two subtitles: theoretical implications
and practical implications. Due to the large amount of content, it is not shown in
this letter. Please review the revised manuscript. We hoped that the revised manuscript
has been improved.
7.The English language should be revised by a native speaker.
� Thanks to Dr. Zakaria Elkhwesky for your advice. We will review the language of this
article and seek help from our peers.
Regarding revisions required by the reviewer#2:
1. More LR needs to be added.
� Thanks for your professional comments. The manuscript has been extensively revised
and the number of references has increased from 39 to 58.
2.Details of the methodology need to be provided.
� Thank you for your valuable advice. We did find that the section on data analysis
in the initial manuscript was short of description in detail. Therefore, we have made
revision in the manuscript. We redescribe the process in qualitative thematic analysis
of RQ1. The description of the content analysis of RQ2 is also supplemented. Due to
the large amount of content, it is not shown in this letter. Please review the revised
manuscript. We hoped that the revised manuscript has been improved.
3.The basis of selection and choices in crises needs to be elaborated.
� Thank you for your suggestion. In this study, the basis of selection and choices
in crises are constituted by 3 reasons as we mentioned in the part of data collection
of the manuscript. First, the crisis has been on the list of hot topics on Sina Weibo,
which proves that the crisis is with media attention and public discussion. Second,
the crisis must be in the case-base of the National University Online Public Opinion
Monitoring Center, this case-base is a collection of all the crises with topic sensitivity
and event impact. Third, the public discussion of the crises which we selected in
this study decreased significantly and faded within a week and no secondary public
opinion crisis occurred after the issuance of the response document. We considered
the response documents of Chinese universities in these crises to be initially effective
in this study. In future studies, we will further improve the research by empirically
analyzing the effectiveness of responses through public reaction.
4.How study can be fruitful to policymakers needs to be added.
� Thank you for your suggestion. Regarding how study can be fruitful to policymakers,
we have rewritten the part of conclusion. Especially in the part of practical implication,
we added some content, hoping to improve the manuscript.
“This study has useful implications for the practitioners and policymakers of crisis
response in Chinese universities. The results of this study not only provide strategies
options for the practitioners and policymakers of crisis response in Chinese universities,
but more importantly, according to the demand of SCCT, a link between crisis situations
and crisis response strategies should be established.”
5.Check the referencing style.
� Thanks for reminding. We have re-checked the referencing style. We are Sorry for
our oversight.
Thanks again to all the editors and reviewers for your professional suggestions on
the revision of this manuscript. We hope that our revision of the manuscript can get
your approval. If there are any suggestions still worth making, we would appreciate
your reminder and your patience. We'll do everything we can to make the manuscript
the best it can be.
PONE-D-24-14141R1Choosing the right strategies:An analysis of crisis response strategies
in Chinese universitiesPLOS ONE
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The revised introductions need to be rephrased. It should be in the form of academic
writing, not as a normal conversation.
Elaborate more on the technique used for the content analysis.
Refer to other seminal work on content and thematic analysis.
e.g.,
Liñán, F., & Fayolle, A. (2015). A systematic literature review on entrepreneurial
intentions: citation, thematic analyses, and research agenda. International entrepreneurship
and management journal, 11, 907-933.
Kim, H., & So, K. K. F. (2022). Two decades of customer experience research in hospitality
and tourism: A bibliometric analysis and thematic content analysis. International
Journal of Hospitality Management, 100, 103082.
Vaismoradi, M., Turunen, H., & Bondas, T. (2013). Content analysis and thematic analysis:
Implications for conducting a qualitative descriptive study. Nursing & health sciences,
15(3), 398-405.
Thompson, J. (2022). A guide to abductive thematic analysis.
Recheck referencing style. It is better if APA style is used as per the guidelines.
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We sincerely thank you for the time and effort you spent providing professional comments
on our articles. As you are concerned, there are still several issues that need to
be addressed. We have carefully reconsidered these problems and revised them one by
one according to your suggestions. We sincerely hope that the revision of this manuscript
can get your approval.
Regarding revisions required by the editor:
1.Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If
you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing
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� Thanks to the editor for the reminder. We re-examined the references individually
to confirm that they had not been retracted. In addition, we have added several references
during the revision of the manuscript. The added references are listed below:
[1] Leibold J. Blogging alone: China, the internet, and the democratic illusion? The
Journal of Asian Studies. 2011;70 (4):1023–1041.
[2] Weng SH. Participation-response model: An analytical framework of the government
response to internet political participation for decision-making. Journal of Public
Administration. 2014;7(05):109-130+191.
[3] Sun LM. The rise of civil rights consciousness: A largely internet-based observation.
Journal of the Central Institute of Socialism. 2010;(03):99-103.
[55] Vaismoradi M, Turunen H, Bondas T. Content analysis and thematic analysis: Implications
for conducting a qualitative descriptive study. Nursing and Health Science. 2013;15,398-405.
[56] Hayes AF, Krippendorff K. Answering the call for a standard reliability measure
for coding data. Communication Methods and Measures. 2007; 1:77-89.
Also, we have double-checked the references format and carefully revised it to ensure
that they have met the journal's requirements for the Vancouver style.
Regarding revisions required by the reviewer #2:
1.The revisions should be highlighted and put as the main text, not after the original
manuscript. In text, citations should be given rather than the numbers.
� Thank to the reviewer for the reminder. For the main parts of the revision, we have
highlighted it in green font in the main text. We have carefully considered and revised
the article according to your valuable suggestions. In addition, citations have been
modified as required by the journal and your suggestion, also we highlighted the changes
to citation in the article for your review. We are sorry for our carelessness and
thank you again for your reminder.
2.The revised introductions need to be rephrased. It should be in the form of academic
writing, not as a normal conversation.
� Thanks for your professional comments. We have reconsidered and rewritten the part
of introduction. The revised introduction is more academic than introductory. We deleted
the simple introduction of the type of public opinion crisis on the internet in China,
and strengthened the explanation of why the internet has become the most important
channel for Chinese citizens to express their opinions and demands:
“Unlike some Western developed countries, they have many offline institutionalized
channels for citizen participation such as public hearings and citizens’ assemblies
in addition to online participation. In China, there is still a contradiction between
the narrow channels for citizen participation and the enthusiasm of modern citizens
for political participation. Therefore, the convenience of social media has made it
the most convenient way for Chinese citizens to express opinions and seek solutions
to problems from the government. The expression of opinions and demands through online
participation has become the most active part of Chinese citizens in the public sphere
of the internet.”
Your valuable suggestion helps to improve the quality of our article, and we hope
the revision can get your approval.
3.Elaborate more on the technique used for the content analysis.
� Thanks to reviewer for your professional advice. After re-examination, we did find
that the description of the content analysis section was not detailed enough, and
we omitted many details during the writing process, which were not shown in the article.
We have re-described this part in detail, hoping to explain the process of content
analysis clearly. The main modifications are as follows:
“Content analysis is one of the most important research techniques in social sciences
to analyze data with a specific context. Thus, when using content analysis, the researchers
should have a broader understanding of the context. Content analysis provides a systematic
and objective means to make valid inferences from verbal, visual, or written data
to describe and quantify specific phenomena in a conceptual form. There are three
main steps in content analysis: (a)obtaining the sense of the whole data, selecting
the unit of analysis, (b)creating categories and open coding, (c)reporting the analysis
process and the results through conceptual system.
In this section, taking a case as a unit, the two coders coded independently to divide
Chinese universities crises into three clusters after fully understanding the relevant
concepts of crisis classification based on SCCT and the research requirements of classification
category. The victim cluster, the accident cluster and the intentional cluster are
the three first-level codes of this coding process. First, 20 cases were randomly
selected for independent coding. After coding, consistency judgment is carried out.
A reliability of 0.863 is achieved using Krippendorf’s alpha, which is higher than
the standard of 0.7 and shows that two coders have a high degree of agreement in understanding
data, context, and coding concepts in the content analysis. Also, the sample size
of preliminary test meets the requirement of 10%-20% of the total samples. All remaining
disagreements were completely discussed prior to the next implementation of coding
until a consensus was reached. In the second round, 50 cases were randomly selected
from the remaining cases for independent coding. The coding with inconsistent results
were discussed prior to the next implementation of coding until a consensus was reached.
In the third round, the remaining 77 cases were coded independently, and the coding
with inconsistent results were discussed until a consensus was reached. The discussion
after each round of coding makes the next round of coding less disagreement, and the
conceptual system of crisis classification of Chinese universities are basically formed,
which provides clues for Chinese universities to classify the crisis clusters quickly
and reliably. After three rounds of coding, 147 cases were finally classified by the
degree of responsibility.”
As Vaismoradi M, Turunen H and Bondas T (2013) proposed, “the creativity of the researcher
for presenting the result in terms of conceptual system is encouraged in the content
analysis”. Actually, in the coding process of content analysis, the researchers gradually
formed a conceptual framework for crisis classification of Chinese universities, and
finally divided 147 cases into three clusters according to this conceptual system.
The conceptual system further refines the brief definition of crisis cluster classification
of Chinese universities based on theoretical framework of SCCT. The specific content
has been added to “4.3 Crisis cluster in Chinese universities”. The summary is as
follows for the your review:
“According to the degree of responsibility attribution, the crises in Chinese universities
can be divided into three clusters: (1) the victim cluster has very weak attributions
of crisis responsibility and mild reputational threat. In the victim cluster, the
university is also a victim of the crisis. These crises include the following situation:
rumor incidents, natural disasters and unexpected accidents which damaged the reputation
of universities; (2) the accidental cluster has minimal attributions of crisis responsibility
and moderate reputational threat. In the accidental cluster, the university actions
leading to the crisis are unintentional without causing substantial harm or the university
is blamed for the leadership responsibility of individual behavior that have a huge
impact. (3) the intentional cluster has very strong attributions of crisis responsibility
and severe reputational threat. In the intentional cluster, the university knowingly
placed people at risk, took inappropriate actions or violated a law or regulation.
These crises include the following situation: improper management of laboratory or
security resulting in death or injury, the universities violate the rules of academic
fairness and examination fairness which makes a huge impact and even causes damage
to the credibility of the entire education system.”
4.Refer to other seminal work on content and thematic analysis.
e.g.,
Liñán, F., & Fayolle, A. (2015). A systematic literature review on entrepreneurial
intentions: citation, thematic analyses, and research agenda. International entrepreneurship
and management journal, 11, 907-933.
Kim, H., & So, K. K. F. (2022). Two decades of customer experience research in hospitality
and tourism: A bibliometric analysis and thematic content analysis. International
Journal of Hospitality Management, 100, 103082.
Vaismoradi, M., Turunen, H., & Bondas, T. (2013). Content analysis and thematic analysis:
Implications for conducting a qualitative descriptive study. Nursing & health sciences,
15(3), 398-405.
Thompson, J. (2022). A guide to abductive thematic analysis.
� Thanks to reviewer for your professional support and guidance. We spent a lot of
time reading these references recommended by reviewer in detail and got a deeper understanding
of content analysis and thematic analysis. These articles provide a detailed introduction
to content analysis and thematic analysis. Based on these seminal literatures on the
two methods, first, we re-examined the thematic analysis process in our article to
ensure its accuracy and standardization. Second, we have also re-examined the content
analysis process in our article and supplementary descriptions of the omitted details
are provided, as you suggested. The references you recommended will also help us maintain
academic rigor and normativity in implementing content analysis and thematic analysis
in our research in the future. Thank you again for your professional advice.
5.Recheck referencing style. It is better if APA style is used as per the guidelines.
� Thank you for your suggestion. We reviewed again the reference requirements on the
journal page. According to the journal requirements, the Vancouver style should be
use: “PLOS uses the reference style outlined by the International Committee of Medical
Journal Editors (ICMJE), also referred to as the ‘Vancouver’ style”. Therefore, we
have not changed the style in this revision. However, in the process of re-checking,
we confirmed that there were many formatting errors, and we have revised them one
by one. Thanks again for the reviewer's reminder.
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in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English, we have asked for help
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We have carefully revised the manuscript according to your suggestions and hope that
our revision can get your approval. If there are any suggestions still worth making,
we would appreciate your reminder and your patience. We promise that we will do everything
we can to make the manuscript the best it can be.
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be explicitly highlighted as an extension of SCCT.
The introduction successfully sets the context but includes some verbose sections.The
discussion of the public’s enthusiasm for political participation can be streamlined
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1. ROWS 23-25, needs more clarification by adding some values that support the topic.
Also, you should highlight the most adopted strategies by universities (maximum no.
of response).
2. ROWS 31-36, needs to be reformulated.
3. Table 1, case No. 9, Add an explanation to this case that shows its strength.
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references during the revision of the manuscript. The deleted references are listed
below:
[3] Leibold J. Blogging alone: China, the internet, and the democratic illusion? The
Journal of Asian Studies. 2011;70 (4):1023–1041.
[4] Weng SH. Participation-response model: An analytical framework of the government
response to internet political participation for decision-making. Journal of Public
Administration. 2014;7(05):109-130+191.
[5] Sun LM. The rise of civil rights consciousness: A largely internet-based observation.
Journal of the Central Institute of Socialism. 2010;(03):99-103.
Regarding revisions required by the reviewer #2:
1.The abstract is informative but could better emphasize the study's practical implications
and theoretical contributions. The identification of new strategies should be explicitly
highlighted as an extension of SCCT.
� Firstly, we would like to express our sincere gratitude to the reviewer for acknowledging
and recognizing our work. Secondly, based on your comments, we have revised the abstract
to emphasize the theoretical contributions and practical significance of the research,
as well as to highlight that the new strategy is an extension of SCCT. The main modifications
of abstract are as follows:
“The findings revealed that Chinese universities have adopted 17 new strategies beyond
the strategies proposed by SCCT, highlighting a discrepancy between the theoretical
ground of the theory and the application of strategies in real-life crisis response
of Chinese universities. Furthermore, the results revealed the applicable strategies
for different crisis clusters, which contributed to construct the framework of crisis
response strategies for Chinese universities in different situations. This study expanded
SCCT theoretically by enriching the crisis response strategies while practically improving
the applicability of SCCT in Chinese universities. The findings provided guiding significance
to the crisis response for Chinese universities in different crisis situations, also
its innovative strategies provided empirical evidence for other organizations in different
cultural contexts in crisis response.”
2.The introduction successfully sets the context but includes some verbose sections.
The discussion of the public’s enthusiasm for political participation can be streamlined
to maintain focus on crisis response.
� Thanks to reviewer for your acknowledgment and suggestions. We have removed the lengthy
discussion on public enthusiasm for political participation and emphasized the focus
on crisis response. Your professional advice has made the introduction more concise
and clearer. The main modifications of introduction are as follows:
Firstly, we deleted the verbose sections of“the internet has become the most important
channel for Chinese citizens to express their opinions and demands. Unlike some Western
developed countries, they have many offline institutionalized channels for citizen
participation such as public hearings and citizens’ assemblies in addition to online
participation. In China, there is still a contradiction between the narrow channels
for citizen participation and the enthusiasm of modern citizens for political participation.
Therefore, the convenience of social media has made it the most convenient way for
Chinese citizens to express opinions and seek solutions to problems from the government.
The expression of opinions and demands through online participation has become the
most active part of Chinese citizens in the public sphere of the internet”.
Secondly, we have redescribed the first half of the introduction. The revised introduction
maintain focus on crisis response as you suggested:
“With the development of social media in China, the Chinese public has increasingly
gained the right to publish information and opinions. Public's awareness of political
participation has been continuously enhanced, and the active degree of public speech
and enthusiasm for political participation have reached an unprecedented height. Public
opinion crises on social media have frequently occurred in China. In recent years,
numerous crises in the fields of public health, food safety, medical malpractice,
government management, product quality, security incidents, corporate image have aroused
widespread public concern and discussion. The occurrence of public opinion crisis
makes the relevant responsible parties under immense pressure to crises response.
When public opinion crises occur, if the government, institutions, and enterprises
fail to respond reasonably, it will cause great harm to their own image, lead to public
opinion crises, and reduce credibility. Obviously, public opinion crisis response
has become an important research topic at present.
Academics have shown great interest in research of these public opinion crises in
China, and the relevant researches mainly focus on three points. First, researchers
deeply discussed the interaction between government crisis management and public opinion,
and analyzed the influence of public opinion on government management strategies and
how the government effectively responds to these public opinions. Second, some researchers
are committed to revealing the evolution law of public opinion, providing valuable
insights for formulating effective response strategies through big data and computer
models. Third, many researchers have conducted research on how enterprises and brands
respond to negative public opinions on Chinese social media during crises. The research
on public opinion crisis and crisis response is very important, which not only has
profound theoretical value, but also shows its indispensable importance in reality.”
3.The gap in literature could be more concisely articulated to underline the necessity
of this research.
� Thanks to reviewer for your professional advice. According to your advice, we redescribed
the gap of literature and underlined the necessity of this research.
Firstly, we deleted the verbose sections of “There are quite few studies taking Chinese
universities as the research object. The research on response strategies in China
mainly focuses on government administrative departments, enterprises, and brands.
Also, most of the research on crisis response in Chinese universities is from a macro
perspective and there are short of empirical research.”
Secondly, it was concisely expressed as “However, despite the prevalence of crises
in Chinese universities, there is limited research on how to respond. In particular,
empirical studies on crisis response in Chinese universities, are almost nonexistent”.
Also, we further underlined the necessity of this research that “the findings of this
study provide a comprehensive and definitive answer to the question that has yet to
be addressed in current research: what strategies are used in the public opinion crisis
response in Chinese universities and what strategies are applicable to different types
of crises”.
4.The SCCT framework is adequately explained, but the integration of new strategies
into the framework appears to be forced.
� Regarding your concern that the integration of the new strategies into this framework
appears to be forced, we understand your perspective. Please allow us to explain in
detail. In fact, in many studies on crisis response strategies based on the Situational
Crisis Communication Theory (SCCT), researchers often incorporate new strategies into
the SCCT framework. Take several articles mentioned in the literature review section
of this study as examples. In fact, the integration of new strategies into the SCCT
framework in this study is based on the following research findings.
Castonguay and Lowes (2022) [39] conducted a thematic analysis of the National Football
League's (NFL) response to the concussion crisis and found that the NFL employed some
new strategies, among which they integrated the strategy of “organizational change”
into the “rebuild” strategy within the SCCT framework.
Kim and Liu (2012) [37] applied SCCT to investigate how 13 corporate and government
organizations responded to the first phase of the 2009 flu pandemic through a quantitative
content analysis, and expanded SCCT's response strategy options of “enhancing” and
“transferring” and integrates them to a new theme called "other strategy”.
Lai and Tang (2018) [38] discovered six new strategies not mentioned by SCCT by analyzing
64 cases of Chinese public opinion crisis. They integrated the new strategies of “gratitude”,
“accountability”, “punishment”, and “explanation” into the “primary strategies” and
incorporated the new strategies of “information disclosure” and “attitude indication”
into the “secondary strategies” of the SCCT framework.
Liu (2010) [35] applied SCCT to identify how organizations and individuals can effectively
respond to racially charged crises through a content analysis of 104 response documents
and 144 newspaper articles. He expanded SCCT by identifying several strategies that
organizations and individuals used to respond to racially charged crises that were
currently not included in the theory. In his study, the new strategy of “ignore” was
integrated into the “deny” strategy within the SCCT framework, the new strategy of
“separation” was integrated into the “diminish” strategy, and the new strategy of
“transcendence” was integrated into the “rebuild” strategy. Additionally, he introduced
a new theme called “reinforce” and incorporated a new strategy called “endorsement”
into it (as shown in the figure below).
5.Coder bias, or cultural context influencing the interpretation of data, is not discussed
adequately. The rationale for excluding third-party narratives is valid but should
be elaborated with respect to the exclusion of stakeholder perceptions.
� Thank you for your valuable suggestion. As pointed out by reviewer, coder bias, which
refers to the influence of cultural context on data interpretation, does indeed exist.
While this manuscript mentions it, the discussion is not sufficient. Therefore, we
have made some revisions to address this issue:
“due to the influence of cultural context on the interpretation of data, it is worth
noting that although the explanations and the example sentence for each strategy in
this study were translated into English, researchers actually used Chinese during
the analysis, because analysis in the original language of the document can fully
reveal the use of strategies in the particular context, so as to ensure the accuracy
and effectiveness of the analysis results.”
Besides, regarding your comment, "the rationale for excluding third-party narratives
is valid but should be elaborated with respect to the exclusion of stakeholder perceptions,"
we have made the following modifications accordingly.
“As the purpose of this research is to determine how the Chinese universities communicated
about crises in their external communications, news articles or interviews of school
staff were excluded to avoid the subjectivity of a third party in the reporting and
framing of the universities’ responses. All documentary evidence is officially released
by universities. Meanwhile, due to stakeholders perceptions may be influenced by their
own interests, and potential emotional factors and biases towards the organization,
in order to focus on the response strategies of Chinese universities and maintain
the objectivity of the research, the influence of stakeholders perceptions are also
excluded in this study.”
6.The findings are repetitive in parts. The description of strategies used in each
crisis cluster could be condensed without losing essential details.
� Thank you for your suggestion. Upon your reminder, we have reviewed the findings
section of the article again and found that there are indeed repetitive parts, especially
in section 4.4. Therefore, we have carefully revised this section, and the specific
revisions are as follows:
Firstly, we deleted the redundant parts: “Based on the research above, this study
provides a summary of recommendations for the use of crisis response strategies in
Chinese universities. For the crises of victim cluster, it is applicable to use the
strategies of attack the accuser, denial, scapegoat, endorsement, appeal, valued highly
gratitude and statement. For the crises of accident cluster, the strategies of excuse,
transference, separation, explanation, reminder, warning, concern, condolence and
gratitude are the reasonable choice in response. For the crises of intentional cluster,
the strategies of compensation, apology, commitment, remedy, accountability, punishment,
endorsement, concern and condolence are suitable in this situation. The study also
reveals that the strategies of investigation and information disclosure can be applied
to any situation in the public opinion crisis response in Chinese universities.”
Secondly, we have condensed the description of the strategies used in each crisis
cluster without losing essential details. We compress the length by using more concise
expressions like “Therefore, it is applicable to use these strategies for the crises
of Chinese universities in the victim cluster” while preserving the original meaning.
Due to the extensive length of the modifications, specific changes have been marked
in different colored fonts in the manuscript. We kindly request the reviewer to review
the manuscript and hope that the revised findings will meet your satisfaction.
7.The discussion section does not sufficiently explore the implications of the findings
for global applications of SCCT.
� Thank you to the reviewer for your professional and meticulous comments. Based on
your suggestions, we have supplemented information regarding the impact of our research
findings on the global application of SCCT. Due to the excessive length, only the
added contents are shown in this response letter. The specific additions are as follows:
“This study not only deepens the understanding of crisis response strategies in Chinese
universities but also makes significant contributions to the application and development
of SCCT globally. This study enriches and expands the theoretical framework of SCCT.
Through empirical research in the specific context of Chinese universities, it not
only validates the basic framework of SCCT, comprehensively explores the strategies
used by Chinese universities in crisis response but also further refines the classification
of crises and the strategies that should be adopted for different crisis types.
This study facilitates a more precise application a
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Reviewer #2: The abstract provides a good summary. State explicitly how university
administrators can use these findings in real crisis situations. Provide a sentence
on how universities can incorporate these new strategies into their crisis response
plans.
The paper justifies excluding third-party narratives, but it does not fully address
why stakeholder perceptions were not considered. Since crisis communication is about
perception management, future research should examine how students, faculty, and the
public perceive these responses.
The newly identified strategies are mapped onto existing SCCT categories, but some
seem to be stand-alone approaches rather than fitting neatly into SCCT. Instead of
force-fitting into SCCT, consider discussing how these strategies might complement
or challenge the existing framework.
Condense the discussion of response strategies per crisis cluster to avoid redundancy.
Table 5 requires restructuring for clarity. Consider sentence variation to improve
readability.
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� Thanks to the editor for the reminder. We re-examined the references individually
to confirm that they had not been retracted. Furthermore, as this is a minor revision
with limited changes, only one reference was removed during the revision process:
[59]Siomkos GJ, Kurzbard G. The hidden crisis in product harm crisis management. European
Journal of Marketing. 1994;28(2),30-41.
Regarding revisions required by the reviewer #2:
1. The abstract provides a good summary. State explicitly how university administrators
can use these findings in real crisis situations. Provide a sentence on how universities
can incorporate these new strategies into their crisis response plans.
� Firstly, we would like to express our sincere gratitude to the reviewer for acknowledging
and recognizing our work. The findings of this study can indeed enable university
administrators to apply these new strategies in crisis response, which can be incorporated
into their crisis response plans. Therefore, based on your suggestion, we have added
a sentence in the abstract to convey this meaning. The revised sentence is as follows:
“The findings provided guiding significance for Chinese universities administrators
in developing and implementing effective crisis response strategies in real-life crisis
situations, enabling them to adjust and optimize their plans by incorporating innovative
strategies to enhance the effectiveness of responses.”
� In addition, we want to explain to you that, for your convenience during the review
process, we originally intended to highlight the revisions made. However, according
to the journal editor's instruction, the main manuscript file should not contain any
tracked changes or highlighting, as this will be used in the production process if
the manuscript is accepted. Therefore, we will endeavor to explain all the revisions
in the response letter instead.
2. The paper justifies excluding third-party narratives, but it does not fully address
why stakeholder perceptions were not considered. Since crisis communication is about
perception management, future research should examine how students, faculty, and the
public perceive these responses.
� Thank you for your comment. The reviewers have provided insightful observations on
the core issues of this study. Indeed, we are well aware that the essence of crisis
communication goes beyond the unilateral strategic choices of information issuers.
Crisis response is a two-way process of perception management, which hinges on whether
stakeholders (students, faculty, the public, etc.) truly receive, understand, and
accept these strategies. There may be slight deviations between official strategies
and stakeholders' perceptions. More importantly, as we have stated in the article,
due to the fact that stakeholders' perceptions may be influenced by their own interests,
as well as potential emotional factors and biases towards the organization, it is
not conducive to maintaining the objectivity of this study.
However, the exclusion of third-party narratives and even stakeholder perspectives
in this study is not in opposition to the reviewers' viewpoints, rather, it reflects
a different emphasis in research focus. This study focuses on the coding of institutionalized
strategies in universities' official responses, and reveals what response strategies
Chinese universities choose under the institutional logic of organizational legitimacy
and policy compliance when responding to crises. This methodological design does not
neglect stakeholders' perceptions but rather delineated them as distinct phases, firstly,
we focused on analyzing which strategies the university as the responding entity has
employed in the official documents. In the future, based on your suggestions, the
stakeholders’ perceptions will be further taken into consideration, representing another
independent analytical layer that requires different methodological approaches.
The strategies identified in this study initially demonstrate the strategies applied
by universities as response entities in their crisis responses. Official documents,
as authoritative sources of institutional intent, enable us to track how universities
make strategic choices within recognized discourse frameworks in response to crises.
By focusing on universities' official institutional response strategies, it is crucial
for identifying systematic patterns rather than individual cases. The research findings
can serve as a baseline framework, against which future related studies can measure
the degree of alignment or inconsistency in cognitive outcomes. This study does not
deny the importance of perception management but rather lays the foundation for the
future research.
According to your comments, we have made two changes to the article, one is ROW251-261
about the description of excluding third-party narratives and stakeholder perceptions,
and the other is ROW609-616 about future research direction at the end of the article.
“As the purpose of this research is to determine how the Chinese universities communicated
about crises in their external communications, news articles or interviews of school
staff were excluded to avoid the subjectivity of a third party in the reporting and
framing of the universities’ responses. All documentary evidence is officially released
by universities. Meanwhile, due to stakeholders perceptions may be influenced by their
own interests, and potential emotional factors and biases towards the organization,
in order to focus on the coding of institutionalized strategies in universities' official
responses, and reveal what response strategies Chinese universities choose under the
institutional logic of organizational legitimacy and policy compliance when responding
to crises, while maintaining the objectivity of the research, the influence of stakeholders
perceptions are also excluded in this study.”
“Furthermore, the strategies identified in this study initially demonstrate the strategies
applied by universities as response entities in their crisis responses. However, the
essence of crisis communication goes beyond the unilateral strategic choices of information
issuers. Crisis response is a two-way process of perception management, which hinges
on whether stakeholders (students, faculty, the public, etc.) truly receive, understand,
and accept these strategies. In the future, the stakeholders’ perceptions will be
further taken into consideration, the findings of this research can serve as a baseline
framework, against which future related studies can measure the degree of alignment
or inconsistency in cognitive outcomes.”
3. The newly identified strategies are mapped onto existing SCCT categories, but some
seem to be stand-alone approaches rather than fitting neatly into SCCT. Instead of
force-fitting into SCCT, consider discussing how these strategies might complement
or challenge the existing framework.
� We sincerely appreciate the insightful observations made by the reviewers regarding
the relationship between our research findings and the SCCT framework. We believe
that the reviewers' opinions might suggest that mapping the new strategies onto the
existing framework of SCCT could potentially obscure its unique implications, especially
in specific cultural contexts, thereby missing opportunities to challenge or expand
the theory. We consider your opinion to be highly innovative and it has greatly inspired
and enlightened us. However, after our in-depth discussion, we believe that making
further changes to the core framework of this study in the fourth round of minor revision
seems a little bit risky. Moreover, incorporating the newly discovered strategies
into the SCCT framework is not entirely without basis. This is based on the previous
research results of other scholars (as we mentioned in the previous response letter
and the article), and secondly, our conclusion is reached through the consensus of
multiple rounds of coding and discussions by the coders. We admit that the current
framework is not perfect, and it is not immutable either, but if the framework is
modified, it might require the coders to have a deeper discussion and potentially
overturn and rewrite the main part of this article. Nevertheless, your suggestions
have greatly inspired us. We will deeply reflect on your suggestions and hope to achieve
further innovation in subsequent research. Thank you for your professional advice
and we hope that you can accept and understand our explanation for this matter.
4. Condense the discussion of response strategies per crisis cluster to avoid redundancy.
� Thanks to the reviewer's suggestion. According to your suggestion, firstly, we reorganize
the discourse of the discussion about applicable response strategies for different
crisis clusters in section 4.4 by streamlining the expression without reducing the
content, and consider the sentence changes to enhance readability. Secondly, we simplified
and modified the redundant content in the conclusion paragraph of section 4.4, that
is, the last paragraph of section 4.4. The revised contents are as follows:
“4.4 Applicable response strategies for different crisis clusters
SCCT emphasizes the adaptation of crisis response strategies to different situations.
This study conducts a comparative analysis of the use of crisis response strategies
in different situations. As Fig 2 shows, in the intentional cluster, the primary strategy
of rebuild, including compensation, apology, commitment, and remedy, are most frequently
employed. Chinese universities tend to use accommodative strategies when responsibility
attribution is strong. Accountability and punishment strategies are also common, reflecting
a similar accommodative approach. Endorsement, concern, and condolence are the most
used secondary strategies.
For the accident cluster, the strategy of diminish, including excuse, transference,
and separation are prevalent. These strategies are optimal in situations with moderate
responsibility attribution. Additionally, explanation is a key primary strategy, and
reminder and warning are common secondary strategies which are well-suited to crises
in the accident cluster.
In the victim cluster, the primary strategy of deny, which includes attack the accuser,
denial, and scapegoat, are widely used. Although the public might not hold the universities
directly responsible for the crisis in this situation, restoring public trust depends
on the universities’ response. Deny is effective in stabilizing public emotions with
minimal cost in situations with weak responsibility attribution. Appeal, valued highly,
gratitude, and statement are secondary strategies frequently employed. Notably, investigation
and information disclosure strategies were applicable across all crisis situations.
Therefore, the results of this study prove that the actual situation of crisis response
in Chinese universities is consistent with the concept of SCCT, that is, the degree
of accommodation of applicable strategies increases with the degree of responsibility.
The conclusion of “the rebuild strategies are the safest crisis response for the reason
of rebuild strategies addressing victims well” is not universally applicable, because
using overly accommodating strategies in the inappropriate situations makes the cost
higher to the organization but may not see any increased yield in reputation protection.
Therefore, the effectiveness of the response to the crisis is not due to the unlimited
accommodative response strategy, but to the adaptation of the response strategy to
the category of the crisis. The results of this study provide a summary of recommendations
for the use of crisis response strategies in Chinese universities.”
5. Table 5 requires restructuring for clarity. Consider sentence variation to improve
readability.
� Thanks to reviewer for your professional advice. Actually, during the first round
of revision, Reviewer #1 deemed there to be too many tables in the manuscript and
suggested removing some of them, while describing the contents of the tables in simple
text without losing any details. Therefore, in the first round of revision, we have
already removed Table 5 and summarized it in a simple way. We are not yet certain
if a minor misunderstanding within the review system has led to a discrepancy in information.
To address this, we have carefully examined the revised manuscript we submitted, ensuring
that there is no Table 5 included. We have also checked the files in the submission
system and confirmed that Table 5 is not present. However, we have modified the relevant
content to improve readability by increasing sentence variability. See the answer
in comment 4 for details. We remain grateful for your review of our manuscript, and
we will make every effort to address any other revisable comments.
We sincerely thank you again for your meticulous review of our research and your valuable
comments. Your feedback is of great importance to us and has prompted us to make corresponding
revisions and improvements to the paper. We are confident that these enhancements
have enhanced the quality and clarity of the paper. We sincerely hope that after careful
revisions, the manuscript will meet your approval and gain the opportunity for publication.
Thank you once again for your hard work and professional guidance.
Choosing the right strategies:An analysis of crisis response strategies in Chinese
universities
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